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  1. pickuptoy
    Short and sweet chapter. Reading some of the comments about Chet not telling Arron about his visitor being a mistake. I don't think the phone call or the time at the gym were the place for him to bring it up. Over dinner yes. So I guess we will see. But like others too, I am wondering what might be waiting on Chet when he gets home. Ian may still be there, or he may have messed the place up. Never know what might happen. I would have never left him there alone after rebuffing his getting back together. I would have told Arron I would meet him at the gym 20 - 30 minutes later so I could have gone home first. If something was wrong that would be a good time to call Arron and have him to come over to help out. But maybe everything will work out.
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    I think this situation has happened to a lot of us before. I know for me it has happened with both a younger guy and also with a younger woman. One I listened and then sent them on their way. With the other I listened first then fucked them, then told them to hit the road. I wasn't in a relationship either time, but even though Chet is smitten with Arron. I don't think it was wrong the way he handled it, or if he had fucked Ian and then sent him on his way. Would have probably made it a lot harder to get Ian from showing up again. But don't think it will hurt his and Arron's future together. But either way I would still tell Arron about the ex showing up. Great Chapter Gary!
  3. pickuptoy
    Great chapter! I think they are well on their way!
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    It doesn't surprise me that Chet got the place wrong! Just glad that he turned around and called back after Arron didn't answer the first time. Plus just going only by not seeing a vehicle in the parking lot was stupid in the first place. Many people have more than one. Arron doesn't know enough about Chet to only go by that. But glad it worked out. Good job buddy!
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    Right off from the begging of COTT I could tell you were not a one trick pony. You have some real talent. Keep them coming. I was wondering when I was reading COTT and you mentioned you were doing a side story on Chet, how you were going to begin how these two got together and became a couple before the setup dinner ever happened. Great job of making it happen. I look forward to reading the rest of the story.
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    I prefer the CD's and the digital remastered music more than the old vinyl. I just like the sound better. I guess it is a matter of preference.
  7. pickuptoy
    Thank you, Gary, for your great story. For your first I am very, very impressed with your writing! Keep up your the great work. Reading a lot of the other readers comments, I am glad to see I am not the only one wanting more from the cast of characters.
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    I have so many memories even from when I was very young. My Grandmother listened to the old southern gospel albums. She had 7 or 8 albums from different groups, Chuck Wagon Gang, Sego Bros. and Naomi, The Cathedrals and the Blackwood Brothers. That was the early 60's then as I got a little older, I had 3 Dog Night, CCR, Van Morrison, and then on into the 70's Chicago, Eagles, Fleetwood Mac, Rolling Stones, Temptations, and then 8 tracks took over for a little while. But great memories. I gave all my old 78' and albums away when I cassette tapes started taking over. Sadly as they started wearing out, I went to CD's. I know I went thru 5 different "Tea for the Tillerman" before I finally bought the CD. But still have the memories of times past.
  9. pickuptoy
    And then there were two! Love this story. I hate for it to end.
  10. pickuptoy
    A Great Christmas! Sounds like Bodie is very talented in many things. Glad Nate is making thru very well without his parents and sisters. I was really hoping they were going to show up. Looks like 4 chapters to go and 10 days until move in date. Sad!
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    I still feel like Nate's family will show up. Was hoping we would get to Kendall's parents getting moved in before the story ends. But with only a few chapters left I don't think we will. Great Story.
  12. pickuptoy
    Love it! I have a feeling that Nate's Mom, Dad and two Sisters are going to show up at Big Mike's and Colleens as a Suprise for Christmas. They were missing Nate so much and him telling them he missed them. Just a hunch! But would not be surprised.
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    Somehow or another, Sandy might be a good candidate as a surrogate to have Kendall's kid in the future! Thanks Gary, you are the best!
  14. pickuptoy
    Another Great chapter. But they seem to be getting shorter as it gets closer to the end. Love this story!!!!
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    Yeah, I felt like the forgiveness was the main thing Josh was hoping for and knowing that their friendship was there even though over 2,000 miles away. Maybe someday they can see each other again as friends.
  16. pickuptoy
    Oh, I want you to keep writing, not reading other stories! LOL!!! Just kidding. Great work buddy!
  17. pickuptoy
    But I don't want to get close to finishing! I want more, more, more, more!!!!!!!! That is a reason I am a big fan of Mark Arbour's stories. He keeps them going and going. Years of his writings, and generations of his characters'
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    Love it. I think Josh will be alright too. I know the hurt of losing a friend when they move away when that age. It is going be even harder when it is a best friend and someone you have feeling for. But he is young and will bounce back. Hopefully he will find someone to replace that void real soon. Gary, I haven't looked ahead at your other stories to see if you are tying any of them into this one. But hope you have or that you will either do that so we can keep up with these guys, or think about it for the future,
  19. pickuptoy
    Another great chapter. Glad the closing has moved up since there are so few chapters left. I have a feeling that Yolonda is closer to Bodie and his mom than just a regular friend. I was thinking aunt or close relative somehow or another. But may be just best friends or something like that. I think Nate is going to fit in just right there.
  20. pickuptoy
    I think everyone else has pointed out what I was thinking. Excellent Chapter Gary! I can't wait to read all your other work too.
  21. pickuptoy
    Another Great Chapter. They all are. I think it is just fate that Bodie was at the mall and maybe them meeting the first time up at M & K's new house. I think they need each other. Maybe Mira can learn a little from what Nate's parents are doing in selling their business so they can spend more time with their kids and Nate in particular as some of each of the boy's past are more known to those of concern. I am sure there will be some sharing between her and M & K.
  22. pickuptoy
    I am beginning to believe! God Writer!
  23. pickuptoy
    I think everything is going to be fine now. Gary, you did a very good job of making it that way. They have a long way to go. But it's going to be fine. Great Chapter! Great Story!
  24. pickuptoy
    Great Chapter. Kendall needs to think about going back to school and becoming a psychiatrist, he is good with everyone. I believe Nate when he says he ran into the door sill. But the church group makes me hate Mark as much as if he had hit Nate. I think in the end everything will be fine for Nate. Not so sure about how the marriage between his parents will work out though. Mark may see he was wrong from the beginning. But if they continue going to that church they are fools.
  25. pickuptoy
    Another great chapter Gary. Love your story
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