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  1. mikedup

    Chapter 2

    Interesting chapter, it seems that it was a forgone conclusion that the parents were bigots and major homophobes, I think that maybe he will need to extend the house, plus he has 2 really smart boys to liven up his life
  2. Instantly awesome, amazing chapter, so he meets another mage with another affinity, something he will no doubt absorb, into his arsenal, this just keeps getting better and better, I think that his dance is going to be quite spectacular.
  3. mikedup

    Chapter 1

    Interesting start to this new story, it reads like it could get to be very exciting
  4. mikedup

    Chapter 7

    Thanks for another awesome and entertaining story really uplifting
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    Chapter 6

    Great guns A really broad range of ages of the boys ,it is uplifting that the community has began to help where they can
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    Chapter 5

    Wow talk about an explosion of needy kids , I think that he will need s second dorm room for girls, great guns for the boys stability at last
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    Chapter 4

    No I have not read it ,just thinking ahead , what with buying so many tents
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    Chapter 4

    Great chapter, he is certainly getting prepared for bunch the of rescues, I think that he will soon need to build a school if he picks up lots of boys
  9. So he finds a little bit of detail but not enough to satisfy Tyler, he is scared and I think that he asking questions but not really getting the answers he is looking for
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    Chapter 3

    Great chapter, amazing how fast he found the boys a new future awaits
  11. Interesting, I wonder if he got turned, I can't wait for the next chapter
  12. Interesting chapter, he and the professor are certainly in a meeting of the minds , great that he went from embarrassed to enjoying the chat
  13. mikedup

    Chapter 2

    Great chapter and an interesting beginning to this new story
  14. Awesome chapter, so the training has started, intense training but also very useful, so he is going to surprise the lack at the meeting, I can't wait for the next chapter
  15. Interesting very interesting, very intriguing, I am beginning to make sense of what is going on
  16. mikedup

    Chapter 10

    Awesome chapter and a really great ending
  17. mikedup

    Chapter 9

    Excellent chapter, everything is going great it is awesome that they got a cottage and with very low expenses, things can only get better
  18. mikedup

    Chapter 8

    Great chapter, so the curfew is slightly lifted , but all is well it seems , and they finally tied the knot. So off to college
  19. mikedup

    Chapter 23

    My deepest condolences to you and yours , this was a sad but uplifting chapter, but also quite Informative
  20. mikedup

    Chapter 7

    Interesting chapter, she certainly screwed up big time, but I am sure she has learnt a very painful lesson, plus she now needs to rebuild the lost trust between her and her mother
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    Chapter 6

    I think that they did not do enough homework, by preparing for the act , hence a painful act and the day after
  22. Wow just Wow a really intense and exciting chapter, the bond is going to be really helpful when they face off against the evil mage
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    Chapter 5

    Great chapter, it is good to spread happiness around and they certainly did expand the family
  24. mikedup

    Chapter 4

    Awesome chapter, they certainly worked well together, they got on well with each other, and got the work done efficiently
  25. mikedup

    Chapter 3

    Awesome explosive chapter, I don't think that what the other friends that really matters,
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