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Can't win every year. But the Redskins nor the Ravens are there either! Nor any of the other East coast teams!
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They would be Super bowl Champs a lot sooner if they would could have played for the Patriot's!
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I actually meant maybe with her foot as he lifted her up sometimes in the ceremony. Some kids shoes have Velcro on them that could or buckle or whatever. Not used to wearing a kilt CJ would not know realize it till after he had bared it.
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Enjoyed this chapter. Glad everything worked out fine. I was hoping somehow Liebe or someone would get either accidently or on purpose lifted CJ's skirt and exposed his hairy ass to everyone at the wedding. LOL!!
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Thanks Carlos for the Great Chapter. Keep up the great work you are doing. We really do appreciate all the hard work all you authors do to bring us stories like this.
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I live in far North Atlanta. If I could jump back into fiction stories I would have gone to see them! But can't do either so I can only dream.
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Sydney Kingsford-Smith Airport
pickuptoy commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Sydney Kingsford-Smith Airport
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I'm glad they are making a stop in Atlanta. LOL. Since this story was written almost 4 1/2 years ago.
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I am giving up on trying to follow these stories. When one thing goes wrong every one of the main characters get all out of whack. Start sending help/friend somewhere else in the world. Or others just packing their bags and running away. It happens in about every story. So I am also throwing in the towel.
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I was wondering the same thing. Were the other parts to this story in some of the other stories that have been posted since part one that fills in the blanks. I went back to the last Chapter Adventures of Devon Carlton, but didn't see a chapter that had been added.
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Another Great chapter! Thanks Mark. Please keep them coming!
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Thank You! I was about to give up hope. I had only found the Bridgemont Series about 3 months ago and was breezing right thru it without having to wait any. I actually thought it was completed when I started reading since I saw it was started in early 2011. But it is really a Great Story. I hope it goes on for many more books.
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Stanollie, I agree. I was going to make a very similar comment myself if you had not already done it. Circumnavigation is still my favorite of all stories I have read on GA and that is saying a lot, because there are a lot of amazing writers and stories on this site. But this one and Let the Music Play are very close in running with Circumnavigation. I just hope this isn't the last of the great work posted from C James on this site. Or if anyone knows where he might be post now please let me know.
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I know this story was written half a decade ago, but I am just now reading it. One question is with very poor cell connection and land lines down. On an Island out in the Atlantic how can Helen call a press conference? Two 3 nukes on an island that is just about to explode isn't the smartest idea. But just incase the press conference was to go thru and the US Gov finds out the nukes are there. How are the mercenaries going to get off the island to fade away in world.
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I have the same feeling you do on that. I think the General has earned a lot of respect from her.
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Granger has the luxury of having Hercule and some of his expertise in and willingness to learn new was in armaments and munitions! Granger has had the foresight to experiment and venture into new and cutting edge idea's of his own and some of the trusted men he has had the pleasure of accumulating since he became a sailor. Admiralty should be quicker to follow his lead on some of his accomplishments in making his ship more efficient and comfortable for himself and his men.
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Well they should be able to apply for a waiver on the poll tax when they apply for assistance in food stamps or housing. But so does a gun owner should be able to get a waiver on a permit. Poor people need to be able to legally protect themselves and their family too.
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But the ones that do use anonymous sources to release a story just to make someone look bad and then it later it is found out that it was bogus should either be banned from the press just like a lawyer can be disbarred. Or one that writes a story or article and intentionally omits the major components that raises doubt that there ever was a reason to write about it to start with. Then a few days later buried within the paper a apology or retraction. They should never be able to post again or put out of business.
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The key word, "Good journalism" Hard to find that these days. Looks more like let's dig up some dirt or make up some from an anonymous source that can't be substantiated. If it keeps going like it is today. Reporters may need to loose their rights to protect their anonymous sources. Or if ever caught lying the loose their right to ever use an anonymous source again.
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I think gun ownership is regulated/limited. I have to register a gun. Living here in GA I also have to be finger printed (all 10 fingers) and pay a steep license fee to be able to carry one legally after going thru an FBI check that takes sometimes over a month. If I am protected by the 2nd amendment why do I have to go thru this and pay a fee. If a gun owner has to go thru all this. I certainly don't see why a person that has the right to vote shouldn't have to go thru a thorough registration to be able to vote and also show a valid ID. I certainly wouldn't mind even having to pay a pole tax to help pay for the cost of every election either. $5, $10, up maybe to $20. Fair is fair!
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I am reading "Georgetown: As Time Goes By" It is listed as the 10th in the CJ series. "Goodnight my Angel was listed as 9th. I thought there was some unanswered questions as I was reading that series. So you might want to change the numbering for future readers. I am already in chapter 4 of ATGB now. Will eventually get to "Singer"
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Great story!
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I have had the feeling that Patrick was gay from when he was first introduced into the story. And him being upset about being called Paddy because he thought it made him sound gay. He also has become one of my favorite characters in this story.
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I believe Patrick plays for the same team too! He just isn't there yet, but I think he is on his way!
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Bernardo is a fucking creep! But hey there are plenty of them in the real world. I hope CJ doesn't get too messed up with this. Even if he avoids the rape it can be trying if JM doesn't step up and do the right thing. Somehow I thought all along ever since he had been brought into the story, that Dash or Dasan was from West TX. Or again that might have been Trip. Not sure.
