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I am finally getting back to your story. Have been super busy for the last 3 weeks or so. Still busy, but needed a little reading time. Great story. I look forward to reading more. Thank You so much for what you and all the other great writers do.

Thank You Mark for the new chapter! And Thank You for getting Granger out of Russia! Russia has been my least favorite of George's adventures. I know it was an important part of the history of the story's time period and needed to be included. But I am still glade it is going to be a part of his past. I hope he can take command of Calliope. I think that will help in getting his mind back to the old George. Keep up the great work you do for us Mark. And I hope you had a Great Christmas and that 2022 will be the best year you have ever had, Happy, Healthy, Financially, and Creatively.

So glad to get this newest chapter Mark. Thank you so much. And it is really good to be getting Granger out of Russia. I know it will be a while before he gets back his own ship, but back to warmer weather and his homeland.

That was Great!

Now that came a lot sooner than I ever thought it would have. I figured it would still take a lot longer for Michael to convince him he was for real. And that any kind of sex would be weeks away. But love it that it happened on that first night. Look forward to more.

Great Chapter. I am glad Kendall called Colleen. That more than anything will go a long way in getting him to listen and I do think believing Michael is in love with him.

I really liked this chapter.

Another great chapter.

Outstanding chapter. There is hope after all. I don't think it will be easy for Michael, but I think and hope he can convince Kendall that he is, in love with him. Not loves him. Really hard to believe this is your first story. Your story telling is a lot better than some that have many stories under their belt. Can't wait to read more of this story and the ones you came out with since. Keep up the Great Work!

Very good chapter. I like the others like Chet. But I am hoping Kendall and Michael will end up together. Or at least go back to being best friends if Chet and Kendall do get together for a true relationship.

Like you Will. This is the first story that I read on GA. Mainly because at that time it was the longest story. I tend to look for the ones that are really long or Trilogies, or multiple books. I also like to follow stories with google maps, and this one used real places that made it really fun to follow. I find myself now seeing something on tv, or a news article that mentions a city or town or beach and think Trevor went stopped by there on his journey's. It has also gotten me more interested in stories set in Australia. Marcus McNally and Mark Peters authors from another site had peaked my interest in Eastern Australia and Melbourne area's. But for me this story has set the standard for a great story.

This is a great story. I like your style of writing also. I am surprised that this is your first. Can't wait to read more of your stories in the future.

Great story! But I don't think either of them is handling this at all right. I take friendship very serious, especially with a very best friend. I don't think walking away is right for either one of them. But hey, lets see where this leads. But I don't think the heartache of not being with your best friend is worth it.

Great Chapter. I hope it works out for them both. Your buddy Albert1434 highly recommended your stories and this one to me.

Yes, another great chapter. The 4 PM meeting should be very interesting. Maybe now that Brad might be showing back up we might can soon get back to CA and Escorial. I miss knowing what is going on with the rest of the family. Claire, and Jack, Isidore and Frank, and all the rest of the bunch out there have been out of the picture long enough. And I really do miss the interesting dinners there at Escorial and who might be put on the hot seat at any given time.

I have only read it 2 times. But like to read what others comment on when I get notifications.

This is my 4th time reading this story. I think the reason that Davey bolted like he did was he really thought he had finally found someone that he could give all his heart too and not just a quicky and not do it again with that person. And that it was too good to be true. He didn't know the timelines of how far along she supposedly was. Remember his upbringing was also tearing at him inside. What if DK had made this timeline as it really was Brian's kid. I am sure he would have worked it into the story somehow and also Davey and Brian still getting together and trying to better this timeline. Remember Brian coming back and not even remembering who Marcie was, where she lived, or if he had protected sex with her or if he barebacked or what. He knew by what he had heard that they had gone all the way the night before he came back in time, and that she had only sucked him off before that. In most relationships there is usually at least 1 time if not many, that one partner or the other jumps conclusions without hearing all the facts first. But later after they do listen they see they were upset really about nothing. Davey knew he hated her for what all she had done to him, so that compounded it more if she was pregnant by Brian.

I have so enjoyed reading these stories again. This is my 3rd time. I just hope that there will be another new story being set up after this repost.

I do too. But it doesn't have to be immediate family, could be some of the old Claremont gang we haven't heard about in a while. Gathan, Wally, Clara. Or CA Darius, Claire, John, isidore, or others, maybe Hawaii, Kai, Kiki, or Scott Slater. But hopefully it is about the trip or maybe more news about the snake incident being hushed forever by Politis. Or maybe Stef is now part owner in Connie's team. That would be wild.

Somehow I have a feeling that the phone call that Will blew off is some really bad news about someone back home. I don't know why that popped into my mind when I read it. That would have been Feb 1st back home, and Super XXXVIII had just been played and Janet Jackson's tit flopped out at halftime. That was probably the biggest thing that happed that day.

I have been really really busy and have not had much chance to keep up with your reading of this story. Damn it is a great story isn't it. Enjoy, but there are some really intense moments coming soon.

Sorry to hear that. Sounded like a very nice city as described in this story and like always I like to follow a story on Google earth and zoom in or try to find the places that are written about. Like city jetty, or police station, islands that they passed and anchored down by. Sad tha Kalbarri had so much damage. I hope they didn't loose to may lives with the cyclone. Thanks for pointing it out to us quokka!

George just takes the bull by the horns, and struts right in for his inquisition. He really turns the charges against him by Admiral Chernyavin, back on the Admiral's not being there as the main reason for the great loss to the Imperial Majesty's navy. I wonder if the Tsar will punish the Admiral in the next couple of days! Winkler is still my second favorite character in this wonderful story. Excellent chapter Mark. Thank you for what you do for your fans.

Great chapter! Will seems to be growing up more and more each day. Glad that Stef and JP are going to be coming down under for a while. I do miss their perspective now and then in the story.