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This has been an eye opener, so the enemy has reverted to really below ground tactics, the sum total being that you fight dirty you need to accept that the returns are ten fold and they are going to loose, I wonder if Seth will be turned he seems like a good candidate, another awesome chapter
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This is a stunning picture, absolutely awesome
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Chapter 2 - The next 2 days
mikedup commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The next 2 days
Interesting very interesting, Nate is very conflicted he doesn't want to let out that he is gay Corey on the other most definitely is gay , I imagine once he can get over the anger and open up just a little bit , he can almost own the world, plus I think what Corey wants he will probably get (Nate) , fun times ahead- 31 comments
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Chapter 7 - That Dark Day After
mikedup commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 7 - That Dark Day After
Wow this certainly was an intense and emotional chapter, I hope everything goes well with both of them ,- 28 comments
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Great to see Randy is getting to accept the inevitable, however that b*tch Cassidy really needs to taken about 50 rungs down the ladder preferably all the way down to hell, she is just evil , Trevor is becoming an alpha it would seem, I think that there are some interesting times ahead
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Well definitely cards on the table, he has the information so he can decide, it can be without a doubt a very difficult decision, finding something about things around you that you never knew or even expected, I hope he makes the decision to accept the gift, interesting times ahead,, good luck to deal with the silver poisoning, it looks like tremendous success in the help
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I agree with the comments, a nice easy slow burn chapter, getting to rest and meet the new partners , I also get the feeling that the sh*t is about to hit the fan , it is great that the group got together to reaffirm the bond between them, a new day awaits,
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Oh how she suffers , however it still is not enough for her treacherous ways , her mother on the other hand will suffer even more ,hers I think will be pain multiplied many times over , now rel battle can begin to end the evil of some of the clans , we are I think in for a serious rollercoaster ride
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Awesome Aiden and Ethan are there , I imagine that it will take a bit of time for him to fully recover, I like that the arrest or kill order against the McKinney family has been issued, time to pay and or die , but payback will be made sooner than later, so Trevor has been sussed out , now they can really have fun , just keeping it in the family, (ha ha)
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Wow this was an intense chapter, Trev has most definitely stepped up to the plate ,he took command and did exactly what was required, I am glad Ethan and Aidan have arrived, Ethan can only spell good things , if he can heal him I don't think any one else could, the McKinney clan have now opened a definite can of worms, and I expect all hell to come down on them, I expect that the lycan council will eventually called in to assist, that old saying you can run but you cannot hide forever, and now I think that the gloves are now going to be removed and Ethan is going to look for blood, I am glad that Trev is missing his partner, won't the gang be more than surprised
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Chapter 4 An Education in the Bushes
mikedup commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 4 An Education in the Bushes
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Well condolences to them , we did however expect that John's time on earth was nearing the end , it is always sad but life has to go on , the family seems to have a lot of deaths what with most of the boys having experienced that , they however have a an awesome family to help through the trying times , I think that tours to Europe will be less often and that the "family" in Europe will visit more often, interesting times ahead
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Welcome back home, I think that soon they could open a clothing store for all the clothes they keep needing to buy , I just never seems to end , it is sad about John , but we expected that when they were in Europe, time they say stops for no-one when your time on earth is done then you leave to greener pastures, at least they have warnings from GG, Pepe will soon be another family member
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Well they have made progress on helping Seth, and so the lycan who helped beat him up , heads are going to roll ,I hope that the bitch is included as an accessory to the attack , hate crime I think should be installed, and then we end on cliff (thanks) who fired the shot , human or lycan , , is it revenge or something Trevor discovered, another awesome chapter
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Revenge is on the way , and all kinds of pain and suffering will be metered out to the evil family and supporters of the evil doctor , the daughter is only the first the rest of the collaborators will be taken in and punished, interesting times ahead
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Interesting chapter , I read recently, "revenge even if it takes ,50 years still has its milk teeth " so it will never elapse only it gets more refined. Patience is coming to an end , an endless lifetime of pain and misery awaits them
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Wow, a sad and emotional chapter, yet uplifting and happy all round, Pepe has landed in a loving and happy home , I am sure that he will fit in just fine , the uncle 's house is becoming a residential hotel for the children, a lot of live around
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Wow , Cassidy needs to be strung up at the market square and burnt at the stake , what an absolute bitch doing that to her own brother, she needs to be castrated so she can never ever breed and her clit needs to be removed so she can never enjoy sex again, I hope Seth recovers and I think he needs to be mated and changed, sorry for the grandstanding but I hate homophobic people, this was an eye-opening chapter
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I agree some people don't have and will never have sea legs , but you use what what you have and make the most of it , I suppose that they will have to wait for the revelation of what GG meant , the boys have friends all over Europe, who they don't forget
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A great chapter, they really had fun fishing, I do know that fishing is not for everyone, but they had a good time , Armand has some time to look at new subjects , Colin just reminded him he had plenty of subjects to paint , so the home had damage from the storm I expect that their will be a substantial generator installation at the home for any power outages , or better yet they should install a solar and wind set-up for their own generation,
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Awesome information, the boys are learning more and more about the ancients with each trip, the library at home will no doubt be awesome
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Another awesome chapter, Trev has most definitely given in to try the other side out , he seems to be having no 2nd thoughts, I say more Kudus to him , he certainly knows how to find patterns in the way the former idiots worked , he will no doubt recover a substantial amount
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Interesting chapter, we are learning more and more about the ancient Greeks , it is surprising that the number of inventions which we think are modern are really hundreds of years old , there will be a substantial library back at home very soon
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Interesting follow up, we will see how things progress going forward
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Thanks for a really inspiring and uplifting story. dad I am glad to say finally saw the error in his ways , so all's well that ends well, the boys can finally do what they need to do
