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WolfM

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  1. WolfM

    The Gates of Hell

    Thank you AC. As I toy around with poetry and try to figure it out, I find a joy in focusing on one or a few thoughts, feeling, or experiences. Bringing something to life in a large story seems easy. Doing so in a few words is challenging to me, but satisfying.
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    Family

    Thank you AC.
  3. WolfM

    Glue and Atoms

    Both of these are incredibly beautiful and touchingly sad. The wonderful thing is that jar of glue is limitless, forever refilling itself to put you back together. Hugz my friend.
  4. The castles great hall was brimming with guests, All celebrating their holiday cheer with zest. So many new faces it’s hard to keep track, As I wander around your warm loving pack. Aunts and uncles and cousins abound, While brothers and sisters all gather round. From far and near they’ve come to this town; To welcome a new wolf with joyous sound. My instinct had been to run and flee, But the smile on your face fills my heart w
  5. WolfM

    The Gates of Hell

    Thank you Michael. They had a sign placed over the door reading "Now entering the gates of hell." I didn't want to go, but I'm so glad I did.
  6. WolfM

    The Gates of Hell

    Thank you Parker.
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    The Gates of Hell

    If my boy didn't have the keys to the rental car, I might have run. lol. They are wonderful.
  8. WolfM

    The Long Walk

    Thank you @AC Benus. Just have to read more to find out Hugz to you.
  9. WolfM

    The Long Walk

    I think that's a good description for all my attempts here. lol. Thank you Backwoods
  10. Your hand holds mine in a reassuring grip; Though it might be to keep me from running. The touch and warmth offer some comfort, Yet with each step my feet feel like lead weights. The grand doors swing open as we slowly approach; In my mind it’s the gates of hell about to devour. Phantom forms appear beyond the portal; As I wonder if demons or angels await. Two figures greet you with unconditional love; As it turns out only angels will be found with
  11. Snowflakes fall like feathers; Fluffy, white, and beautifully silent. Landing on the trees with delicate grace; Painting a picture of peace and happiness. The house is covered in twinkling colored lights, Giving a false sense of calm to the horror I imagine within. The short walk to the door seems like miles, As anxiety, panic, and terror consume me. We approach the imposing castle doors, huge and strong; Built to keep all out or prevent a means of
  12. WolfM

    Chapter 26

    Thank you @Backwoods Boy This is one of the best compliments I could receive. This started out as a 1st person story for the original first six chapters I wrote. That format was quickly printing me into a corner I couldn't escape from. When reworked it in third person format, it opened up the possibilities I hoped for in starting the project.
  13. It's amazing how something so simple can convey so much. This is beautiful, tim.
  14. This is wonderful and a fitting start to year two of AAA 2.0.
  15. WolfM

    Chapter 18

    Thanks again @Backwoods Boy I'm sure they'd be friendly while you're on a walk. Sex scenes tend to be one of the more difficult aspects of writing for me.
  16. WolfM

    Chapter 17

    Thank you @Backwoods Boy Like i said before, sometimes when people pick up some of the smallest details it brings the biggest smile.
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    Chapter 14

    Thank you @Backwoods Boy I liked that I was getting a new chapter out every week. Looking back though, I wish I was putting out what is being posted in the rewrite. So much detail was missed at the time.
  18. WolfM

    Chapter 12

    @Backwoods BoyThere are so many possibilities when it comes to the various lore on shape shifting. Trying to build a history and not go totally overboard on it was difficult. At times I think I probably did add too much. Much like your writing, I could have incorporated a lot from Pacific Northwest lore. Thankfully the totem poles I remember from the Vancouver area didn't come to mind. Were those figures from learned shape shifters or from blood shifters? Are they one and the same, but don't know it? So many possibilities. (Hate when I forget to click quote before typing. lol)
  19. WolfM

    Chapter 10

    Sometimes it's when people notice the small, playful details that brings me the biggest smile.
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    Chapter 9

    It was fun thinking this stuff up
  21. It's beautiful!
  22. Happy Anniversary for a year of the new AAA. It's a great selections of authors and always wonderful to see their responses. Thanks to all who participate and make this possible.
  23. WolfM

    Chapter 8

    Yep, you'll have to keep reading to find your answers Sometimes just hinting about it is just as hot. I don't mind writing a full on sex scene, but it isn't always needed. It's a good mating/joining process no matter if their lycan or Native American. I still don't know how I managed to go through the last chapter without missing a single week. Each chapter was in process for three to four weeks before posting, but it was a lot of work.
  24. WolfM

    Chapter 7

    Vision, strength, especially smell and hearing are all heightened in the lycan. If their in their animal or human form, the senses are about equal for them. Blow a dog whistle and I lycan is sure to hear it. As for "other" abilities, I'll leave that to your imagination, but I will say, stamina is also improved.
  25. WolfM

    Chapter 20

    Thank you so much, Normischell When I originally wrote this, I thought I was doing a good job. Posting a new chapter every week, I know there were things I was missing. Carlos has done a wonderful job of editing and teaching me what I need to be watching for. This gives me a chance to fill in details I didn't realize I'd missed. I read over that WOW wiki page several times when I was trying to decide on Ethan's true nature.
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