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Thanks Mark, I know you have been. Just reminding you, Grangers story is our favorite of them all.

I think Jake should have been with Will when he went to Travis' house to begin with. both to handle Keno and to show Travis that the entire family cared and were in on what Will was doing. It would have been easier on Will and mellowed Travis more to what was happening. He could have also assured Travis that he wasn't losing his role in Palisades. Thank you Mark. You are the best. I wonder if Granger is getting any meat and action out on the sea's. I sure do miss him.

Thank you Mark.. Another fine chapter. So Kendo is going to have an entire week to keep Travis as fucked up as he can be, possibly killing him in doing so? I know Stef said glad he came in during rush hour, but June 11, 2006, was a Sunday. I hope Jake or someone gets Keno away from Travis. With the studio being owned by the family, they can pause the filming on Palisade's. Probably be some piss off people, but they can make it work. It may take Grand and Jake both going and getting Travis to leave Kendo. I don' think it will be easy either. Great book.

Thanks, Mark for the Labor Day present you have given us. Hindsight is 20/20 as the old saying goes. What about Ramon, I don't see how he could not have seen the highs and lows Travis goes thru every day. And especially living in the same house to protect Travis. Kendo really just moving in with Travis should also have thrown up some flags to him. I thought Jake was the one that arranged the hiring of Ramon in the beginning. I would have thought that would have been one of the first calls Jake and Brad would have made was to Ramon to find out what he may have seen or heard that might have been out of the norm the last few weeks or longer. Also question the boss of the house, wasn't her name Maria or something like that. She should have noticed some of the stuff going on too. Now Kendo has convinced Travis that Will had endangered his life, and had meant to hurt him and cause him pain. He has total control of Travis and his mind at the moment. Can't wait until the next chapter release.

You liked the Klaus Nomi version? I have always like Lesley's "You Don't Own Me" but not that crap.

I am an old man. Will be 69 next month. I have heard and liked most every one of Lesley's songs. But I don't remember ever hearing "Sunshine, Lollipops, and Rainbows" until I played it on YouTube. Her other songs were great. This one must have been a B side recording or that is where it belonged.

That is fucking horrible!

Mark, Mark, Mark, you are so damn good. I have no idea which way you are going to go with this. But wherever go do go with it, you have us all tied around your finger. You truely are the best. I do hope you treat us on this holiday weekend. Will just have too see. I also wonder who's britches Granger has been getting into lately? LOL!!!

Thanks @Mark Arbour Like clockwork. I can't wait until next Friday. It's going to be very, very interesting. Keep up the great work.

I do agree 100%

Mark post in this story every Friday, and that is Labor Day weekend, Fri, Sat. Sun, & Monday. Next weekend.

Thanks Mark, you really are the best. Can't wait to see what the cliff hanger is going to be in the next couple of chapters. Where are you going to lead us Master? It is going to be interesting I am sure. Keep up the great work.

That also caught my attention too. “Jenna wants to touch up your makeup,” Diane said as she burst into my trailer. She gave Kendo an odd look, one that made it seem like she was nervous around him. She knows something.

As much as Travis has respected and relied on JP as his mentor over the past couple of years, And how JP has kind of taken him under his wing too. I would have thought they would have kept in touch with each other at least weekly, or every few weeks. And that JP would have noticed any changes in Travis. And Travis seeking advice with his sleeping and anxiety when working with Sebastian Hawthorne (Julian). If they had, it might not have come to this. But I guess that in the scheme of things it would not have fit into where the story is heading. Is it going to be a big implosion or an explosion? '

Thank you, Mark, you are the best. I bet that Will will make a surprise visit to see Travis and will catch him and Kendo right at the time of orgasm. Might even have Marie with him at the time. She may be the one that saves Kendo's life. Makes waiting until next Friday seem like forever.