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Chapter 29: Mountain March
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Mountain March
Great chapter, it looks like there will be training taking place all over the world, congratulations are in order all round -
Great chapter, Tommie is a very outgoing and friendly chap he makes friends and keeps them it seems, security will be up and running rapidly it seems
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So he has some changes to make at the gallery, I wonder if it will change the how it looks. I certainly hope not, the professor has seen his point of view about the doctors rooms, Tommie is well and truly now part of the family
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He is wise not to do that mural, I could see that he would have go back quite often to make repairs, so getting students to do it ,then any other student could potentially do any necessary fixes. The family is settling down nicely
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Progress, Tommie has settled in really well , they are in a happy peaceful place, everything is going well, the security system seems like it could be fitted rapidly, learning Italian is going to be fun
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Vanus did not get what he wanted , I think that he will figure it out in time but if he wants to change things then he will have to change them to suit himself, I hope that soon he and the demon will have to reach a compromise and stop being so degrading to each other. I think that the story is ticking over quite well ,
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Tommie is rapidly making his mark in all areas , his new family has expanded rapidly, councils everywhere in the world like to give you the run around purely because they can ,
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Interesting developments, the demon is seems will eventually I think become an permanent resident next to Vanus, he will no doubt demand and get the answers and get all the files and documents that were removed from his house so he can begin to understand his place in the order
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Congratulations are definitely in order, GG came through yet again, now the family can get on with the business of living in peace , more help on the way with the security which will be needed, and once again very good news for Tommy
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Chapter 28: Remarkable Reception
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Remarkable Reception
A great wedding reception was had , Mason still needs to find a balance between work and missing Vinnie , he is learning quite a bit but is being realistic about his partner who needs a mate,- 17 comments
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What a wonderful chapter, it almost seems like Christmas all over again, perseverance has paid off , Thomas will be a very welcome addition to the family, I wish them well, and pre congratulations are in order
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Wow I never expected Arrow to paint that picture but I am glad that he is busy with it , it will tie Tommie to both of them in such a meaningful way, another awesome chapter
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Well everyone definitely has an attitude problem, a very large chip on their shoulders, I think that the sooner Vanus and the demon start working together the better it will be for all they need to put their anger and animosity aside , they have bigger issues to sort out
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Wow that was most certainly a baptism of fire , lesson 1 learnt in no uncertain way and he has claimed his rightful place, scared but victorious now into his place in the family
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Progress of sorts Tommie is rapidly getting under everyone's skin , but in a really good way , hecwill be a welcome addition to the household, they will no doubt have to fight to be able to adopt him
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Chapter 27: Joyful Joining
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 27: Joyful Joining
An awesome wedding, they are finally joined not just my mating but now legal and on show to all , Vinnie had his wish and both his parents were in attendance even if they were there in spirit, and awesome get together so once again Congratulations to both Mase and Vinnie- 26 comments
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Wow so he has arrived at "home" however home is what he will have to make of it , a rather scary thought he nevertheless will soon have the power to do as pleases how and whenever he does , he will need to get the imps onto the house to get it back to be liveable again as soon as possible
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A great chapter, everything is going well, with no hiccups, smooth sailing, I just wonder how long it will last
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Chapter 26: Telepathic Teller
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 26: Telepathic Teller
Awesome chapter, Stefan made an unwelcome appearance, Vinnie and Mase were it seems sexed out , Tierney and Morrine have finally decided to complete their mating, all done an awesome chapter- 40 comments
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Tony's reaction now makes sense however the way he went around with it was not the best way, but let's see if he can forgive not forget just forgive, I am glad arrow went to the orphanage to sign the papers now just to get Colin onside , which should not be too difficult
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Almost ready to leave the squalor of the orphanage, the sister doesn't seem to be a very compassionate person, but I suppose doing what she does can make someone have a hard shell
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And so it begins, he will start to believe and understand his place in all of this
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Family? Good or bad , real or not ,time to reveal more
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I agree very mysterious, no doubt time will reveal more
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Interesting developments, I can agree with him to have a slight worried episode
