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A really great and needed break from the hectic life , I agree delegate tasks to others and have a bit more peace , I think it is similar to saying it is better being the conductor of an orchestra than actually being the orchestra, I wonder what drama will meet them when they get back home
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Interesting chapter, some normality, strange that the school couch was so corrupt and ends up dead, how many more are going to find untimely and violent deaths
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Great way to get their own lives back on track , the net will no doubt be cast a bit wider , justice still needs to be served
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Great chapter, time to move forward with their lives, no doubt Bruce will still be thorn for some time to come , but they can now relax and get ready for the family, I can imagine them getting twins or even triplets, I imagine while on the vacation
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Well no surprises that he raped so many people, I think that All of the letters need to be published, a lot of the school staff knew what he was doing and did nothing, I do not think his suicide is going to be the closure that every needs ,a lot more needs to said and done
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Some very deserved hatred comments, however what hold did he have over everyone that stopped them from calling him out ,the truth I imagine will never come out , I think that his family are going to receive a backlash from people, his mother and father are definitely guilty by association, they had some influence over him growing up , I think that they will have move before their home gets destroyed by the victims anger ,
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Is this a calm relaxing chapter before a big bang in the next chapter,, it will be great to read about the article in the paper and the response
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Interesting article about Bruce, I think that the town needs a bit of a white lie to help them heal and to look to the future, let's hope that the article goes a long way to heal , now onwards with their lives so when is Tim and Stephen getting their dose of their own children
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Well the meeting went well, now we know there is definitely a meeting of souls between AM and the doctor, he a least realises that she needs schooling first , I wonder how Rich's article will be read by all and how the injured people will deal with it , interesting times ahead
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Bruce is nothing less than a coward, his apology for what he did it is not worth the paper it is written on , hell would be too good a place for him, but however with him dead life for everyone can move on , he can no longer harm anyone else
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Interesting chapter, Bruce has tried to run but he came up very short, the question is how the hell he got onboard an aircraft without a passport , I wonder what is going to happen
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Progress on all fronts, now let the "games" begin, evil do-ers beware
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Well lots of information, a bit of everything, everyone going back to their homes it may be too soon but life has to go on ,
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Ok so I was not expecting that revelation, but if the plane crashed or he is taken to account by someone on the plane or so, where he is poisoned or something like that, he will not make it back it does leave his estate to claim damages from, interesting times ahead
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Well the christening went well , the family seems to expanding, I think the hint about a bigger family, is going to come true , I wonder what Donnie is going to reveal
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Progress I am glad Elijah has agreed now onto the really tough work of breaking in to the idiots compound
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Well the entire family is together finally, the "mixing"of doctor and patient does have ethical issues, but if they are happy then we will have to accept it , a somewhat drama free chapter
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Well Bruce can run but he cannot hide , Donnie is on the case, I think he wants justice even more than Tim, so mom has told dad and I don't think it went well, but I hope they can overcome the major problem , and the whole family bar AM is together,
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Well that was a real revelation, that imagine is not a detail that needs to aired to the public , putting sleeping tablets in someone's drink is bordering on premeditated murder, this story is really getting very ,very intense, Bruce is going to pay
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Finally mom can clear her chest of the drama that she has carried for the last few decades, I wonder what new information she is going to deliver, we seem to be going from 1 cliffhanger to the next
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Oh hell another bump in the road , it seems As soon as 1 problem appears to be solved another one appears on the horizon
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Ok , so the two idiots are the ring leaders , giving away their plans , plus an added bonus exposing themselves, I think when they expose the bank records they can move the funds and leave them penniless, the fight for the lives of the youth are hanging in the balance, , the two are going to hung out to dry in no uncertain terms
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And so the next Domino falls , I imagine that they will all start falling a little faster with each small event, rich has most certainly started a war that will escalate as time goes by, another awesome chapter
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I think that Bruce is feared more than the gay element , I wonder what control he has over them , it is going to come out there is no doubt that anymore, I wonder if Bruce's parents are still around stirring trouble in the background,
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Sebastian certainly didn't waste any time establishing control, I think that there will be some scrambling to cover tracks , however Robert could be an ally in the making , getting the information they want may take a bit of work but it will be used as needed , heads need to roll
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