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Jeff Burton

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  1. Oh we got a ways to go before the end, lets hope even the good doctor and put humpty back together again after we get there though.
  2. Funny story, I somehow ended up listening to that song on repeat (BECAUSE SOMEONE MADE ME THINK OF IT) somewhere in the middle of this chapter, and kept typing till I reached the end. I think the lyrics (and the chapter title) ended up hitting better on this one than the previous, especially at the end. Fatal is my favorite flaw, it's a lesson I can't seem to learn no matter how hard I try. Maybe these two can, and I'll learn something from the journey.
  3. Both of them make me want to yell. I know what Corey's problem is, but Nathan has completely lost his center, or never really had it to begin with. Nathan is being impulsive, it's what the anger makes him do. And without Corey to balance it out and make it go away, well gasoline on a fire. Also Nathan's cleaning habits is born from me, it's what I do when something is wrong. I'll scrub everything especially if I'm actually mad. Usually it was my ex's signal that he'd done something (or not done something) because he'd come home and smell bleach and yell "I don't know what I did but I'm sorry!"
  4. I spent that following weekend wallowing in my own thoughts. To keep my brother off the scent, I came home and told him about that evening, about how cool Corey's parents were. To give him something juicy to chew on I even told him about the kiss in Corey's bedroom and how we had rubbed our lips raw that night. I felt bad for not sharing the part that was bugging me, nor did I share the tense moment Corey and I had before I left. It felt like I was starting to slip back into my old patte
  5. And I'm over here counting the number of times 'little' was used in that explanation.
  6. Thanks Dan, I'm still working on Chapter 8, should be done in a couple of days or I could finish in 10 minutes, whatever my ADHD lets me do.
  7. When does the Oompa Loompa break out into song? I don't want to miss it.
  8. Wow, after all that I'm still taller.
  9. #shortpeoplesyndrome I can't talk shit I'm only like 5'8 myself.
  10. Me neither but after my last major experience, it isn't worth the grief lol.
  11. Of course I suck. I wouldn't be here if I didn't. I swallow too as if any of that's your business.
  12. Oh Houston, nevermind now I see what the problem is.
  13. I appreciate it Dan.
  14. GIANT TRIBBLES! *squees with glee*
  15. I want to repeat my previous question, but my family has a history of telling authority where they can shove it now I get where all this aggression comes from when trying to be forced into submission by the Drewth.
  16. Welcome back and don’t feel bad that was me too.
  17. SINCE WHEN!? 😂
  18. I agree with the above. It brings back some memories but also a reminder that I sometimes need to hear.
  19. Well that was an unexpected level of endorphins, LOL WHAT IS WITH THOSE SHOES!?
  20. Oooooh a wise guy eh?
  21. That's the way I feel about the ones I currently have going. They wouldn't have gotten posted at all had I not been doing it as I went, because it took me 21 years to get over the fear of actually posting it. The first Chapter of one of my currently running stories I wrote in 2005. It literally sat in an archive folder forgotten till spring of last year. I found another one I haven't told anyone about that was like 5 chapters in, and I've been cleaning it up and adding to it. Hell I've got completed yet un submitted entries for the 2006, 2007, 2008 and 2009 Anthologies for crying out loud. Sometimes you have to do it from the seat of your pants. Or it'll never get read.
  22. IM SORRY! I've been in a mood for the last 3 days and it's effecting everything I do.
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