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I hope, you and your family are OK, Mrsgnomie, please let us know, we really are worried. As for the story, I have to give up, with a heavy heart, but still. I just can't deal with more disappointment in my life at the moment, sorry... My OCD is making me crazy, 😢

It seems, Adrian is really sensitive and empathic. I know less than nothing about the sub/dom lifestyle, if that's what this is about, it just looks like adrian would be a perfect dom and Edward is training him to be (the) one. But of course, I'm just babbling and I'm sure the story is probably about something completely different. Just wanted to say, I love the story. And they are in love, even if they won't admit it.

Toby is a great spy, going through walls and stuff. Maybe his ghost-amnesia can be cured, he would be a great source of information. And of course I wonder about that too: Poor Mason, falling in love... I love your writing, no matter what you write about, I get "transported" into the story, lost in different worlds

So did I. There was probably a vulcano eruption on Hawaii, or maybe a tsunami, they all perished.

We should take a guess?! Everyone you introduce is more and more suspect. My guess is, they are all involved, except Mason. Maybe... I hope.

And of course

Yep, my bet was on Chris too. But the way you write them, BTW your writting is brilliant as always, all /any of them, Eddy, Chris and Ryan have a lot of potential to being douchey. And of course you of all people know, who ist the rotten egg.

MrsGnomie, are you OK? Nash & Penn are probably not behaving in Hawaii

I read the story somwhere else for the 1st time, this is my second time around, sorry I didn't leave any comments. The story is so well written, it's just like knowing the boys (and girls), being with them in person. Thank you so much for sharing

Ok, I'm with you, signing off 👻

She's clever, I'm going with the reverse psychology. I was thinking about ghosting, but I'm not strong enough for shit like that #desperateforupdate

Yes, because he really is frank.

Dad's name is propbably Cash (short for Cashville) and he doesn't want us to know. Maybe Tom would be nice, he sounds like a real Tomcat to me. Take your time Mrsgnomie, Nash has to prepare for a marathon and Penn is helping with diapers, so they need some time off

Oh, please, DO go there! #mylifeissoboringIevenreadinstructionmanuals

Nash & Penn are old geezers by now, and Leeeland wears suspenders and a combover

Let's wait together

I woke up in the morning excited, convinced there will be a new chapter... Now I'm just sad. I guess it must be intoxicating to have such power over the readers😁

Yep, Nash needs to be single to digest everything. And now there will probably be some talk ing and then courtship &dating and because Nash doesn't believe in sex before marriage, there will be some nice wedding and honeymoon and a wedding cake, pretty please!

Yes, it was Cam's business, but Penn could have just told Nash one sentence: Cam pregnant, not mine. Nothing more. But of course there would be no drama, which mrsgnomie uses to make us mad

Yep, exactly. I could never walk away as frustrated as I am sometimes. It just shows how good the writing is if it can capture your imagination so much. I have to admit, my first thouthgt when I woke up this morning was did those two idiots managed to talk or not.

This was a sad chapter to read. Penn is really immature, so self-absorbed, after getting the toy he always wanted, he forgets that this "toy" has a history of being cheated on and not being respected. In his universe everything is clear so he "forgets" to inform the person he supposedly loved forever about a little thing like a child. He loved a phantasy of Nash, I guess. Nash is right about the respect thing, Penn should have enough respect to be honest. His loyalty was with Cam not with Nash, by respecting her wishes he disrespected Nash in very hurtful way. The Cam - Nash scene was disappointing, I was hoping you wouldn't send her to clear the misunderstandings. And Nash, please ... No, Nash, you didn't and you don't, he has to grow up in order to be mature enough for a real relationship. Penn behaves like he's still in highschool.

I actually set my alarm clock 2 hours earlier to be able to read the next chapter before going to work. I'm confused and a bit grumpy, but hey, it's sunday I can stay at home

Yep, this is weirding me out too

Well, this could go either way. I'm afraid this will be just the tip of the iceberg for poor Nash, Leland is lurking just around the corner with his crap. If Penny is indeed Penn's child, I just hope it was an invitro kind of arrangement, kind of a "parting gift" in a divorce settlement. But Penn could still say something, anything, to prepare Nash for this shock. I hope he has a good explanation, because I can see Nash running away, maybe a trip to India or Madagascar or maybe joining Greenpeace… or to a job somewhere in Africa. I hope you post the next chapter soon, the wait for this one was excruciating. The wait got me thinking about my life, or better the lack thereof, too. I got so involved I even googled Becks Restaurant, after googling Lincoln and other stuff… I have a really boring existence, sad actually… What keeps me going? The fact you said it's a HEA story

After rereading all the chapters, googling Lincoln Oregon, divorce laws of Oregon, Ninja-Nash lookalikes etc., just letting you know I very patiently wait for a new chapter. One little gem from chapter 2, where Nash is desciribing Paul: "...and he walked like he was trying to keep a turd from dropping." Did I mention, I wait very patiently?