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The last one in the Travisty Book! The cliff hanger of cliff hangers. Travis will probably go into cardiac arrest!

Thank you, Mark, and like the others I do hope you had a fantastic vacation. I am glad George's old friend Ventura was still posted there in Roses for them to get some much-needed release. Still keeping my fingers crossed for Proserpina to come across a pirate ship about too or attacking a wealthy Spanish Merchant Ship. One owned by members of the High Nobility or have one or two as passengers aboard. Granger needs some more fun and the crew a lot more pride along with more money in the pockets if the pirates ship is already loaded with a small fortune of gold and jewels from other past triumphs.

Thanks Mark for the Chapter. Now enjoy your vacation. Maybe Travis will be invited to endorse the US National Volleyball team with all his publicity. And maybe Will can get a free shitload supply of Nature Valley Granola bars and he can donate them to a local food bank in the Cambridge/Boston area. I know he won't do any commercial for them, but get something out of his fun he is having with their product. Hopefully Travis will leave Fiji like a new man. Fully rested and without need of Ambien or coke to sleep after he gets back to the tv and movie world.

@Darryl62 I am sorry, I don't know how your profile and the inc got included in the comment I made. I had not intentions for it to be included. I tried to go back and edit it and take it off, but it would not let me. So I do apologize to you for it.

I don't think the comment was judgmental at all. It was stating what is in the rules of this site. Are you one that likes to breaking the rules and bitching about someone calling you on it?

Thank you @Mark Arbour for your holiday gift. Great Chapter. Granger had gotten his ship and crew into really good and clean shape. Soon most everyone in the Spanish Navy deep down would love to serve on Proserpina. Congratulations to Mr. Cardenas for his new title. Even though he isn't a Lieutenant he is above the Midshipmen position he had before Granger too over Proserpina. I too am looking forward to Granger's arrival in Roses. I believe the spy's on board Proserpina will be completely astonished by the reception George is going to receive by the people there. I do hope out on their maneuvers Proserpina will encounter a fat Pirates ship and all it's bounty and maybe rescue a couple of high-ranking Spanish aristocrat's relatives that may have resented Granger or were French sympathizers. He has always had that kind of luck in the past. Maybe it will continue following him. Keeping my fingers crossed. I don't know if the Spanish Naval officers and crew get their percentages of the bounty or not but do hope so if it happens. The crew really will go thru hell for George. Thanks again. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Thanks Mark for the chapter. Looking forward to their trip. Happy 4th of July to you and all your fans!!

Thanks Mark for what you do! Granger is gaining respect from both his current officers and crew on board are seeing what is happening. At the moment they may still wonder if their replacement provisions are going to be any better than what they have been used to. I am sure when their first meals after replenishing is done it will inspire then to go thru the gates of hell for Granger. I hope Mr. Barrios is not only shamed but punished and stripped of any wealth he has accumulated over time. I bet the crew will be a lot better dressed when they next set sail. Proserpina will be the envy of all the rest of the sailors in the Spanish Fleet. Granger may have to spend some of his own money, but his returns from it will be a lot more rewarding to him. It will not take long for positive changes and improvement on board to get out into the general population of the Spanish People. The Spanish aristocrats will have to acknowledge it too. I look forward to future chapters of the Great George Granger!

Great chapter Mark. I loved every bit of it. Nice to have a chapter with fun like that. I figure a very different one is coming soon with lots of hurt, pain and maybe even sorrow in the not so distant future. Thanks for what you do. You are the best!

I am sure a large number of Mark's followers, are not old enough to remember who Norman was.

Thank you so much for this another great chapter @Mark Arbour I am wondering in my mine which one Granger is going to be in bed with first. 3rd Lieutenant Herrera, Midshipman Riquelme's, or maybe Midshipman Andrade. All 3 are good candidates. But might be someone different. But I think they have the best chance. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Well this chapter went a lot smoother than I had imagined it would. I really enjoyed it. Especially the liked the part that the crazy grandma has left the building. Thanks Mark, Great Chapter.

Thanks Mark for this latest chapter. You love stirring the pot. Keep it up. Your doing a Great Job!!

Another in a long line of great chapters. Thanks Mark for all you do for us. Keep it up please. I hope you birthday was one to remember!

Happy Birthday Mark. I hope you have had a Great One. Thanks @akascrubber for letting us know of your birthday.