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More Relaxing Christmas Music:
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Also, if you see the Pic in my signature... While waiting for the next site update, where we can put series down in the signature and have them explode as stories do, I went a different route.
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Finally got it, and I was dragged out of the house kicking and screaming this morning. I had to go to Walmart. Alright, a bit dramatic there, but *sigh* I had to go to Walmart. Surprisingly... there was not a soul to be found, aside from the workers, and two little old ladies in the bakery department looking at the marked down baked goods. Well, I was too.
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My Granddad had a lot of Bing Crosby stuff and would play some of the Christmas stuff every year.
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Not fully awake yet. In desperate need of coffee.
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Morning. You know what day it is?
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Sleep Well, my Brother.
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The Four of his I've read, all suspense: A Density of Souls The Snow Garden Light Before Day Blind Fall
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I've read a few of his. I bought in hardback, his debut novel A Density of Souls, that he wrote when he was 22. And he co-wrote a story with his mother Ramses The Dammned: The Passion Of Cleopatra. Oh, and he's gay. A Density of Souls, made his mother ask him, "Did this happen to you?"
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Sleep Well, Reader.
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You're welcome, my Brother. But I do think you're that good. Your writing sometimes reminds me of Christopher Rice. He's Anne Rice's son.
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Sleep Well, Thorn.
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Have I mentioned lately, that patience isn't a virtue that I have? LOL. Nah, the last chapter he sent me, chapter 7, left me with wanting to know what happens next. There have been some heartbreaking scenes over the last seven chapters. A lot of positive stuff, but a few, where tim expertly slams his fist into your chest and rips out your heart, all Temple of Doom style. Which is a good thing. Let's just say, after reading what I have so far with Changes 2, I feel that tim needs to publish both Changes 1 and Changes 2. It's that fraking good.
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If he's doing changes 2, then usually after he does the edits he passes it to miss molly and me. I'm jonesing for the next chapter. 🙂
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tim tells me that a lot... often followed by, "You can do better than this A." I didn't realize what the premise of this story was until he told me after I read the little teaser. I was floored.
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I see a chapter in my future. 🙂
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LOL, thanks. I would be doing schoolwork, but I've done everything I can until the professor gives back last week assignment. Just minor stuff with TC4-C1. tim gave me some great feedback on a couple of spots that needed work. TC4-C2 working on one scene at a time, and then taking a break before going back to it. Just plotting Cia's game, which is turning into a pain. I'm trying to hit the minimum word count of 100 words. The Alex and Dean is just outlining. After the one I did last year, I felt I should revisit them.
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Doing well, Mac. Working on my writing projects: Tampa Chronicles 4 C1 and C2, Cia's Christmas newsletter game, and a Christmas story with Alex and Dean. And listening to some Bing Crosby Christmas songs.
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Some old time, good time Christmas Music
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Another TSO song, that is my absolute favorite by them! The lights are good too.
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Being a mom comes before everything else. I'm glad Baby J is fine.
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I know! I keep adding them to the list for me to do and never get too them.
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Interesting prompts. I'm liking #720. A Timely prompt for Thanksgiving.
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I find it a joy to be able to read some of tim's stories before anyone else. He first sent me a little taste of the story, and even when it wasn't completed it was a solid gut-punch to the feels. Then when he sent it later on to be Beta Read, I needed a box of tissues sitting next to me on the couch, and the fam kept asking me if I was okay, because I would be crying. Great story, loved it. I highly recommend it, and a warning... Have a box of tissues and your favorite adult beverage on standby.
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I'm going to sound like an oddball... But I felt this was a very beautiful story about love. How love endures, how families react when a cherished loved one passes, and that feeling of starting a new loving relationship. In total, I've read this story 15 times. The first 10 was just because it was that damn powerful, and at times, I couldn't see the monitor through the tears. It reminded me a lot of how I felt when family members passed away due to cancer. For the last five passes, I had to "harden my heart," and look at it without feeling anything, so that I could properly Beta Read the story. Easier said than done.
