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Something's Not Right Here
mikedup commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Something's Not Right Here
Oh hell I did not see that on any level, so we are in for one hell of a ride. Way more questions than answers -
Great Chapter, so the boys are definitely onboard with both the oath and medal, I think that the money trail is going to end up between the doctor and Arlene,crime will tell us
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Great chapter, so don't mess with my family, there will be only one outcome "death" and then you will banish into thin air
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Omg , subdue and conquer,James seems to be on a mission to find out the reason for the rain and creatures , he is going to be treating the beast like a child, interesting times ahead
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She-Wolves and Fundamentalists
mikedup commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in She-Wolves and Fundamentalists
So it seems that he is going in to a wolf pit, however with his experience in life I think that he would be able to handle himself, I think that his prize is waiting for him to be rescued -
Awesome chapter, so he has started to sweep clean , I suspect that some previous employees are going to need to hide or get their affairs in order before getting new accommodations in a cell
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Awesome chapter, leashes, come etc , then just like that is over, wow it was a really entertaining and informative story, so thanks again for a really great story and keeping us waiting anxiously for the next chapter, I cannot wait for the next part to this storyline
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Interesting chapter, so granny tracked him through his phone and he now has extra help with the entities
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Great chapter, progress on some fronts and less on others , by a deserved rest
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Great that he is back and definite progress with the test centre , and the boys are keeping the kitchen clean , I wonder what his dad is going to say
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Wow such brutality, I am surprised that Mike Survived, I hope that his saviour arrives quite soon
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Great movie night , it seems that they entered their own horror movie night, it also looks like the monster are out looking for james
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Interesting that they never got angry but not very happy but I suppose boys will be boys , it seems TJ goes from one fire to another
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Great chapter, it seems that most of the trustees are very "old school" in their thinking, he will no doubt be digging and finding the extra spaces in the school and be putting them to good use when he returns.
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An amazing chapter, getting called into a meeting with the intention of making trouble, and getting politely put into your place by Adam who came well prepared, and left with the trustees firmly in his pocket,
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Great chapter now to find out why the entity is pissed off, plus James finally gets his first proper kiss ,
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Great way to say I accomplished something yesterday, but there is always more to find and do , he hasn't done much teaching in the interim, so he is going on a road trip to the UK,
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Awesome chapter, so he has his problem sorted out , word will spread like wildfire, now back to school
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Plus I forgot to mention 🎉👏 congratulations on posting your 100th chapter
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Awesome chapter, so James keeps finding creatures that are all out to kill him , at least he can fly and get away as needed , plus one hell of a first date,
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Interesting chapter, he definitely did not waste time getting him help , the old staff were certainly not there for the kids they were there for themselves and seemed to be very selfish
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Awesome chapter, so the hatchet falls I think that the school will need quite a few replacement teachers and directorsi think need to downgraded to simple supervisors I also think that he has opened up a really bad version of pandoras box, but he family is going to rally around and support and help
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Great chapter they are looking for common ground and are fumbling around and it it really awesome at least they look more human than magic if only for while
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Great chapter, rapid results, a new broom sweeps very clean, I wonder if the audit is going to turn up underhand dealings between the chef and suppliers not forgetting about Arlene in the mix
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Well what a great way to give Arlene the middle finger, now she is no longer in control of the school, she will have to report to Adam for any approvals, I somehow don't think that she is going to be around for to much longer, I can't wait for more
