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Bella's new love may make Blu actually love Sage! This has been on of the funniest chapters so far!
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I totally agree with you on this. I also love Winkler. I always fear for his safety as he is so dedicated and loyal to Granger. He is my second favorite character only behind George. I want them all out of there and on the way back home as soon as possible.
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I liked and laughed at that part too! I think Blu has become very fond of Sage!
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Thank You Mark for this Great story! I hope you can keep up with this pace of submitting chapters. Be Safe!
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I almost gave up on this story back around Chapter 4 or 5. I even commented that I was thinking seriously about it. But now I am glad I kept on reading. Ended up a great story.
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Home Is Where The Heart Grows
pickuptoy commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Home Is Where The Heart Grows
Great chapter! That is going to be one spoiled kid! Glad to see Blu is warming up to Sage! -
I agree with you on Seth's Mom. Ever since that first time he met her and he had the weird feeling about her, I have wanted DomLuka to probe more into it. Would be funny if their Mom's were actually distant cousins.
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I like Seth, but I really want Luke and Rory to get together! I know this is almost 9 years since you posted this. But I am just reading it.
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Great Chapter Mark. Can't wait till the next one. I wish young von Galen was able to accompany Granger on the rest of his trip. I think they would be good together and great heat for each other on those cold, cold nights!
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I have felt like that ever since the beginning when Rory moved in with the guys. Luke has had the hots for him ever since. If Rory would just open his eyes he could see it too. But Luke needed to said something as soon as Rory found out that they were not cousins or related in in way. Now that Luke thinks there might be something going on between Rory and Seth he will not make the move for sure.
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I believe that Seth is a really good guy. I also believe that he has the hots for Rory and that is why he seemed to be jealous. I don't think they will become boyfriends, I believe Rory and Luke will get together. But Seth will become friends with both of them. Just my thoughts.
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Petty annoyances and a silent celebration
pickuptoy commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Petty annoyances and a silent celebration
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Petty annoyances and a silent celebration
pickuptoy commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Petty annoyances and a silent celebration
I agree, I started out really liking this story, but it seems each chapter it's the same dog chasing it's own tail. Rory is an idiot. But like you I just want to see what happens. But I don't know how much longer I will continue this. -
I think both Rory and Aaron both have a mental problems. And Seth seems just fucked up!
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I am hooked! Great story!
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Well I was pretty sure from the beginning that Eddie and Jase were a couple and also that Luke was gay too. And that Aaron is Luke's ex-boyfriend. Luke just couldn't tell Rory about Luke being his ex until everything was out about Eddie and Jase. None of the 3 Eddie, Jase, and Luke knew how Rory would react to any or all of them being gay. They didn't want to push him farther away than he already wanted to be from the beginning. I don't think it will go over to the 3 of them that Aaron has outed them to Rory.
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Wow! And it's getting better and better!
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I have a feeling that she had kept a diary and she knew that Eddie was gay and that was the reason she had kept Rory away from him, but after finding out she was dying she thought he would do better with Eddie.
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I am really getting into this story. Looking forward to reading more.
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Oh hell, I had forgotten about the stove. I hope he remembered to have one of them transferred.
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Excellent chapter. I really have the feeling that Granger is going to be alright. Valiant will be in good hands. And that the partnership of Granger and now again Captain Schein, will be a profitable adventure. Look forward to more of the great story. Thanks Mark!
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Great Chapter. I hope they make sure they add hate crime to the charges so it will mean a lot more time. I hope the baby turns out to be perfectly healthy!! Thanks for the quick turnarounds on the story!
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I really liked this chapter. The letters from home made me feel a lot better about Granger's trip and most likely him staying longer that cold ass region and going to aide Daventry in his endeavor. The Tsar should be dead by the time he gets back in that direction. Keep up the great work. Look forward to chapter 28.
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Great Chapter Mark. I hope this doesn't delay Granger from getting out of the cold and on the way back home!
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Great Chapter! Seems like lots of things are heading in the right direction! Just hope the assholes that did that too Levi slip up somehow. We haven't heard of any evidence that was found. We know he was kicked after being pushed down the steps. I don't remember if there were any distinctive shoe prints left on him or his clothes. Hope the brag or something if they do, there is something that can pin it on them. and then they squeal on the coach!
