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Interesting developments, Tony is still full of crap , but Carmella will no doubt get to the bottom of the problem, Thomas made a welcome return, they just have to get on and adopt him he already sees Arrow as his dad , his paintings are selling well , onto new beginnings I think
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Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
Well this was an emotional chapter, Vinnie saddened by his own family but uplifted by mason's family, he certainly made his mark with them Caleb and Tash begin a journey of acceptance and recovery with her family, all is well it seems in owensville, I really enjoyed having a few tears reading this chapter -
Welcome back home , it is great to get away now and again but it is so much better to get back home , it is our personal sanctuary
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Congratulations in order to both couples, 1 officially and 1 very private between arrow and Colin , a very joyous occasion now back to the States
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Interesting that he specifically painted for an event and was surprised that it did well , he really needs to rethink his approach to his paintings, so onwards to Europe and the wedding
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Chapter 24: Ardent Arrest
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Ardent Arrest
So Harold has been taken out , good riddance, a few changes that had to be made , no down to business with CY and Kaplan, -
Interesting developments I think that they will settle on a decent rental for the unit , without being way more expensive than the dorms, cgvhas told him to be himself and paint with his soul, unthought he was but he will no doubt take note, the pamphlet was a very good idea
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Progress on the apartments , and Thomas made an appearance, now onto planning the wedding and honeymoon, Arrow seems to have a lot of days working so intensely
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A good place to get everything in order and done correctly, he naturally has to worry about his own paintings but also of the other students ,, he sets a example of ask for help and it will be given freely. He is constantly looking to help others along the way
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Chapter 23: Shifter Sorrow
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 23: Shifter Sorrow
Well an awesome chapter, Vinnie at last made contact and visited his home town, a very important visit I am sure. And I think that the crap is going to be hitting the fan in a really big way , a lot of it is going to be sticking to a few people -
I think that the insurance will be worth it , I hope he is sitting down when he checks his bank account, I think he is going to be very,very surprised , pity no Thomas in this chapter
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Interesting development I suppose that is one way to get noticed, Tom would make a welcome addition, as he has already climbed into a few hearts ,
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Typical of the current situation in the world right now, pick on those who are in no state to defend themselves, even the adults are doing it , no common decency in the world and even less compassion, I hope he recovers and I hope there is swift action against the perpetrators
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Tony is an idiot , you can't see something and then loose your cool and leave , some reason and explanation is necessary, GG is still inspiring him , and I think a painting of her will no doubt end up in the Louvre, interesting developments and times ahead
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Interesting start to this story, I think that thd bullies are going to be busy
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A great reveal, Carlo had an awesome time there they were very kind to close over the holidays, the staff certainly deserved it , not very many businesses remember that, happy holidays to all
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Chapter 22: Dangerous Druggies
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 22: Dangerous Druggies
Wow so the meetings went very well all round , Vinnie seems to be enjoying the auditing job , he is really insightful, Kaplan's meeting had mixed results , hopefully they get results, well ingle and Dirk had really explosive sex both discovered that they are more than just mates they are completely into each other- 20 comments
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Interesting visit to the gallery and his vision helped bring it alive with the new mural , definitely progress on all fronts
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Definitely progress, onwards and upwards, he will be very well known and quite quickly I think, his gallery will become very popular
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Chapter 21: Conspiring Chairman
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 21: Conspiring Chairman
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Awesome chapter, so Arrow has a bit of a problem, he doesn't know what his (paintings) worth is , he no doubt will discover that rapidly when he gets a valuation of some of his paintings, onwards into more fame and fortune
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Chapter 20: Shaky Stalkers
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 20: Shaky Stalkers
Vinnie will be a great auditor, you need to ask the question that the answer is a dead give away if you are hiding something, there is a good saying " auditors go in after the war is over and bayonet the wounded" Vinnie will be great in this regard, so we have incompetent followers the question is who the hell is Sheila who it seems is up to no good. Very interesting times ahead- 29 comments
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Great mural for all to see and enjoy seeing what they experienced on their honeymoon, Marylou seemed to have got a new lease on a temporary basis, all's well , I somehow think that this story has now come to an end
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Well Colin's parents seemed to like the club , I somehow don't think that Marylou's mother is going to be convinced that her daughter did what she did , the chips never fall far from the tree , she will try her luck again without a doubt, the first Sunday opening is going to be interesting
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Chapter 19: Baltimore Business
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 19: Baltimore Business
Amazing chapter, so the owensville is growing with almost all the lycan it can, plus now a powerful vampire, it will no doubt become very powerful in the future, Vinnie will be learning fast about this new role .
