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    Loved it! Enough said above that I don't have to add to it. Thanks Gary!
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    I loved the house. You described it in a way that would make anyone want to buy it. I look forward to the guys moving in and making it their own. Great Job Gary!
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    I loved this chapter. I had already assumed that she would ask for money when she realized that they knew everything. As soon as she said, $50,000 my thought was, she needs to think she has won and to offer her $10 - 20K. I knew she didn't want it to get back to her dad or to this Lionel or whatever his name is. I also think with Michael blowing up with the counter offer really did seal the deal with her. She was getting some money and thought she had caused a big rift between M & K. I was surprised that she wanted no contact at all for her written in the paperwork though. Thanks Gary. I can't wait to read more of this excellent story.
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    Great Chapter. I think all the comments above have covered most everything. I do think Michael is right in not charging Lanny. I think Lanny may become a big asset to them later. Might become a good friend too.
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    Wow! The bluff gone bad was kind of funny, but I did feel for Kendall there for a while. But it all turned out great. I had the feeling all along that it was Candy and Lanny that did that to Michael's truck from the beginning. Or that Candy had put him up to it. I am sure she knew where Kendall lived. But I wasn't expecting the real reason that Lanny did it. Well I guess Colleen and Big Mike are going to get their wish about a grand kid from Michael. I just hope Candy goes thru with the baby and maybe in the end turn it over to Michael and Kendall. But I guess we will just have to see. I guess we can call this a cliffhanger!!!!
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    Chapter 63

    pickuptoy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 63

    Me too!
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    Love the story. Love the character's you have created. I know by now you probably have written Jeremy's story. But I still hope that the guy that is taking over Michael's old apt is brought more into the story and finding someone too. Colleen and Big Mike adding the same amount to the young couple's house fund is perfect. And I think the Dooley's will understand and be proud of the additional help to the boys. Thanks, Gary, for your story. I look forward to reading more of it and all your other stories as well. Mike
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    If you improve any more, a few years from now they will be covering some of your works in literature classes everywhere. LOL!!! I am impressed!!
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    That dinner went very well. I think if Carson can get thru this cancer ordeal and survive for a few years. Kendall will see that his dad has completely changed for the best. It is just a pity that a parent or parents can be an asshole or abusive either physically or mentally to a child. Some people that become parents never had a good role model for them to learn from. But then again, some had perfect role models, but just became rotten parents or assholes anyway. Just like some perfect parents end up raising kids that end up being rotten assholes or a menace to society. Would be great if we lived in a perfect world.
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    That was a GREAT trip home for Kendall. I really do think the old man is ready to show his changed side. His gay partner is the one that is owed the thanks for him to accept Kendall and Michael's relationship. If it hadn't been for him this could have turned out a disaster. Very well written story. Thanks Headstall!
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    Well, I believe the shit is about to hit the fan. I figure he was standing there listening to the entire conversation. But with Michael, and I think his mom will now back him up too, everything will work out in the end.
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    Lorne and Arron both might be a good match for Chet. I know the guys don't want to be matchmakers, but hell someone needs to be. Great story.
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    Another great chapter!
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    I am finally getting back to your story. Have been super busy for the last 3 weeks or so. Still busy, but needed a little reading time. Great story. I look forward to reading more. Thank You so much for what you and all the other great writers do.
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    Chapter 57

    pickuptoy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 57

    Thank You Mark for the new chapter! And Thank You for getting Granger out of Russia! Russia has been my least favorite of George's adventures. I know it was an important part of the history of the story's time period and needed to be included. But I am still glade it is going to be a part of his past. I hope he can take command of Calliope. I think that will help in getting his mind back to the old George. Keep up the great work you do for us Mark. And I hope you had a Great Christmas and that 2022 will be the best year you have ever had, Happy, Healthy, Financially, and Creatively.
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    Chapter 56

    pickuptoy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 56

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    Chapter 56

    pickuptoy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 56

    So glad to get this newest chapter Mark. Thank you so much. And it is really good to be getting Granger out of Russia. I know it will be a while before he gets back his own ship, but back to warmer weather and his homeland.
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    That was Great!
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    Chapter 9 All In

    pickuptoy commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 All In

    Now that came a lot sooner than I ever thought it would have. I figured it would still take a lot longer for Michael to convince him he was for real. And that any kind of sex would be weeks away. But love it that it happened on that first night. Look forward to more.
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    Great Chapter. I am glad Kendall called Colleen. That more than anything will go a long way in getting him to listen and I do think believing Michael is in love with him.
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    I really liked this chapter.
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    Another great chapter.
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    Outstanding chapter. There is hope after all. I don't think it will be easy for Michael, but I think and hope he can convince Kendall that he is, in love with him. Not loves him. Really hard to believe this is your first story. Your story telling is a lot better than some that have many stories under their belt. Can't wait to read more of this story and the ones you came out with since. Keep up the Great Work!
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    Very good chapter. I like the others like Chet. But I am hoping Kendall and Michael will end up together. Or at least go back to being best friends if Chet and Kendall do get together for a true relationship.
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    Full Circle

    pickuptoy commented on C James's story chapter in Full Circle

    Like you Will. This is the first story that I read on GA. Mainly because at that time it was the longest story. I tend to look for the ones that are really long or Trilogies, or multiple books. I also like to follow stories with google maps, and this one used real places that made it really fun to follow. I find myself now seeing something on tv, or a news article that mentions a city or town or beach and think Trevor went stopped by there on his journey's. It has also gotten me more interested in stories set in Australia. Marcus McNally and Mark Peters authors from another site had peaked my interest in Eastern Australia and Melbourne area's. But for me this story has set the standard for a great story.
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