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Thank you Gee. I didn't really intend to single out the south as intolerant of change, but it seemed to work well
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Thank you Avid Some packs want to keep things as they are and others see progress as survival.
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Thank you Buz Solaris are rare, but Darius is able to mask his scent, making him appear more like he would be a human hunter. While he's gone animal, it has only been around a few people. With regards to legends of Elementals coming around when there's trouble, it could just be the trouble that was facing the council between the corruption and the rogue problem, but that's just a thought. How Ethan eventually deals with ferals beyond his pack is still in the planning stages, but you're right. It does always leave open the possibility of an ambush.
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Thank you Lux. I didn't know how this one would play out for the readers. I wanted to show the council working on their problems but worried it might come across as boring
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Bryce read the sentence as the accused stood defiantly. “President James Larson, Vice President Tom Preston, and Security Director Todd Miller. It is the judgment of this congress that when the moon rises Saturday night, you will be put to death for your crimes against the Lycan Council, its member packs, and all lycan. Your assets and properties are to be seized and placed in trust to compensate your victims should any be found to still be living. May the lunar spirits show more mercy on you
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Thank you CG. There probably would have been fights in the Alpha meeting if it hadn't been for Aiden and Ethan bursting into flames. A display like that would be enough to scare most.
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Thank you LadyDe for the wonderful compliments Sorry for leaving off that one additional sentence
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Thank you Buz. Best way to fight a bully is to make them fight on your terms. Ethan doesn't have the experience of fighting as a wolf, so his human experience fills in the blanks while his wolf helps to guide him. As far as Dorian's change, he did get his ass handed to him by a younger, recently turned wolf. The apology at the end of the right was pretty much a requirement from having lost, he did shake hands with Ethan. Ethan can cure a feral by touch or even by sending his healing energies through the ground. It's possible that handshake had more to it, though that is pure speculation. JP remains a question. He's committed many horrible crimes but the Alpha had placed his fate in Aiden's hands.
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Thank you Avid Having one of the largest packs, John understands how to address a group and isn't afraid of putting himself at risk for the greater good. Having Aiden and Ethan at the ready was definitely an advantage though.
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Thanks Centex. I kept making little adjustments to the fight scene right up until I posted it. Looking at it and wondering if I was missing something. By the time I hit post, I was happy with the result. Aiden and Ethan turning into fireballs in the Alpha meeting was needed for two reasons. It brought it out at the start that these two are far different from the typical wolf and it protected John and their allies from being silenced. It did also let the Security Director know that the reports he'd seen were correct, but that they two were well beyond his reach to control.
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JP is keeping a low profile yet attending the meetings as any other Alpha would. No way of knowing for sure if he placed any vote or abstained. He knows his fate rests with Aiden so he will keep doing what is expected of him during the con. The mates would have had their own committee meeting to attend during the main Alpha session. They just had added security in case things went badly in the meeting and someone attempted to capture or kill the mates.
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Thank you JT. The two same sex Alphas should make good friends to Ethan and Aiden. They can give advise and perspective that other Alphas can't.
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Thank you Lux. There is still much for Ethan to learn and he's been giving a seat at the adults table. His inner wolf guides him, but the lessons he learned on the street play a big role in how he deals with different events. Aiden and the current Alpha pair try to help him learn, but some things are learned through experience. Originally the conference was going to be one chapter, but like with the rest of the story, I prefer taking a slow pace
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Thank you Buz. I think in a way, your reaction to JP is what I was hoping for after his backstory came out. He started out perhaps with the right intentions, but he kept going and took pleasure from his position as leader of the gang and as you point out, there is his family that adores him.
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Of course now you have another week to wait before finding out what happens next
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The two wolves slowly circled each other; one looking for an opportunity to strike a quick, devastating blow, and the other studying his opponent to see how he would fight. Their heads were down and teeth bared as they snarled. The grey’s ears were flat back while the white’s panned forward. Neither took his eyes off his adversary. Dorian was larger and more experienced. He had been through many fights in his life and one more against a young wolf seemed hardly worth the effort. Putting a mo
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Thank you Taurec. Ethan's Alpha told him he had to fight wolf only and could not use his extra gifts. You can blame Jean-Pierre for the things he did while understanding how he got started in it. He did keep running the gang for years after taking power. Essentially he created to personalities, one as the ruthless gang leader and one as the small pack Alpha trying to look out for his own people.
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Thank you Patrick I had to actually go back and look, back in chapter 1 there is a reference to Ethan staying in shape from martial arts and swimming.
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Thank you Fantasyboy I like your assessment of Ethan. He does not like bullies and spent years defending himself from them. How he does against a seasoned Alpha is the question.
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Thank you, CG Yes, I admit it... I am an evil enough person to make everyone wait an entire week, but only because I'm still editing the next chapter, trying to make it as good as I can. Jean-Pierre knows his fate rests in Aiden's hands and that Aiden made it clear as crystal what would happen if he thought he was getting played. I still smile every time I read Ethan getting called "the little bitch" and him replying that only Aiden gets to call him that and then I picture their playroom.
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Thank you Mike I'm hoping the "little" guy does okay.
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Thank you Lux. Getting them out of their territory made for a nice writing change for me and placing it in somewhere that I would love to visit was an added bonus.
