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I am so glad that Stef is back narrating again. Looking forward to more of this exciting story.

Great Story! Thank You Mark! I am looking forward to reading the next Chronicle.

I love it! I love it! I love it!

I had that feeling a number of chapters ago. The way Wade was acting I just knew his dad was molesting him.

I have a feeling that when it finally comes out about what is Wade's problem is his dad have been molesting him for a number of years!

Brian is a fucking lunatic! When he first came on the scene I thought he would be a really good add to the family, just a younger JP.

Damn I hope Alejandro doesn't have Matt and possibly Cody killed! LOL!!! I love this story.

I had the feeling when we found out that Matt was adopted that he was going to be Robbie's kid. In the last story when Robbie said he had had sex 1 time with a girl back in Claremont in highschool I knew he had to have another Hayes running around somewhere.

Wow! Starting on Book 8 I never expected it to be narrated by a totally new character. But I guess him going to Stamford will tie it all together.

I fucking love this family!

Well I thought the next bastard was going to be a Hays. But Hendrickson beat them to it. Wow! Back I don't know how many chapters ago, I stated that we had never heard of Bill Hendrickson or his wife passing on. Now we know he has. Great job Mark!

Well why do I get a feeling that there will be another Hays from Ohio showing up in later chapters or Chronicles?

No great loss with Bitty! I believe Darius will play a big part of this story as it continues on. As of now writing this comment there are 16 Chronicles. So since the beginning we have heard JP's, Stef's (2 periods of time), Brad's, and Marcel's narration. So I figure there will be some from others too.

It only gets better by the chapter!

I like the new Stef! Don't take any shit off anyone!

I don't trust Lou! I hope I am wrong!

I love it!

I am so glad it is back to Stef narrating this story. I have missed him doing it. He has a good time wherever and with whomever he is with. I was thinking late last night about this series. We have heard about all the Heads of the family's back in Claremont passing on. First it was Barry Schulter, then Jack Crampton, JP's Dad, then JP's Mom, then Tonto. I wonder if Bill Hendrickson JP's real Dad and his wife I believer her name was Marj are still alive. I don't remember anything about it. Bill has had just a minor part in the story and Marj even less. But if he did pass on I was wondering if he left JP any of his wealth when he did. I know the mills were struggling there for years, but old money still seems to be there even when their business have gone down or closed. They seem to always protect that. Just wonder. He may very well still be alive and show up later.

Great story Mark!

I'll take Pete! I like little guys!

I was wondering when we were going to hear more about Lou. I know when Greg told Marcel that him and Robbie were more like his son's and Brad was like Stef's son. Nothing was mentioned about Lou. Toward the end of the last book it was mentioned that he had moved out and was the latest new popular top the S. Cal area or something like that.

Great start to book 6. Thanks Mark!

It's assholes like you that stop people from reading comments after reading these chapters. I know you wrote this back 9 1/2 years ago. But you are still spoiling the story for people reading it as long as this site stays up. I hope you are not doing it on stories that have been posted recently. Not very cool at all!

So is this the 4th or 5th kid in this series that has been found by just being in the right place at the right time to be found as a relative of this family? Or that has shown up like Stef? The stars must be aligned over all their heads!

I would rather Brad to choose and be with Max over Robbie and them two be together till they die.