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Between Shadows and Light
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Between Shadows and Light
Posting schedule for this one is going to be all over the place and probably random as hell. I'll need to get the next few Chapters out of editing and posted so it may take a day or three for the next set of chapters to slap you guys around. If you like this story please continue to show it with the likes, comments, etc, it does help. Also if you feel this story is worth it, throw some recommendations out there for others. Thanks for all your support guys.- 41 comments
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Greg Kincaid was tired. The last twenty-four hours had bled together into one long, unbroken stretch of interviews, data analysis, and far too much driving. After wrapping his initial conversations with Cassandra Temple and Benjamin Reade, he’d barely paused before launching into the next phase of the investigation. It had started with the car. Rachel Carrington’s Cadillac had been equipped with an agency-issued tracker, and the data pulled from it told a story: one that ended abruptly some
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@John Henry Welcome to the chaos dude lol.
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Chapter 10 - Forgiveness
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Forgiveness
Sorry but my muse slapped me so hard lmao. -
Chapter 10 - Forgiveness
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Forgiveness
I think it's actually a good thing that I didn't post what I wrote. Because now I'm not comfortable with it. I've got 'Encrypted' rolling pretty hard right now in my head to the point it's in my dreams not sure if that's a good thing or not, plus I need to update 'Just Maybe' and there is another story that's in the system but not published yet. So it's a mess of words that need to be worked out all over the place. -
Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
Actually I did but the laptop the last chapters was written on is no longer functional so I'll have to redo it -
Oof so many questions so little answers. Is Josh a cyber-bio-genetic-creation? Was he a target for the goons in the hospital? Is he even really awake right now or still dying in the back seat of that car? Stay tuned at the same Bat Time, on the same Bat channel. lol
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Yeah setup ran kind of long with this one and it's not really done yet. Poor Josh hasn't even started yet he's still in the hospital and I have so many things for him to experience. This one might run kinda long for a story.
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First of all IT'S ME I SWEAR! As for Josh, it might take him a while to figure out what exactly is real and what isn't because who knows at this point lmao. As for the mysterious body in 617... Identity beware.
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This situation probably drew more attention then Josh would have cared for even if he knew what the hell was going on which really he doesn't. (At least for the moment)
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I think your most immediate questions will be answered soon, but even those answers ask for questions so careful with that lol As for "probably not even close to figuring it out" your closer than you think. but the 'who what where why' is far from being forthcoming.
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Those are very good questions and yeah his world is totally going to change... Or is it?
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You can think of him as anyone you want! And you're welcome!
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It felt like just yesterday that I’d sat with the Kincaids and Natalie, all of us quietly agreeing on one goal: Be released by Christmas. The medical team had taken that goal and treated it like a finish line in a championship race. Every day since, it felt like someone was sprinting beside me, urging me forward. Not one of them ever gave me a reason to doubt I’d make it. They’d redone all of my imaging, chest X-rays, CT scans, ultrasounds, zeroing in on the damage to my left side. The coll
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I was going to wait until morning to post chapter 6 but given the comments… yall need it so enjoy!
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Yeah my first comment I posted was probably meant for you.
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I swear everything I read from you has me crying because I'm trying not to wake everyone up in the middle of the night from laughing so hard.
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Aw what was cute.
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Clues are everywhere lol
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yeah this was the original intent from the get go lol.
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Yeah I've got to finish what was supposed to be chapter 5 and will now be chapter 6. I was actually going to save this interlude for later but it kind of fit, and really you can't have the countries intelligence network hampered with no relief for a long period of time which is what Josh has to go through. So you get this chapter 5 which answers some questions but gives a bunch more. The government gets some functionality, and I get moving towards chapter 10+ faster lol.
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@weinerdog I'll edit the story itself and add tags as we find out lmao.
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Josh doesn't know anything. Or does he? Does he know that he knows or does that part of him that knows make him forget that he knows that he knows. You know?
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Maybe even a little: Cerberus's voice echoed through the dark room as the indicator light blinked. "I"m sorry Cassandra. I can't let you do that."
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You have no idea! Welcome to my psychological triller/teen romance/procedural cop show/advanced tech AI scifi/possibly deadly spy/ story. I'll see how many tropes and genres I can pack into this one.
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