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So many questions........
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Sorry for the delay, this one took a minute. Some of you won't be surprised but probably feel vindicated.
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Langley VA, CIA Headquarters – Morning Crisis Briefing One Week After “The Incident” The sound of her heels echoed like a metronome through the long, tiled corridor. Sharp, controlled, and unrelenting. Cassandra Temple moved with a precision born of decades in the field, her tailored coat flowing behind her like the cloak of an old god everyone forgot was still watching. In one hand, a battered file folder packed with notes and printouts that no longer made sense; in the other, a ha
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Chapter 1 - The Lug Head
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Lug Head
It won't lol. This story actually isnt all that far from being done I just need to do it. As for 'well written mysteries' No idea if 'Encrypted' fits into that yet LOL. Next chapter of that one will be posted either later today or tomorrow, once I stop adding stuff to it. -
Chapter 1 - The Lug Head
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Lug Head
Yeah I need to read it myself that’s usually what sparks the drive. I’ll try to fit it in soon between the new ones I got going -
Sir I'm going to need you to step over here for a minute....
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The next day was more or less a repeat of the last few since I’d woken up. I usually started the morning with Rodney’s relentlessly cheerful voice, and now that I was encouraged to move around on my own, he made sure I did just that. After checking my vitals, thumbs up again, apparently I was trending in the right direction, he helped me to the bathroom so I could take care of things. I washed my face, brushed my teeth, and managed it all without help. Standing was getting easier. The
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Oops forgot to publish chapter 4, my bad. It’ll be up in 4ish hours from this post lol
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Chapter 10 - Forgiveness
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Forgiveness
Yeah I really need to complete this before I forget where I was going with it. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I’ll try to fit this one in somehow since it is one of my “first loves” lol -
Or it just could be the fact the car rolled a couple of times before hitting the tree and his lower back didn't enjoy the spin cycle. And the devil is always in the details, isn't it? It's so hard to try to leave breadcrumbs that people won't figure out too soon even when you try to make it as innocuous was possible. Sigh, I won't be able to hide stuff from you guys for too much longer.
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Nothing to see here! Move Along! Totally normal circumstances. It could happen to anybody. "At this time we can't confirm nor deny. That is our statement moving forward."
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@Tris I'm glad your enjoying it, we still have a couple (maybe that +1 chapters) of setup to get through, I'm taking my time lol.
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He's definitely making progress. Or is he? 😉
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It had turned into a full-blown parade. The first day had been quiet. Just Doctor Morgan (Leah, as she pointedly reminded me) and Rodney, the day nurse with a smirk that could break hearts and a bedside manner that somehow made being helpless feel a little less humiliating. But that quiet didn’t last. Now it felt like I’d met everyone employed in this hospital, short of the janitorial staff. And I wasn’t ruling them out yet. A team from Neurology showed up not long after breakfast
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i can tell you thats exactly what's going to happen and it's way worse than you think it is lol.
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Oh it warms my heart that you guys have no idea whats coming. I might actually surprise a couple of you during this.
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Almost but not quite
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So I'm glad you guys are enjoying it. I just hope you like the rest of it.
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Eventually yes. We are going to hear more about the accident, sort of. There still isn't a lot to go on but theories will start to develop. Yep! He's on his way. And yeah I had to have one character that was a little too happy all the time. So we get Rodney.
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Haha yeah. That was more for my amusement than anything else. Also memory is a fickle thing.
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Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it and yeah it's just the beginning.
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Thanks Parker! It's going to get crazier from here. (Well not chapter 3, but soon.)
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Dun dun duuuuuun!
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His brain is special, you'll get more stuff like this later on lol.
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There was something comforting about the darkness. Was it familiar? Yes. It was familiar. It had been here before, so it took comfort in the void. It was silent. No danger lived here, no pressure. Just… silence. A silence that wrapped around thought like a blanket. And for a while, that was enough. No breath to struggle for. No sound to chase. No body to betray it. But even comfort has limits. The silence began to fray. Something tugged at the edges. A whisper…not in
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