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  1. Jeff Burton
    I’m going to try this.
  2. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 22

    Jeff Burton commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 22

    Damn what a ride.
  3. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 21

    Jeff Burton commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 21

    Oh oh oh here we go the count down clock to doomsday is finally ticking. We’re at defcon 2 people!
  4. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 19

    Jeff Burton commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Well damn. This chapter certainly adds to the complication at hand.
  5. Jeff Burton
    Thank you!
  6. Jeff Burton
    There's still a couple of chapters to go before we get to what happened to Chris. I'm trying to get Chapters 11 and 12 both done before Chapter 11 gets posted. I'm also working on the next Chapter of Ben's story, and well I started a new one that I haven't posted yet, if I can make any headway on it without bawling my eyes out because it's personal to me anyway (this is that happy story @weinerdog wanted.) and if I can get it planned a little better this time around I will probably have that one saved with chapters in queue to slid around with the other two.
  7. Jeff Burton
    It was quiet, and peaceful. I enjoyed it.
  8. Jeff Burton
    I don't attention of any kind outside of recognition if someone truly means it, yet I deal with it as politely as I can. It makes me uncomfortable and I can't see why anyone would want to be at the center of it. My birthday was at the beginning of the week thankfully the attention was minimal, and I did thank those that took notice lol.
  9. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 17

    Jeff Burton commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 17

    I'm just glad he finally read the journal. I swear if I was Seth Killian would have woken up threatening to be strangled in his sleep if he didn't read the damn thing. As for the who dunnit I have a couple of ideas but I'm gonna wait a little bit lol.
  10. Jeff Burton
    I'm not totally evil.
  11. Jeff Burton
    I spent three days in the hospital. I slept for most of the first one and a half days, and the rest of the time was just for observation. I was told that I had been lucky - no broken bones, no severe lacerations. My head never hit anything, and the helmet I was wearing did its job. I had two bruised ribs, scrapes, and cuts along my arms, but other than that, I was fine. Chris was a different story. When I first saw him in the hospital my heart did eventually break allowing some of that emo
  12. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 28

    Jeff Burton commented on dkstories's story chapter in Chapter 28

    What the hell did I just read? 4 books 878,239 words, 48 hours of reading spread over 4 and a half days. I always had a concept in my head of an endless love that would loop through time but my God that was fucking amazing.
  13. Jeff Burton
    They are. No where near the level I need it to be but it’s still there.
  14. Jeff Burton
    I'll revisit it when we get closer to the end. Chapter 10 kinda opens the doors for all of it and I just finished the rewrite sooo.
  15. Jeff Burton
    You seem very well. Things look peaceful. I'm not quite as well. I thought you should know,
  16. Jeff Burton
    FYI, I ended up reworking Chapter 10. After the reaction I got from this one I decided to tone it down a little. None of the major plot points have changed, I just couldn't go full on jagged little pill on you people since this one was already so rough. Oh and I've got three possible endings for this story, I'm also trying to decide on that because I don't want to be predictable but I also am not sure I want to do the one I really want to do because ehh... I'm not sure I can handle it much less you guys. After the story is over though and if people are interested I'll list what they where when we get into comments when the story is over.
  17. Jeff Burton
    "Angel" by Massive Attack in case anyone's curious as to why Jacob's Advocate Chapter 6 went off the rails. Man I wish I could remember the song I was listening to when I had that image of Chris against the tree telling Nathan his world was about to burn that was a sad moment. Music influences my narrative by a lot especially at key moments. Sometimes I have to use it as a catalyst to force myself to feel the emotion I need for the scene I'm writing it's really crazy how it works.
  18. Jeff Burton
    You know Jacob's Advocate Chapter 6 happened because the song changed on my home pod at the wrong time.
  19. Jeff Burton
    I do have some ideas but I have no idea how long I'd be able to pull it off before someone ends up in a hospital. it's like Corey's and Nathan's date. I was like "aww this is so cute, I love this they're so happy. what can I do to fuck it up so bad everyone cries." It's like I need a meeting group for this. "Hi. I'm Jeff. And I have a problem. I can't stop ruining my characters lives."
  20. Jeff Burton
    there's an idea. John let's write a story together that tries to divide everyone's emotional and mental state by zero. lol we aren't but we've talked in the past so yeah.
  21. Jeff Burton
    Yeah well the last 2 chapters is nothing but everyone making mistakes so why not let Corey make a few as well. Plus he was busy with his parents and it ran later than he thought, so he's not really to blame. Now if Nathan had said 'meet you at my house' bam problem solved. Life is never that easy though especially when I'm the masochistic sadist dictating everyone's life.
  22. Jeff Burton
    I think xanax, lexipro and a few shots of vodka would work better. I'm almost done making everyone cry I promise. Then we move to Salvaging the Road to Redemption so I can do it all over again. I promise I'll write yall a nice calm story where nothing bad happens at some point.
  23. Jeff Burton
    I'm gonna PM you my reply to this because boy I've got one.
  24. Jeff Burton
    My heart goes out to you my guy. It takes someone special to be able to do that kind of work.
  25. Jeff Burton
    We have a winner. details to follow at some point.
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