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Chapter 9: Occupational Opportunity
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 9: Occupational Opportunity
Great chapter, so Cyrus and Kaplan really get it going with each other , awesome, poor Mason is in a bit of pickle with Vinnie wanting to work with the council. Vinnie on the other hand has discovered that he is going to be in conflict with his wolf, a dilemma which no doubt will solve itself. Great times ahead -
Chapter 8: Psychotic Plunge
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 8: Psychotic Plunge
Well I am not surprised that his bear left ,I don't think that he is gone forever,he just needs to get back into the straight and narrow, Vinnie is gaining more experience and insight by the day , he now also realized that he cannot everything, times are definitely changing -
Hello , your computer issues are just one indication how reliant we have become with technology, , I think that the possibility exists that the club just might be a bit small for everything they want to do and incorporate
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The club is going to look awesome when they get done, and I hope the chef is up to task to make the new dishes, they both have work cut out for them,
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Interesting start to this story, a fine line between the two sides of the same coin , It is amazing how easy a single word can create such utter chaos, sometimes it is only in jest and sometimes on purpose, but regardless it will almost always create such anger that it quickly spirals out of control,, plus it damages people who cannot go back and fix the problem with an apology it creates a monster which will grow by being fed by persons hell bent on causing anger and hatred, good luck on this balancing act
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Interesting developments, take aways from across the globe, silver bullets , betrayal, you certainly gave us all of it in this chapter, it seems that they are heading for a major battle ahead, a really great chapter,
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It is really sad reflection of our time right now that there is someone who has not learned from the past and is condemned to repeat it and will no doubt die as result of their actions
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They have seen a lot of different architecture styles which no doubt will be added in some form to both their own works and home and the bar
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Excellent chapter, a very thought inspiring idea about how we will be remembered, I suspect just as barbaric as the Romans given what is going on in eastern Europe , Colin is now in his element with architecture,
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A great experience in Barcelona, Colin shows a great appreciation for the artists work that they have seen so far, the two are meant to be together as they are so in tune with each other
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Chapter 6: Intractable Instincts
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 6: Intractable Instincts
Well I didn't see that coming, one way to keep us on the edge of the seat, -
Great chapter that they had a really good break for just themselves, it looks like arrow has good friends all over Europe. The painting will most definitely be an awesome surprise
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Interesting that he seems to have a crowd of hangers on , poor Colin now has the incentive to learn some foreign languages,,, he is however a very patient teacher as he explains why he has a particular explanation of each painting,
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An awesome start to their Spanish holiday, now to experience the new gallery
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An amazing time in Paris and an awesome way to end the visit, now to another experience in Madrid
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Awesome so arrow managed to keep his identity a secret even from the museum director, I wonder for how long that will last. On with the holiday
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Interesting chapter, Arrow is a great artist he is also very humble which is a very noble trait to have , the private visit is going to be an eye opener I think
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Chapter 5: Comprehending Crime
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 5: Comprehending Crime
Crazy good chapter, I hope the mind-reader is better than the killer , interesting developments ahead -
Interesting, he s going to be a good teacher along with making extraordinary paintings , he does explain his reasons he has some students who seem to like his ideas and explanations
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A nice stroll through the museum, it was interesting that people definitely heard what he said about the Mona Lisa, the school kids were an interesting bunch, more learning to be done
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Great adventure, congratulations definitely in order to them , I suppose when you have spent time looking at paintings you could sit a reproduction or fake especially if you have the help of your grandma's spirit, great romantic getaway
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Great get away, and the day as single men , tomorrow a new day as a married couple,
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Congratulations in order to them , the girls are going to find out that they are no longer welcome I think, the European trip is going to be very educational and inspiring to both for very different reasons,
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It is not unusual that scoungers like the girls have no moral compass, until they banned from entering a public place and shamed publicly they will continue their antisocial behaviour, I think that the Italian restaurant will also benefit from arrow's artwork, it will be great for them to move into their own place
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Awesome feature of his painting, it is amazing how fast word of mouth spreads something and the café is the recipient of it , only upwards from here
