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Ah an AU of dancing!
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Totally did not see that comimg. Tj disappointed me this chapter. Although i can see why he reacted like that. On the one hand he has a right to be angry that people are keeping secrets from him but on the other he doesnt have anyone but himself to blame. He keeps calling lucas his best friend but when has he talked to him recently?
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WHAT?!?!?!?!?
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I think me and you are gonna get along great! Ill have to pull out my british insult guide!
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Im gonna use a lot of naughty words arent i?
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Not sure if im looking forward to them.
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Im gonna be honest, jack needs him a new guy. Not jimmy or jeff. Theyre both too clingy and jealous and then think its perfectly alright to fool around right in front of the object of their affection. Theyre good friends, but crap boyfriend material when it comes to jack. Tracy would be good but he seems content being friends.
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Not all of them! I can see myself liking lucas.
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Oh we expect cliffhangers already!
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Thats alot more than i was expecting. Ok thats a lie i thought youd tell me im 100% right and im your favorite reader for figuring out your masterplan.
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See now I'm thinking its douchepants.
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Ok i am kind of hoping its lucas that came in and snuggled with tj. I just hope he gives him a chance.
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Ok so good news and bad news. Bad news is chapter isnt ready yet. Good news is im workng on it. Im also working on another story so my time is divided. I have plenty of ideas for jam bouncing around i my head. Heck of you have ideas let me know If you want to check out the other story heres the link it's a shifter story heads up if thats not your thing..
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Wooo messiah! I loved that story! I kind of miss ryder and teddy. Might go reread that now!
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Nooo. Not Po!
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Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
Wesley8890 commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
My best advice, which is what a good author friend told me is, write what you feel is right. Writing is such a cathartic thing. Ill be honest when I'm writing I'm not thinking about what the readers think at that moment. I'm writing for one person, me. Now yes i may care what they say after I'm finished.what i love about your stories is that they are you! They give me glimpses of what has shaped your life. Its the best kind of writing in my opinion. Dont be concerned because a few negtatove nancies get their panties in a bunch because they can't follow the rabbit.you followed it caught it and cooked it in this chapter. Never apologize for what you write. -
Well heres my tneory, feel free to tell me nothing, So toby hinted that levi was not giving Rhys his rightful share, maybe confronted the douche. Levi waited until the best moment for an accident to happen that could benefit not only him but rhys and cause publicity, while at the same time getting rid of a romantic rival and the guy who could out him. Bing bang boom rhys and toby have a drunken fight, toby ends up dead, rhys is in headlines getting publicity and who benefits from that, levi. Now levi can rebrand rhys like a phoenix rising from the ashes yet again benefiting levi, while keeping rhys in his clutches because rhys believes he owes levi. How did i do?
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Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
Wesley8890 commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
His story is about whatever he wants it to be about. Just because thats the overall description of the story doesn't mean he cant add in parts he considers relevant. These two chapters were relevant to a main characters backstory. Its called character development and it can happen anywhere throughout a story, up to and including a final chapter. -
Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
Wesley8890 commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
Has anyone diagnosed him with adhd? This chapter kind of hit hard for me. Im very familiar with hospice. My mother was on it for six years before succumbing to lung cancer, mixed with heart disease and dementia. I was there by her side everyday. Helping her when she fell calling nurses when there was a problem. Its hell. I know exactly how eric feels. The only girl i ever loved died of heart disease at twenty one. She never knew i loved her. I found out she had died two days after her funeral. Turns out mutual friends didnt even think to tell me, yet i had the decency to call and tell them after i foumd out. Death is a horrible thing. It can be a release for the departed, but we're just stuck here aftetwards. I think i chased my own rabbit there.. -
I dont think anything sebastian says will make a diffetence. Honestly the only reason id listen to lucas would be because richie rich was blowing him and not sebastian. Plus he was the only one that noticed tj was there and had the decency to apologize. He genuinely seems sorry.
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We all know what i meant. No assumptions necessary
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THAT LITTLE SKANK! We are three chapters in and you jave introduced someone i absolutely cant stand. I could get past the cheating but my boyfriend involved in a threesome with my bestie? Oh Hell to the no! Toss that human buttplug to the curb. Now the best friend im on the fence about. I'd listen but id keep him at a distance
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These chapters always leave me out of breathe😉
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Ill get in the truck too! Heck ill bring one. Transmission may be shot but ill help! Who treats someone like that!?!
