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    Mr. Smith

    Hold on tight!
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    Mr. Smith

    Hold on tight!
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    Chapter 45

    Excellent chapter! So glad the days are passing quick! Hopefully this will mean after the death of the Czar, George and Daventry can be on their way soon after. He needs to be at sea again. Thanks Mark
  4. You will be surprised. It is going to get exciting again.
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    Getting Closer

    Or think about that fat 4th grade teacher anytime you want an arousal to go away! I really can't remember if he knew that Joel and Lisa were using Beverly's guesthouse as their love nest or not. If I do remember right, he didn't have any mistrust of Beverly when he left FL. Most all his mistrust was with his Dad. But it has been a number of years since I have read that part. Enjoy, because I enjoy reliving this great story with your comments.
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    Machinations

    Funny what you said about the carrots. He is going to really pull one over on Trevor with the carrots.
  7. I don't think there is anything I can say that what tinytoes here has just stated. Just know that all of your devoted readers Love You! Everyone of them have stated it above and I am sure plenty more will in the coming days. The important thing is to get your health stabled and then get well. Just keep the determination that you will fight and win this battle.
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    Chapter 44

    Great chapter Mark. I am so glad that time is passing fast now. Nine days passed from the meeting of Granger with Count von Stedingk and the dinner invitation with Tsarevich Alexander. Hopefully the sooner that the Tsar is out of the picture that Granger can be on his way home and out to sea again. I like the excitement of him leading in sea battles and searching for bounties in more favorable climates than being a diplomat in the frozen north.
  9. I hate it when someone that has already read the story a few times spoils it like that. I had it happen either in Bridgemont Series or Mark Arbour's other series CAP. I stopped reading all of the comments after that until I got caught up to the current chapter. Enjoy.
  10. I really envy you at the moment of reading this story and the anticipation of what is next around the corner for not only Trevor but some of the others. I would love to be able to read it again, but at the moment I just have way to much going on with my work, and personal life to take the time to read it again. I know once I start I will not be able to stop at times. Me kind of following your reading helps refresh a lot of my memories of it.
  11. I know what you mean. There were 2 - 3 times I thought Trevor was being written out of the story, and all the other chapters would set back in S. FL area focusing on an investigation of who was trying to kill him. I almost stopped reading a couple of times. But glad I didn't. You have a lot of chapters to go.
  12. You are now getting into what is my favorite part of the Trevor's journey. Enjoy every minute of it.
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    Chapter 9

    Great Chapter Mark! I have not always liked how Will handled things. But I think he is maturing a little faster now. And think he handled this ordeal very well. Having spoken to Stef gave him a lot of insight also. He is showing a little of Tonto, JP, Stef, and Dan coming out in him more every day. He is probably going to become a very shrewd businessman that his wealth may drawf his Dad's and Stef's in the future.
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    The False Cross

    Believe me, it is not an easy read, but you will get through it. I felt about the same way when I was reading the same parts you are reading now. At the end of the story, you will be glad you read the entire story. And want more. I still want more. And it has been a few years since I read this story.
  15. This truly is a great story. Was my favorite one on GA for a while. But now it has fell into second behind the Bridgemont Series which is into it's 8th book. But I think it is with Bridgemont being an ongoing saga is what makes it win out. I like following the stories I read on Google maps or Google earth. I followed Trevor all around the world in his ventures. And I have followed Granger on the Bridgemont Series the same. And he had been to a lot of places and met interesting people all over the world. He hasn't made it to Australia yet but has been around the Cape and Asia though. And down the Horn and up the west coast of S. America. Enjoy this wonderful story. I am going to get around to reading it again sometimes. Just got to find the time. Mike in GA
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    Chapter 8

    Knowing how Will is, he will probably buy the team before he leaves and goes back home.
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    Chapter 43

    Very good chapter Mark. I am still wanting Granger out of Russia and back out on the high sea's, but it is getting more interesting. I hate it that Count von Beckendorf has died, it seemed him and Granger made a good pair. Keep up the great job. Looking forward to your next chapter.
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    The Hand of Fate

    This was the part I was talking about when I said hair raising parts and it is going to be like that for a number of Chapters.
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    Seychelles

    Isn't this a great story? You are about to get to some really intense and nail biting parts of the story with some cliff hangers too for a few chapters. Enjoy! I tried to comment for the last couple of days, but for some reason I could not. I think it was my browser causing the problem.
  20. Sojourn has done an excellent job writing this story. His characters captivated me and pulled me in so much, I wanted to read the next chapter as soon as I finished one. He makes you fall in love with his main characters and even his supporting characters makes you want to hear their full story. He makes you hate the bad characters and want to jump in the story and slap them, or worse. All 3 of his first stories including this one are all tied together. I have read all the comments of and responses from the first chapter of his first story thru the end of this one. Seems each story he only intended to write a one chapter short story that ended up being multiple chapters. And he seems to let his characters lead his story as he writes. Something that you don't see a lot. I just hope he continues on with more series of stories in this Texas saga.
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    Chapter 50

    Another great chapter. Great Job Jim!!!!
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    Chapter 49

    Well I know we are getting closer to the end, because I know this story has only 51 chapters and I have just finished chapter 49. So still have the weddings and the Gay Carnival that has been spoken about. So I don't think we will get to the arrival of Raymond and Daniel new son. So Jim I am putting you on the spot now, there needs to be more, more, more stories of they great characters we all have fell in love with and the ones that still need to be born, and even some returning from the past 2 stories coming back to visit and get us updated in their current lives. You have done a great job of drawing me personally into all these characters like I know you have by reading all the comments from other readers and some authors. Like I said, More, More, More. Thanks Jim,
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    Chapter 47

    I remember back when Raymond was telling Daniel of some of the Adams vast holdings and wealth he told of a number of ranch's and named some states and a couple of countries. I can't remember if one was in California or not, but something tells me that is the one that Dennis and is father are suppose to be moving too. With a furnished house and a part time job also available for Dennis that too. Raymond told Dennis, "And Once you finish high school a very low-interest loan will be arranged by the ranch to help you earn your degree." So I am pretty sure this is one of their properties. I really hope he goes out there and thrives and becomes an fine outstanding young man that has learned from his mistakes and determined to really make something out of himself. Might be a good side story. Hint Hint! Great Job Jim.
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    Chapter 46

    It probably happens more than you think. An abused kids is use to set someone else that had nothing to do with it up. Sometimes it is a mother using it against a divorced husband or relative. I am a big fan of Westerns. I have had Encore Western Channel for years and has been one of my most watched channels until I switched to AT&T last year and don't have it anymore, but about to switch again and make sure I do get it this time. But I remember Montgomery Cliff from "Red River" that he made with John Wayne. Very good movie. But I remember seeing him in others but I have not watched them multiple times like I have that one. I don't think this is going to hurt Daniel too much. If anything it my help him. Gary may have to come out to the school, but he will do the right thing and put an end to this bullshit that is being fabricated against Daniel. Great Chapter, Great Story, by and very good author! Keep up the great work Jim.
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    Chapter 42

    Gram is a very smart man. If you think back to Lee Atwater. He was probably one of the smartest campaign strategist that ever was. And probably one of the most controversial to both groups Republican and Democrat. Some of both hated him. He was ruthless, but someone that most people even his enemies would be proud to set down and have a beer with or listen to him play guitar. Not to mention he was cute as hell too!
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