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I became busy with life and drifted away from following this site and its writers until the recent passing of three very close people in my life. Now I’ve come to learn that Comicality has left the stage as well. Thank you, Comicality, for your writings, support, and endearing sense of humor. Time will now find me rereading your stories so that I may rediscover and appreciate you all over again.

I positively absolutely undeniably fantastically enjoyed it. Yes, the incest and age difference were way out in left field yet I enjoyed the characters and their comfortable sensual chemistry. Of course, there’s nothing like the momentary immersion into nirvana before the real world ruins everything like a punch in the solar plexus. May they never run out pecan pie, Rum punch, and lubricants...!

This story is so down to earth in terms of teen sexual experimentation. I enjoyed how they gave each other space when tentatively entering a new yet intimate frontier. I’d like to read more of these characters in the future...

Billy going back to Jimmy LaPage? Now THAT would make for misery and unmitigated disaster. Then again, I can see a chaper devoted to that premise as Billy waking up after a sleep plagued by his worst nightmare ever...

It seems that no matter how Billy tries to be mature or cavalier about it he has himself ensnared in the very trap he wanted to avoid - risking his relationship with Brandon by way of the dark worm in his head planted by Jimmy LaPage. Now the real test of love and maturity begins...

The more the story develops the more it seems it was bound to happen - those who don’t understand the difference between love and possession set out to destroy relationships in an extreme attempt to right all wrongs and punish the ones deemed guilty. Jimmy LaPlane wants Billy Chase and descends into being a hateful creature bent on revenge because he cannot accept Billy’s rejection. It would be interesting to the plot if characters like Jimmy, Bobby, AJ, and Brandon were fleshed out a bit more - something that can’t be done in a first-person narrative. I’d love to know more about Jimmy and why he is becoming the spiteful little monster that he is. Then again, it’s Billy’s pen...Billy’s world...and Billy’s heart that we’re privy to. It’s been nine books of watching Billy grow, mature, love, and learn from his critical mistakes. It’s a good series with many miles to go. I’m happy to be along for the journey. Keep up the good work, Mr. C!