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Awesome chapter, things have definitely moved on it is great that some of the boys stayed around to help other boys
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Chapter 22: Virulent Voices
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 22: Virulent Voices
Wow an awesome chapter, the change was way more intense and dramatic than they expected , so Vinnie is an alpha as well , interesting times ahead Stefan better beware- 39 comments
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The sultan was typical of men who think they are better than anyone else, he is nothing more than a pedophile. He is vile and a pig
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Short and intense but a very informative chapter
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Great that the boys are doing better, I am happy that the hot tub is a great success, it seems that almost every time that the phone rings , a new sad adventure is on the way
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Payback is a b*tch and some people payback is worse than what they had dealt out, great that the new boys were rescued,
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I am glad the boys had a good night , I hope they recover fast and their perpetrators get cought
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Awesome chapter, a great trip, and an even better holiday,
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A sad and emotional chapter, I hope that the boys will be fine whoever did it needs to hung up by the balls
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Awesome chapter, everything is going great , they are definitely a family now
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Chapter 21: Binding Bite
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 21: Binding Bite
Awesome and amazing chapter, the bond is complete, I think that they will be and an excellent pair to take Stefan on -
Wow great chapter, I never expected that to happen, however Alex's dad had his reasons but it does make things a lot more complicated but such is life, and welcome to the new boys
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Excellent chapter, I am glad Alex got sorted out, a couple of days of discomfort was definitely for his health benefit, building works are moving ahead soon to be completed
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Awesome chapter, moving the office to his home is an awesome idea , less chance of thing going wrong
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Awesome chapter, reading was I am sure like a cherry 🍒 on The cake to most of the boys , the developments are going well is seems
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Interesting chapter, so the idiot Stefan is out in the open so to say , I don't think that the alley way meetingv was with Shaw why when he could just meet at his house like last time I think we have another double crossed in the midst
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Great Chapter, I think that I can see why Carleton had his episode , but as they say cards on the table, Nour will be definitely part of the clan in No time straight
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Awesome chapter, I hope that all goes well some people in the middle East do have some really strange customs and sadly they can be rather fanatical
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Great chapter, the presentation was great, the idiots who laughed are I hope going to get their just rewards, Jon is going to be really be missed
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Interesting chapter, why did max save Gemini, who is the contract on? Strange events
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Awesome chapter, they don't need around with getting things done , before we know it the property will be secure plus the pool will be finished, plus the basketball court and no doubt a soccer field , I think that all they will need is a gym t work out In.
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Great chapter, I hope that using his first unknown "son's" picture someone will come forward who recognizes him he can only hope , and to take down an illegal drug manufacturing company is just brilliant
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Great chapter, I hope that he does find out his name, it will I hope give more meaning to his mission of rescuing boys off the street
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Chapter 19: Spilled Secrets
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 19: Spilled Secrets
Awesome chapter, so Vincent is finally accepting that he is fully part of the pack , I always thought that Shaw was was going get involved with Stefan, I hope that when It comes to the battle which no doubt is clearly ahead, he will I hope be fighting 3 very powerful mages , -
Great chapter, Daniel has definitely fitted in fast, the speech is going to be rather intense I think
