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Another awesome chapter, onwards and upwards, we keep going up to levels never seen before, I can't wait to see what is going to happen, an amazing story, thank you
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Absolutely brilliant this chapter was, he seems to be all that was expected of him, now for the training I expect some more fireworks.
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Interesting chapter, finally they really do connect, onwards and upwards
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Intense chapter, but a major eye opener, drama and mayhem ahead no doubt
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Interesting chapter, it got Intense and I suppose frustration often ends in extreme anger and we certainly got it in this chapter, getting together was bound to happen,
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Absolutely brilliant, this was such an awesome and amazing chapter, I felt like I was there in attendance, he is certainly a very powerful elf, I hope that you are going to add a lot more chapters
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Yes I think so, I have just finished re reading running with the pack so it tied in Really well and I thoroughly enjoyed it again, so thank you
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Awesome chapter finally we get some answers though not enough to point fingers, but I maintain Levi is a prick , I think he is tainting the biscuits after his mother makes them , time will tell no doubt
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Brilliant absolutely brilliant, this was another amazing chapter, I think Chris was surprised that Reza told him how much power he had , I am thoroughly enjoying this beautiful story, it keeps getting better and better, I cannot wait for the next chapter
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Awesome chapter, it was sexual and suggestive and a lot of fun and lots of understanding plus progress all round
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Interesting chapter, Ryan seems to have a hair trigger, but all bad things do have end sooner or later
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An awesome chapter, inspiring, I hope that the ascention goes well it seems the more the merrier, that will go through the portal
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Awesome chapter and thanks again for an entertaining story,
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Awesome chapter, emotions allover the place Ryan may be a temporary diversion, but I don't think that it will last or even start , the underlying drama won't go away anytime soon
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Awesome chapter,
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Excellent chapter, I agree what happened at the museum, interesting times ahead, I wonder if Victor will have to move if elected
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Excellent chapter, such a build up, then such a let down, more please
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Interesting chapter, I hope we get more information soon
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Interesting chapter, I look forward to reading more about this new adventure
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Awesome chapter, I think that his parents relationship was bad when they were married, after the divorce their relationship went as is normally the case to radically toxic , I think that it is going to get even worse going forward , he did get some helpful advice from the teacher I hope he remembers that
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Levi is a prime dick and needs to be ripped apart and fed to the pigs
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Yeah an interesting chapter to start this story, let's read what happens next
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Excitement so soon after the beginning of the holiday, excellent chapter
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Awesome chapter, so the new adventure begins,
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Reading all these comments makes me realize that not everyone knows the whole story. Have been the other party in a messy divorce my wife was screwing 5 men behind my back and I was made out to be the guilty party, It totally sucked but the kids are the unfortunate pawns in the silly games people play , I hope that things get better.
