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Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Wow Vinnie is finally part of the family, I am glad and it was just right , streum is in for a crap load of drama and it is all his own doing , this just keeps getting better and better -
Awesome chapter, I think that construction will proceed rapidly and once word gets out it will rapidly fill up
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Final Mission - Starting Over?
mikedup commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Final Mission - Starting Over?
Wow what a chapter, I am also reading again to see what happened, but nonetheless I hope that they reconnect on all levels and can the. Fight the evil ahead -
Grand chapter, so the board can only but rubber stamp the girls school their hands are tied as Adam owns all the properties, interesting developments
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Great chapter, Gerry is a fine leader he is taking his country forward into the future, Adam has it seems increased his fa, even if for a short while
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Awesome chapter, so great to go down memory lane . Onwards to the future
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Great chapter, and I think that congratulations to Gerry and his fiancé are in order , his education compound is rapidly growing bigger and bigger, I think that it will become an international student body , with amazing roots and potential for the future
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Great chapter, I suppose to crow will work to achieve the necessary, but I also think that he will take this to heart about the next project
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Great that he is looking to expand the schools the future really looks good, with well educated and smart boys and soon girls will be added to the mix
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A great way to encourage the girls to step up to the plate, , Marie will made an awesome principal, long term plans are on track
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Wow talk about swift justice, but I suppose that they had a lot of time to grab bounty but it all came to very abrupt stop , the other hopefully learnt a lesson but you always some who will try to beat the system, their fate will be sealed very fast
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Wow what a chapter, I definitely didn't think that would happen, but you almost always find snakes in the grass ready to pounce , Adam had a dream and it proved to be true, so the traitor will have to confess along with his sidekicks, interesting times ahead, the iron fist of Adam is going to fall
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Mission - Personal Attack
mikedup commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Personal Attack
Oh hell, I did not expect that, so I hope to hell that g is really dead , good riddance, I hope that Tylers memory wipe did not work and Zeke can find him, I await with baited breath for the next chapter -
Awesome chapter, so Gerry has successfully taken over from Adam , his country can only go from strength to strength
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Great emotional chapter, Gerry will be a very reasonable but careful leader , I have no doubt he will be tough on the errant idiots who will try him , Adam I think will be his emotional support,
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Chapter 23: Mastering Manipulation
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 23: Mastering Manipulation
Awesome chapter, and this going to be interesting to see the new workings of mesker park , I agree streum is going to cause issues ,. Makes one wonder if he will sideline with Steven (heaven forbid), Vinnie is making huge progress, -
Excellent chapter, there is progress all around, plus the college is expanding again ,and the new farm , space will definitely not be an issue any time soon
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Great chapter, it looks like Adam is becoming a serious land baron ,he now owns quite a serious lot of land at the cabin and the school, his boys perform way and beyond the norm
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Awesome that the boys are so close knit and the staff are made of the same mould it seems, the youngsters look up to their older brothers , and they in return look after the youngsters
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Time has definitely moved on , when weddings are on the horizon, then you can stand back and reflect in life, a really great chapter
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Great chapter, time is relentless is moves on whether you want it or not, it's great that the family never stops expanding
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Congratulations to Adam and Marie on baby Marie, an awesome addition to the family, she has a lot of big brothers to look after her, a new way to get his message across I hope that it works well
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Great chapter, condolences for dad , but such is life their daughter is going to spoilt rotten but one and all, and another successful year done
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A very interesting problem Adam is sitting with, I think that he could have a monopoly,card etc competition, similar to the games they play at the cabin
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Great start to the new year at school and the college, the togetherness is awe inspiring, plus they never stop learning even on weekends away
