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Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
I hope it is Dave and Stacy -
Interesting chapter, some progress has been made however I really think that they need to improve the bathroom issue , the getting together is going to take some time plus I think he will need a check up at the doctor's after what had to do after he was kicked out
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Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
Awesome chapter, finally they are mated and his family are reunited now onwards to great things -
I truly find it amazing how so called religious people so easily toss kids that are different onto the street, I call them Sunday 1 hour people because that is the only real time they are so called religious, however this is one way to grow a family
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Awesome , he has now put down a set of roots that I don't think he wants give up , I am glad his boss saw his reasons and agreed with him . On with life
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Great progress, things are coming together nicely, now that all services are installed he can get contractors to extend everything to where they need to be
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Great way to discover how the previous people lived, he is going to have a field day getting everything working
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Awesome chapter, mom's seems to be in her element, dad is amazed by the craftsmanship, we are in for a really good ride through the renovations with utmost sympathy with the house
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Interesting developments, it seems that the house is really made to last ,it just needs some serious updating, I wonder if there is a crawl space hidden away
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Interesting house it seems that it is of the last century, it is going to be one surprise after another I am sure
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Interesting developments, I think that there are things in the house that will make the house even more special
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Great chapter, they say you need to spread your wings to fly solo, and he seems to have achieved this even in a small way
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So the goings are like a bit of a yo yo up and down ,
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Interesting start, he certainly has been dealt a bad hand with a fat and no doubt seriously homophobic father, I hope that things improve
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Chapter 27: Galvanic Gig
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 27: Galvanic Gig
WOW this was one damn awesome chapter, I can't think of the correct words to describe how great this chapter was, just awesome is not enough, a lot of people will talking about his mage dance, I can't wait for the next chapter -
Great meeting, it seems that is a new beginning to a very old friendship,
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Interesting developments, so one old flame gone and one new one on the radar, fun times
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Interesting start to this story, I think Vinnie was put up to the setup, but good riddance if Tony did it once he will no doubt do it many times , Marco is in for a bit of a ride I think
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Great chapter, a great ending to very entertaining even though a short story, I look forward to seeing the next story soon
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Wow an expanding little empire, it seems that he is constantly waiting for Jon to arrive by boat, a great chapter
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Crazy good chapter, strange boat and strange way to introduce his family, but it is all good let's see what happens next.
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Interesting chapter, they do say that there are only 2 certainties in life death and taxes , it was sad but then he lived his life at the edge and he paid the price
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Chapter 26: Discordant Dinner
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 26: Discordant Dinner
Wow,this chapter had had it all , emotional, anger, hate and help and uplifting, I don't blame Cyrus one bit , but he came out way Stronger plus he is definitely ready to settle down with his mate he and Kaplan are perfect for each other ,I am surprised that Vinnie didn't put that idiot in his place, now onto the the dance , I can't wait, this was an awesome chapter -
Interesting developments, the more they add on and expand the more popular it becomes
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Great progress, at both hotels, more variety and fun for all the guests and staff, the pool will most definitely become an important part of the family
