mikedup
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Excellent chapter, I agree he needs to explain to at least 3 people the truth about himself
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Another excellent chapter, I also think that he is going to be forced to reveal his true nature soon
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Awesome chapter, trouble ahead I wonder why
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Interesting chapter
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Wow this was a really excellent chapter, more information about the elves, plus more drama on the home front. It would seem that they are going to have to prevent a war breaking out
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Excellent chapter, well everything is falling into place, things seem to be going very smoothly, I await the next axe to fall
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Excellent chapter, more insight, things are definitely moving ahead . More please
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Interesting chapter, I wonder how long he can keep his secret?
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Excellent chapter, more information about him and wow a whole new level to the story, this keeps getting better
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Excellent chapter, it seems that Tobias will not have to walk very far to get school, interesting times ahead
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Awesome chapter, very very interesting, so we have royalty with this just keeps getting better and better, next chapter please
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This has been an interesting and Very entertaining and intense story. I somehow missed it but I am now up to speed, I agree so now it starts but I think that it will be like a bit of a rollercoaster
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Excellent chapter, wow it is certainly an awesome building, let's see what happens ahead
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It is sad about the breakup, but an awesome chapter, interesting times ahead
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Excellent chapter, wow they certainly impressed lots of people with their singing, and then a knockout surprise, and another cliffhanger, nasty but so very good
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Interesting chapter, lots of drama and I wonder what is going to happen when he sees the choir master
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Awesome chapter, I am glad that he finally has all the support that he needs , onwards and upwards.
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Interesting chapter, I am not Very keen in the spying aspect . But bang away deep and hard
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Interesting start to what seems is going to be an entertaining and exciting story, I can't wait for more
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Awesome chapter, I am glad that he is settling in well, I think that the "step idiot" is going to try to cause some problems, interesting times ahead
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Awesome chapter, I am glad that he finally has all the support that he needs, I can't wait for more developments.
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An excellent end to an awesome story, I hope that you will consider adding a second book because there seems to be so much still to said and done. But thank you for such an entertaining story
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Great start to what looks to be the beginning of another awesome story, I wonder why so many step parents are such bast#ds, I know literate are one and living but some are just plainly cruel and nasty, I can't wait to see how this story developes
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Excellent chapter, they seem to be settling in well, I wonder what drama lies ahead, I think that the function is going to be a eye opening for all
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Great story although I am rather clueless about American football, as I reside in South Africa, I am glad they got picked for different teams makes time together that much more special
