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Running with the Pack 1. Running With The Pack

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Ethan Scott tires of life in the city after several years of living on the streets and decides a trip to the mountains is the change he needs. Little does he know what direction that change will take.

Some chapters contain characters getting a bit frisky, other chapters actually have sex involved, and there are some that have violence.  So this does have graphic content.

7/4/19 - Thanks to the editing work of Carlos Hazday, all chapters are now in their final edited version.  This edit qualifies as a major re-write, both from the amount of errors that are being fixed as well as new content. Just for reference the original word count was 260600.

I've created a forum post for additional discussion of the story beyond the reviews.  You're comments are greatly appreciated.  

http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/41066-running-with-the-pack/

Running with the Pack, WolfM, 2012-2016, All Rights Reserved

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  • Addictive/Pacing 21
  • Characters 21
  • Cliffhanger 8
  • Smoldering 11
  • Tearjerker 9
  • Unique 14
  • World Building 13

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  • 1. Chapter 1
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  • 2. Chapter 2
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  • 3. Chapter 3
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  • 4. Chapter 4
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  • 5. Chapter 5
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    • 16 Comments
  • 6. Chapter 6
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  • 7. Chapter 7
    • 7,358 Words
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  • 8. Chapter 8
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  • 9. Chapter 9
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  • 10. Chapter 10
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  • 11. Chapter 11
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  • 12. Chapter 12
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  • 13. Chapter 13
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  • 14. Chapter 14
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  • 15. Chapter 15
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  • 16. Chapter 16
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  • 17. Chapter 17
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  • 18. Chapter 18
    • 6,571 Words
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  • 19. Chapter 19
    • 5,915 Words
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  • 20. Chapter 20
    • 6,775 Words
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  • 21. Chapter 21
    • 5,417 Words
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  • 22. Chapter 22
    • 7,553 Words
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  • 23. Chapter 23
    • 6,112 Words
    • 10,420 Views
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  • 24. Chapter 24
    • 6,830 Words
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  • 25. Chapter 25
    • 7,396 Words
    • 10,115 Views
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  • 26. Chapter 26
    • 4,703 Words
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  • 27. Chapter 27
    • 6,456 Words
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  • 28. Chapter 28
    • 8,467 Words
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  • 29. Chapter 29
    • 6,867 Words
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  • 30. Chapter 30
    • 7,575 Words
    • 9,665 Views
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  • 31. Chapter 31
    • 6,518 Words
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  • 32. Chapter 32
    • 6,424 Words
    • 10,052 Views
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  • 33. Chapter 33
    • 6,486 Words
    • 18,860 Views
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  • 34. Chapter 34
    • 6,373 Words
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  • 35. Chapter 35
    • 6,960 Words
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  • 36. Chapter 36
    • 5,949 Words
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  • 37. Chapter 37
    • 7,379 Words
    • 10,782 Views
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  • 38. Chapter 38
    • 6,577 Words
    • 10,142 Views
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  • 39. Chapter 39
    • 7,719 Words
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  • 40. Chapter 40
    • 6,692 Words
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    • 10 Comments
  • 41. Chapter 41
    • 7,745 Words
    • 10,353 Views
    • 14 Comments
  • 42. Chapter 42
    • 8,532 Words
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  • 43. Chapter 43
    • 8,466 Words
    • 8,748 Views
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  • 44. Chapter 44
    • 8,634 Words
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  • 45. Chapter 45
    • 7,463 Words
    • 9,020 Views
    • 18 Comments
  • 46. Chapter 46
    • 4,428 Words
    • 22,511 Views
    • 20 Comments
  • 47. Chapter 47
    • 6,030 Words
    • 9,444 Views
    • 23 Comments
  • 48. Chapter 48
    • 5,812 Words
    • 8,254 Views
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  • 49. Chapter 49
    • 5,233 Words
    • 8,622 Views
    • 24 Comments
  • 50. Chapter 50
    • 1,029 Words
    • 12,308 Views
    • 104 Comments

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centexhairysub

   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

Have to say that I have enjoyed this each time that I have read it.  I read it as it was being posted the first time, then did a re-read a month or so after the initial posting; but decided to wait to do this last one until the author finished the re-write.  The time and energy that it took to add almost 40,000 words to a re-write/clean-up must have been staggering, but it was well worth it.  

