@W_L Oh, and I just have a few questions, regarding the wilderness survival story.
Question One: Are the names of these two boys finalized? I mean, their last names are Deere and Wolfe? I don't know if other readers might feel the same way, but for myself? If I read those names in a story, I'd get distracted every time they were mentioned. Just something to think about.
Question Two: Where exactly will the story take place, in terms of geography? Are they in the desert? The woods? The Appalachian Mountains?