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I hope your muse has started coming back and you might get fired up and give us a few more chapters with an epilogue. Really would like to hear more about Adrian and Paul, Emily and Jim, and also Gene. At least and epilogue ties all to an end. But regardless. Great story!
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Thank you for the wonderful story. I am going on to the next one in line. I hope it is at least half as good as this one was. You Authors really are appreciated. You give us readers so much with every word you write. Keep up the great work.
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Very good story! Thank you so much for each of the stories you have posted. I am slowly working my way thru all of them. Keep up the Great Work!
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So glad that Granger is back home in England. I have a feeling that things are going to work out well for him. His Aunt's estate, at home with Caroline, and also with able to get it equipped like he has his other one before he sets sail in a timely manor. I love it when he is at sea. Thanks for the chapter and the Great Story Mark! I hope you have another chapter coming soon.
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Great story. Sometimes a compassion and a helping hand can change a person's life. This was just a story, but it can sometimes work in real life.
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Great Story! I look forward to reading more and more of your stories. I am reading from the oldest to the newest now.
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You are correct, and I was wrong. When mentioned Wally, made me remember Wally and Clara are Zach's parents. It has been many moons now since Zach was introduced into this series. But I thought Fred was criminal and was Gathan and Ella's dad. And Frank was Robbie's Dad. I don't remember how Wally and Frank are related. May need to go back and read some earlier posted books and refresh my memory. And I don't think Frank will defend Zach. I just don't think they will kick him to the curb and abandon him.
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I don't think that Curtis Buck is even on Elizabeth Danfield's radar. Even though Zach is Frank's son and married to Isidore, it would be a far-fetched for her to us him as a way to get at the main part of the family that she hates just because Zach is dating his daughter. I also don't think that the Will or the family will turn completely against Zach because of Isidore and Frank. I think Zach will not have the luxury and status with the family as he once had. No matter if he is successful with his football career he will miss having that status he once had. Once he matures and not worried about being outted in the future. Him and Will might have a chance again in the future. Only one person knows where this story goes.
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"Hit the road, Jack And don't you come back No more, no more, no more, no more Hit the road, Jack And don't you come back no more!" I love it! I didn't care at all for Zach. Sorry that Will got some battle wounds from this encounter but might be a lot worse if he put up with it again and again. Great Chapter! Great Story!
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Isn't this a great series? I was hoping for more I think there were 4 redo's all together.
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I really enjoyed reading this story! I think this is either the 3rd or 4th one that I have read. I do plan to read all of your stories. I just wish your chapters were a lot longer in each story.
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I thought she was older too. Great Story!
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I don't know about 1981, but I had a handheld mini cassette recorder that was about 2" wide, 5" long and about 3/4" thick, that I bought in 1984 or 85 when I started traveling in sales. After I would leave a customer's office and driving down the road, I would dictate highlights of my meetings where I wouldn't forget to follow up on them. When I was moving a just a couple of years ago. I ran across a pack of the mini cassette's that had fell down in my desk and under the bottom drawer. I think they had been out for a few years when I bought my recorder.
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Great Story! I wish you would revisit it for another 10 years down the road.
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Again, the first chapter said that Jimmy had gotten a football scholarship to Ohio State. But apparently, he is only taking a academic scholarship. Great story!
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Hopefully Will might get wise and dump Zack! But I think it will work out better if Zack dumps Will.
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Thanks Mark, another Great chapter. Looking forward to the meeting with Evelyn, then with Cam Squires. I still think Zach is a bad relationship for Will.
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I don't understand. I thought Nick was just a Jr. in high school. Is he going to stay and go to high school there in the Columbus area? At first, I thought he was just going to stay the rest of the summer. But Jimmy said once school started he would need for it to be quite so he could study. Also, I thought both Jimmy had gotten a scholarship to play football at Ohio State and his buddy Mike had gotten one to play at Florida State. Mike said he was going to go 2 weeks before school started to spend some time at FSU. If they play football, they will have to be at their schools well over a month before school starts to start practicing.
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I was wondering the same thing. She should have been scratching and clawing Paul's eye's out for doing that. She should have already stepped in about the mental abuse he was giving Alex before this all happened.
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