I can be a very bitchy reader, and did pick up in the initial posting some of the technical issues that the author wanted to go back and fix.  I actually really admire his desire to do so, and purely from a readers point of view appreciate it greatly.  I feel that the story simply flows much better now versus the original posting.  

However the additional written areas that were added to the story helped more than anything.  They smoothed out a few plotting gaps and added much to the overall story.  In places, I could easily tell what was added and in others; I had to read a chapter twice to find hardly anything that was changed, and a few times could not find anything in particular chapters.  

This is a thoroughly enjoyable read that was made even better by the re-write/clean-up done by a truly dedicated author.  Cannot recommend this story enough, simply a delightful take of love and redemption, as well as finding the true power that is within us all.

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Acid07

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

I've read this story several times since I came to this site and enjoyed it every time.  Its setting of inclusiveness, awesome characters, and excellent plot make it a worthwhile read (or reread).  Ethan is an excellent protagonist and his actions, feelings, and thoughts drew me in throughout the story.  The antagonists for each "act" of the story feel believable for where you are in the tale.  Getting to go along this journey with Ethan & Aiden, along with several others, made for a great read (one that I'll probably repeat shortly).  Hope to see even more in this universe sometime soon!

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wenmale64

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

I just read this story and really liked the development of the characters and their world. The story included many situations that most could relate to things in our real world. I am a sucker for romance stories, but while this has romance it also has much much more. It is action packed, has times of suspense and several surprises that just keep you wanting to read more. I tend to read completed stories so binge reading is on my list. This story, having 50 chapters, definitely lends itself to binging. You will have trouble pausing your reading. I highly recommend this story!!!!

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Backwoods Boy

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   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

This is a remarkable adventure story by a very talented author, but it is also an excellent treatise on the importance of diversity and inclusiveness.  In addition, it is a testament to the significance of family and community, both those that we are born into and those that we adopt or adopt us over time.  What WolfM has created with the Lycan world is comparable to what J. K. Rowling created with the world of witchcraft and wizardry - a fantasy world brought vividly to life that leaves us wishing for more.

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AMMcGuire

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

I’ve read this story in it’s entirety multiple times now. It’s one of my favorites. I know what is going to happen in each chapter but still read every word! Very good plot and world building. 

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astone2292

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

This story had me blowing through chapters! I went through this story so fast, my husband had to start it after the third, "OH, COME ON!!" The author perfectly keeps the reader in his clutches as he ends each chapter. 

This story perfectly blends romance, drama, and action, and is in a class of it's own. The characters are relatable, but will surprise you with every step of the journey. I'm unsure if this book intends to be published, or is published at the time of this review, but I am ready to throw money at a copy for my bookshelf! 

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donjr101

   5 of 6 members found this review helpful 5 / 6 members

Great story. You deliver a wonderful look into the lives of your characters, full of suspense to keep the readers on the edge of their seats. Keep up the good work.

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mogwhy

   3 of 4 members found this review helpful 3 / 4 members

This was the second story on this site I read (my 1st review now, i think). The first time i read it, I actually binged read it in 2 sessions :P i mean it is 50 chapters after all. It started good and just got better. Second book is just as good, but different in style. No pressure, but I'm hoping for another book/story set in this world. PS: I've read this one 5 times now. (so far) 

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Peter J. Gee

   3 of 4 members found this review helpful 3 / 4 members

I have read this story twice and each time it is a revelation. Don't worry yourself into editing and editing, it is great as it stands. I'm glad that AI saved each chapter along the way, so at least I can say I have an original. While waiting for the next episode I will definitely be reading again.. Don't second guess yourself in what is a great story well written.

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lenhall

   2 of 3 members found this review helpful 2 / 3 members

Any idea when book 2 is coming?

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chris191070

· Edited by chris191070

   2 of 3 members found this review helpful 2 / 3 members

Great story. Perfect story from the point of Eithan and Aiden.

Since leaving my review in 2017, this story has gone through a major re-edit.

This really improves the story of Ethan and Alden as it has become a much smoother read.

It comes highly recommended.

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lenhall

   1 of 2 members found this review helpful 1 / 2 members

Can we please get some more work in this world and with these characters you have so beautifully created? I loved loved loved this story!

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