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This is wonderful. I don't know anything about this form, but I really enjoy the style.
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Thank you, @AC Benus
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This is wonderful. I remember those feelings when I lived in a colder climate. Even with the cold storms I've had lately, it's nice to have sun so the fingertips can warm up.
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Thank you as always, Backwoods
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Based on your intro, I was expecting something different in the poem. The happy response from the older gentleman was wonderful, as it the poem
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The Evidence Room - a haibun
WolfM commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The Evidence Room - a haibun
I had to find this after you mentioned it. I've seen the room in pictures and movies, even read about it and the horrors within. Like MacGreg said, this is a powerful poem. It is also a beautifully chilling tribute to those who's screams are still heard. You truly are a brilliantly gifted writer. -
Thank you, Parker My boy sparks a lot of my poems and the people here like you help me refine my work
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Kitt You put it perfectly!
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Thank you, Parker
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Thank you, Molly Your words perfectly describe it. For years I've had people ask, "Why can't you just be normal?" My boy says I wouldn't be as fun if I was just another normal clone.
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Thanks @Backwoods Boy Your quote was running around in my head while I was working on this. I just couldn't get it to fit with the syllable count.
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Thank you, Jeff
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Anytime I make you smile I consider my mission accomplished
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What makes someone normal? Is it those who follow like clones, Or try to fit a mold? Maybe it is the unbroken. Who really decides, What is normal and who is not? I happily embrace Those the world says do not belong. The broken ones like me, Who fight their demons every day, For a chance at a smile. Medically and socially, Emotionally too. Mental health affects all of us. They say to take your pills, And it will make you feel normal,
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Sadly, it's more common than it should be.
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Thank you, Jeff. I lived in Bremerton, WA years ago. Where I"m at now doesn't get all that much rain, normally.
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Thank you, tim. I won't stop if you won't.
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Thank you, Parker As frustrated as I was when it happened, I could laugh enough to write it once I was showered, dry, and drinking hot tea.
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Thank you, AC I've been enjoying the Lyric format, but I think Tanka is my favorite. The reference to the super bloom is since the deserts near me have gotten so much rain this winter, the wild flower blooms are expected to be incredible. As mad as I was getting at the horse for laughing, he decided it was playtime. After falling for the third time in the mud, he came over to nuzzle my face and apologize.
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Thanks BB. I know you've been getting a lot of snow this year. I'd kind of like to see that here, but people don't know how to handle water on the roads. Ice or snow would be a disaster
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Depression is the house guest who doesn't know it's time to leave. The acquaintance of a friends, ex's roommate who thinks she belongs at every gathering. There is nothing ugly about you my friend. There is a beauty that shines within you and you're loved for who you are.
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Work must still be done As the clouds weep their cold tears Shoveling, cleaning It is the price I must pay For working in the warm sun ***** Drops of water fall Forming small streams on the ground Relentless is rain And yet each drop is special As it soaks me to the bone ***** They seek dry shelter Finding warmth inside their stalls But one won't listen Whinnying for joy again As I fall in the cold mu
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This is another wonderful edition of AAA. As always, its great learning about the fantastic authors here, even that wolf-whatever guy Thanks for putting this together Carlos and letting me be a part of it.
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A lot of the poems I read here, as well as the ones I write try to paint a mental imagery. These, at least to me, are putting questions in the head. Questions that people should ask and discuss. Well done and thanks for sharing them
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Thanks, Backwoods That's been one of the joys in doing this rewrite is filling in the pieces I missed the first time around. I'm happy with what I originally submitted, but in an effort to keep up with my posting schedule, I see now I sacrificed what the story is now becoming.
