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Jordn87

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  1. You know it freaks me out sometimes how some readers pick stuff out, lets just say not all of Brady's past is happy to see him . Only family Brady has is his father Van Jordan
  2. I can't say anything about the bad guys because I wont give anything away
  3. Your one of the few I underestimated the dislike for Brady by readers lol I am hoping as more of the real plot is revealed people will start to like him more
  4. Kissing is Brady's secret weapon, its the one way to stop Nessay from going over the edge or talking lol
  5. Unfortunately for Brady its not the last time he will feel Nessay's wrath
  6. Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy the story
  7. From personal experience, it works pretty well lol Especially if you haven't kissed them in a while, it usually stuns them long enough to move on haha
  8. I will say this Brady isn't innocent by far, but that might or might not help them both deal with this issue I am hoping chaps 6 & 7 will show case more of Brady's sincerity and character
  9. Waking in the arms of a man who you never thought could or would be yours is an amazing feeling. I could feel his hard body and morning wood rubbing against my back and ass. Opening one I peaked at the clock and saw it was just after 6 am, knowing I needed to get up and get ready to go in and start to get things back to normal with the bar. I really could lay here all day, and just enjoy this feeling. Nothing could happen to me, I felt secure and loved. Though my bladder was objecting majorly so
  10. Should be fixed Should be the correct number five now
  11. The van sat around the corner from the little fag's home. Inside were two men, hearts filled with hate. Both men had watched the taller fag arrive and bust his way in. Why did fate have to interfere in their plans? They were so close to ending that little fag. Amazing what can happen to a home with little gasoline and a match. It had been months now of trying to get that spic to pack and leave, breaking things in his bar, smashing windows, slashing tires, using business ties to cut off fina
  12. Jordn87

    Brittle as a Bird

    I love the series between this one and the next book, one of few I go to when bored!
  13. Brady is pretty cocky so hiding really isn't his foray its more charm you into thinking what you thought you wont think by getting you to think you thought that you think it if that makes sense lol
  14. It was hard to write, I had Logics song on repeat during the couple hours it took. its the shortest chapter in the book but, I think myself the most important one.
  15. Thanks for reading Brady I think will grow on people when they see under his arrogant shell I agree with you though Brady deserved that nut shot and punch, don't worry though Nessay will get his
  16. haha but trailers are so much fun especially to tease the readers
  17. Its Nessays specialty to be able to bring Brady back down when he gets too cocky
  18. Thank you so much Things really pick up with chapter five, ill be introducing the bad guys of this book. And of course we have a door that needs a fixing lol
  19. Underneath the confidence and bravery Brady is soft hearted. I think people will start to like him more next chapter when his personality shows more
  20. I had a teacher in middle school who was 6’6 skinny as a rail and drove a bug it was such a sight
  21. Haha well chap 5 ends in one I think is better than this one and then theirs not another for a few chapters
  22. I think this story is going to be amazing! I cannot wait to see what comes next!
  23. I know I am going through it on my side, just because I know how much fun the next chapter is. Especially since we meet the evil goers of my little tale and it ends on a cliff hanger lol Hopefully by Tuesday I'll hear something from him bout the chapter?
  24. Who would've thought that a 5’5 guy could pack such a wallop? After the knee/punch combo all I could do was moan and hold my baby makers.I could hear the guys and some dude whom I assume was a friend of Nessay’s screaming his name. I know I deserved that punch, but jeez, did he have for go for low blow, too? “Hey guys just ignore me, I am fine! Don’t think I will be having babies anytime soon!” That seemed to get people's attention and I was helped up and into a chair with lots of ice
  25. Well theirs the small issue of the door being fixed first lol
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