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  1. Jeff Burton
    I've had to reread everything multiple times in order to make sure I wasn't forgetting anything myself. Hell I've even found details that I forgot about. But thats the way it goes when you take a break for a year lol.
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    Chapter 12

    Jeff Burton commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 12

    Had to drop a comment. There is no useful content in this comment. Too busy reading this story and waiting for the next chapter ❤️
  3. Jeff Burton
    😏
  4. Jeff Burton
    HEY I haven’t even done anything! … Yet
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    Chapter 10

    Jeff Burton commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Hell I’ve got 3 in progress now and 2 I’ve started but not posted lol
  6. Jeff Burton
    no spoilers i have not had a chance to watch it yet.
  7. Jeff Burton
    I think you read my mind on that one dude. Because I've been wondering about that for a couple of days now. Now I get it LOL.
  8. Jeff Burton
    Thanks dude, this story was a total accident that happened when I was writing Salvaging the Road to Redemption Chapter 2 or 3 I think. Either way I had writers block for about an hour trying to get something to work and it wasn't working so I opened another doc file and started free writing hoping it would help me out. That damn essay Tyler was writing and wasn't happy with was basically how I felt about the chapter I was working on and it just kept going from there. I had someone tell me once that sometimes the best works of art are born out of a mistake, in this case this one was born out of frustration from a chapter I couldn't write correctly lol. Then the characters took over and bam 8 chapters later here we are. 🤷‍♂️
  9. Jeff Burton
    It's funny how details like that are often overlooked when you read something isn't it? I've slowly been removing the pieces of the janga tower that is Ben's mental state since Chapter 1. He wasn't ready, he thought he was, but the fact is he so wasn't. Benjamin just doesn't have the support structure in place. Or does he and he just doesn't know it's there and doesn't know how to use it? All I can say is, poor Benjamin. I have so much more to say about this character and where it comes from but I'd be giving too much away. But I can say, with this story, 'the devil is in the details.' Even if that detail is in a few words buried in the chapter.
  10. Jeff Burton
    And HAPPY BIRTHDAY’
  11. Jeff Burton
    I leave for a few hours and …
  12. Jeff Burton
    "Morning sleepy head." A familiar voice echoed in my last vestiges of sleep, rousing me to a more wakeful state. I looked around to take stock of where I was, then I remembered. Still at the hospital. "Amanda." I said softly as my eyes peaked before closing again, "Where have you been." "I've been at home Tyler. I had to take a minute to breathe. Things have been a little too heavy lately." She replied honestly as she sat in one of the chairs beside my bed. "Yes, they
  13. Jeff Burton
    You don't need to worry about what I think lol
  14. Jeff Burton
    Morning!
  15. Jeff Burton
    Awwwwwwwww Same. I worked last night, came home, doing some writing then I got to get a haircut and go to my nieces birthday party, which I was told my attendance was required. lol So I'll sleep at some point between now and Sunday.
  16. Jeff Burton
    Oh don't worry about me, seeing the little red thing makes me feel wanted. 😂
  17. Jeff Burton
    This makes me happy, because it's a letter I already wrote. It's been sitting in my stories folder for months now.
  18. Jeff Burton
    oops double posted no idea why.
  19. Jeff Burton
    This one is special to me as well. Eventually when it ends there's going to be a chapter with my thoughts, reasoning, and personal experiences, that made this whole thing possible.
  20. Jeff Burton
    My other problem is chapter 7 of this story is so goddamn cute, I feel bad for what they may end with up doing in the future
  21. Jeff Burton
    If I could nail Jacob’s Advocate Chapter 8 I’d be happy I’m on draft revision 8. Ive probably typed enough revisions for it to be its own story at this point. No idea why that one is being so difficult.
  22. Jeff Burton
    i really don’t wish for stuff to happen on the first day but you know I don’t beat around the bush so my official comment is, “I haven’t written it yet” 😂
  23. Jeff Burton
    That is the theme for the end of chapter 5 and this one really. Because really the person going through it is in the dark because their thoughts are so all over the place they can no longer connect the dots or see the obvious. Doesn't help either that there's something else entirely going on but I may be too subtle for people to pick up on it.
  24. Jeff Burton
    Originally chapters 5 and 6 was just chapter 5. And it was missing a lot of content from both, but I've got the setups I needed done so now I can get to the juicy stuff.
  25. Jeff Burton
    Night!
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