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Well great chapter, now we are cruising the river, however the hell rapids are just a short few hours away , and then all hell will break loose even without Ann there, I hope Eva and dad can get mom to see reason and open her eyes to the reality that is Ann, tighten all seat belts I think
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Interesting chapter and an intriguing start to this story
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Well she has certainly got her mother around her little finger , mom doesn't see it ,dad does, but mom has been manipulated by Ann her whole life and I hope she sees that really soon , and I hope that dad can make her see the truth about Ann ,I also think that mom needs counceling to help you see Ann true colours and how she has been manipulated by Ann, this is turning into one hell of a sh*t storm
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Well surprise, surprise not , she reacted just a we expected, throwing a tantrum, breaking things, and then having the police break down the door she has caused herself such a BIG problem, if she continues she could find herself inside mental home permanently,
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Well Ann gave her response "you can all go to hell" she is in for one hell of a wake up call I can just imagine the cursing and when she eventually does realise that Stephen has got her absolutely by the short and curlies , and that he now holds her welfare and life in his hands, and being friendly would serve her better than being ugly
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Well the judge certainly concurred with Stephen, and now we wait for the court order to be served on her , she is no doubt going to ballistic, but I hope that she she's that she has put herself between a rock and a very hard place, easy life or a virtual homeless apartment, I cannot wait for response
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It is amazing how people can be so horrible, time does not heal any hatred wounds , it can stay and fester for years, people can change but most seldom do , when the farm is theirs I can only imagine the backlash from the homophobes, that saying, "forgive and forget" is absolute b*llsh*t when you see the same people much later in life unless they apologize and mean it then things can change but otherwise the wound is just as fresh as it was years ago. I hope he gets it sorted out
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Interesting developments, dad is now aware of what is going to happen, I think a bomb is going to go off soon , I am glad that he is buying the farm , I also think that Donnie is talking to his parents as well, I think that Randy And his mom will be happy on the farm
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Brilliant move, Anne is going to throw one hell of a hissy fit, when she finds out the terms but she will be out for blood but then I think When she finds out that she could end up in a 1 bedroom apartment, I think that she will finally realise that karma is a serious player in the payback department, and she really needs a huge big karmic slap in the face, let's wait for the fireworks,
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Awesome chapter, Tim had certainly put a fire under Morris I think he thought Tim was young and inexperienced but he has been caught out in a big way , he will no doubt be scrambling to correct this error however the other side I doubt that they will comply, this is going to be a very interesting ride ,I expect all hell to break loose
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Oh hell I think Morris is going to be in deep s*it I also think he is in cahoots with that family, I also think they will all fall on their own sword , at least she will be gone , I think Tim before she leaves must make her sign a declaration that she will never return to their parents house, interesting developments and times ahead
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Great family dinner with the father unfortunately without dad , but then someone needs to keep that damn sister in line, randy would make a great doctor, doonie , seems to be able to predict and expect compliance, interesting I wonder what other things he will say and predict
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Wow having to physically to see the lawyer was a bit of an expense ,however I hope that ,that lawyer does what is right and gets off his butt to sort out the mess , plus I hope he does it soon to get his entitled sister to get out of the house where she is not welcome,I hope Stephen will find the differences , the 2 of them are definitely leading interesting lives
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Well I think that the sh*t is going to hit the fan , daddy I don't think will take her crap , plus when Tim sees that lawyer I think another sh*t storm is going to be unleashed, this is a really good rollercoaster ride
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Interesting chapter, some ground works so we are all on the same page , thanks for that , I appreciate the background information it will no doubt come in handy later
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Welcome back, great to start reading about CJ and Ozzie, It looks like he has stepped into a bit of a hornets nest, I don't trust the spy ,
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Interesting chapter, I seriously doubt that she will pay the invoice, but I think she will be camping out at the lawyer to get the money she thinks is due to her, as long as she gets the hell out the parents house
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Oh hell what a shit storm, this sister needs to get her backside out of the gutter and actually do something for her self, and stop ordering everyone else around, no one in this family owes her anything, I don't think that they should do anything for her , karma is wicked when it needs to be, interesting developments and times ahead
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That old saying,, "you can't change a leopards spots" seems appropriate for her I think and it will maybe awful, but she needs a karma slap to bring her back down to earth , she needs get off her backside and do everything for herself , I think that there is going to be major drama as far as she is concerned, Randy is in for a very difficult time unless he puts his foot down and tell her no do it yourself
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Oh my word what an entitled b*tch , their mom and dad should tell her to f**k off and go to a hotel , she left and as far as one can consider she is no longer part of this family, (ok off my box) a very entertaining chapter, the farm is going to be well looked after , I still cannot see by whom as long as it is not that entitled one
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Awesome chapter, we didn't get any bad news bar the farm being sold and his dream of Donnie telling him to buy it. I think who will run the farm will just happen without much thought though I don't think it will be the two of them. Interesting developments
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Interesting chapter, so he got the issue sorted out with the lease , going home you are sneeking leaving us with serious cliffhanger,
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Great use of the shower, his dad maybe sly ,but then no-one else will know that the contracts have been checked, I suspect that the lawyer they used is a bit of a underhand deal I think, and a different way to have a meal
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Great chapter, Stephen is going to be very busy, it looks like it be a whole new business for him into the future, a really good gathering of the family
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Great chapter, using the back door to get into work doesn't really help to get rid of the useless bigot at reception, glad that they are settling in well he is going to start making waves sooner rather than later, good to see them restart running, shared showers definitely don't reduce water consumption on the contrary they more due to way more play time
