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Another Great Chronicle! Thanks again Mark. Will start on #16 Black Widow soon. I am almost caught up with you Mark.

Thank you Mark! Fine Job! I look forward to start on the next Chronicle!

I have been waiting for a while for the "I am pregnant" As active and good swimmer as all these guys sperm is, it was highly likely it was going to happen. I am just surprised that she announced it at the family dinner table. Also the timeline makes that 18 years ago today as I am commenting on this. Great story Mark. Keep up the great work. I see where you have posted another chapter in a later Chronicle on this story.

Will has always been one of my favorite characters in this series. But I think he is being very hypocritical about all this. He already knew that is Brad and Wade had fucked before. Remember when Brad and Will were talking about Robbie having the fling with Alex Danvers the guy that took over Robbie's position after he was killed. Brad told Will that Robbie made him feel like he was a terrible lover. Will reminded Brad that Wade was ready to dump Matt because of the way Brad had rocked his world. I think that was back around 9.11 chapter 44 or 45 I know it was a few days after the 9/11 event. Also Will got fucked by Gathan who is Zack's 1st cousin, but they were raised as brother's. And Will is fucking Zack and in a relationship with him. I don't see any difference in the two situations. Will had sex with his 1st cousin John and then he fucked his first cousin Marie, John's sister. So I don't think he has anything to bitch about. I do think he did when Matt fucked Tony, because he had told each of them not to fuck the other.

Thank you so much Mark for this wonderful story that you have gifted to us. This Chronicle #13 has been just as great as the 12 before it. Maybe the saddest of them all so far, but probably everyone of us that lived thru 9/11 believe that was the saddest period of time I our lives too. Keep up the great writing that you are doing. Earlier today I got a notification where you have posted Chapter 83 in the 16th Chronicle of this series almost 6 1/2 years since you posted this chapter I am now commenting on. So I know I have more of this great story to look forward to. I am excited to be able to go to # 14 next and I am sure it will be just as exciting as the 13 Chronicles before it. So keep your wonderful mind clicking and turning out more and more chapters and Chronicles for our future enjoyment. You are very much appreciated.

Somehow I have a feeling that someone may soon be moving to the guesthouse as caretakers and full time employees.

It sure as hell doesn't take much for Will to feel sad and lonely! Jesus he has to be one of the loneliest people on earth!

Another Great story. Looking forward to the next Chronicle, but in a way I dread what is coming. I just hope that none of the main characters are lost in the attacks of 911. With so many powerful people in this series any of them could be visiting NYC on that horrible day. Let's just hope not. Thanks again Mark. Love you writing.

When it was brought forth that Jeff was adopted, bud didn't know who his Mom or Dad was I just knew it was going to be someone either in the related to this family or someone with very close ties. When I was trying to figure out just who it might be, Lark never came to mind. I believe they will have a very close relationship when Brad and Will get them together.

If Will were my son I would just ship his ass off to military school at least for a year. Or too one of the real strict boot camps. If not he is going to self destruct and have a meltdown. He is ten times worse to Brad than Brad was to JP. I know JP and Stef think that payback is hell, but I believe they are also making things a lot worse. Will has got to be cut back down to the 14 year old he is, or they will never be able to handle him.

I was hoping for one of the 3 titans to do the narration, but look like this is going to be a really good chronicle too. Thanks Mark. Great Job!

Great Chronicle! Looking forward to getting back to either Steph, JP, or Brad narration though!

I kind of have the feeling that Berto may be waiting on him on the island! When Will mentioned if the guy wanted to see him surf he should have been in Rome, and Robbie snaughed and Brad gave them both dirty looks.

I had the feeling that JP was going to pull that card all along. I am so glad he did.

LOL! You Asshole!!!!

Thank you Mark for another great story. I am looking forward to Chronicle 11.

I really hope that both Tiffany and Jeanine end up pregnant at the same time. Hope they both have their kid on the same day also. Matt will probably be the Dad with Tiffany because we all know how those Hayes boys can get a girl pregnant on the very first encounter. Great story.

Wow! What a story. Stefan did get to know his Dad from this diary. And we all got to know more about not only him but more of how Tonto was when she was a younger mother, wife, and ground shaker. JP's Dad and his brother Jim were really assholes back then, and both were cowed down to JP's Grandfather Crampton. But Aaron and Nathan were really great guys that we got introduced too. Looking forward to the next Chronical. Thanks Mark!

Well I said that something must have happened to make the Hayes family to go bad. When Brad said that he had never heard of Aaron and JP said that Aaron was killed in the war. Aaron being the oldest and sounds like he was very popular in school also. All that may have been too much for his Mom and Dad and was the downfall of the family.

Well I guess Aaron is a Hayes after all. We never heard of him in later stories, so I wonder if he must have gotten killed early in the war and cause the rest of the family to go to hell in a basket!

I really don't know who this Aaron is. He sounds like a Hayes with his descriptions and snort laughing sounds. But a couple of chapters ago, when describing his house over on the east side, said his Dad had it fixed up nice. Also said Aaron's Mom was a hoot. Jeff's and Frank's parents were drunks and their Dad beat their Mom and the family was described as trash and their house was rundown. Unless something drastic happened and the family just went to hell over something between 1941 and 1962 when the first Chronicle was set in.

I am so glad that Stef is back narrating again. Looking forward to more of this exciting story.

Great Story! Thank You Mark! I am looking forward to reading the next Chronicle.

I love it! I love it! I love it!

I had that feeling a number of chapters ago. The way Wade was acting I just knew his dad was molesting him.