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Hudson Bartholomew

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  1. I kept trying to find that Hail Mary, but it just wouldn't materialize I'm quite positive that the boys will find their HEA, it'll just take some time to get there. Thanks for reading!!
  2. Thanks!! It means a lot that readers feel like this is an appropriate ending for them, at least for now. I was afraid I'd get tomatoes thrown at me
  3. For the banners on member pages and individual story pages, what size should the banners be for them to appear properly? Thanks!!
  4. Thanks for the review! I didn't think I'd end up writing kids into my stories, but they seem to a jumping to get in everywhere I turn
  5. Thanks for the review! Point taken about why his family didn't call him directly.
  6. Thanks so much for such wonderful words! It means a lot to me. I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story and I hope the sequel will live up to expectations.
  7. Thank you so much! It's high praise to know that you're thinking about the story first thing in the morning! I agree with everything you've said, especially about how two people might be great together, but the timing isn't right; that certainly is the case with Ryan and Erik. But their paths will cross again!
  8. Thanks so much! I'm so glad that people are okay with the ending. I was really worried that I'd get rotten tomatoes thrown at me
  9. Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked the story! I like your idea of using the additional scenes in the sequel, I'll definitely consider that. Thanks again!
  10. Thanks so much for the encouraging words! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the story!
  11. Thanks so much for reading the story! Part Two and Erik's POV is in the works
  12. Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it
  13. Hahaha, please don't kill me, I'm working on the HEA Thanks so much for reading, and I'm thrilled that you loved it.
  14. The cursor blinked on, off, on, off on the blank document, daring him, taunting him to write something. Anything! But Erik had been sitting in front of his computer for the better part of an hour and could not get his fingers to type out one single word. Not one single word. Pathetic. He stared at the blinking cursor, cheek resting on the heel of his hand, while he sat hunched over in his chair. If his old dance teacher could see his posture now… Fuck it. He closed the offending blank document
  15. I'm really sorry to hear about your dad, and thank you for sharing. The great thing about writing is that we can shape where the story goes. I hope your writing has brought some small measure of solace to you.
  16. Thanks for sharing, Petey. Religion is never easy and I debated even putting this prompt up because I wasn't sure how people would receive it. But I'm glad that people are liking it so far.
  17. Thanks!! I'm glad it worked out okay
  18. Thanks!!
  19. Over the years, I've come across various articles (academic and otherwise), podcasts, etc. that have talked about the psychological effects of porn, all of it from the viewers perspective. I can't recall reading anything that discussed it from the performers perspective, so I think that conversation would be really interesting, regardless of genitalia And thanks for the insightful reviews. It makes me happy to see readers crawling inside the minds of my characters.
  20. It is porno. Actually, all of their sex scenes have been porno ;p But you're completely right, this one did feel different.
  21. You're right, we haven't seen much of Erik's emotions to date. I assure you they're there, but I only realized they weren't well communicated to the reader a little after the fact. I'm working on ways to fix this now.
  22. Thanks so much! I'm glad you're loving the story And yes, I have a feeling Ryan is done done done with porn.
  23. That is a really great point! I do know about the social media account and completely forgot about them when I was writing this. Social media is probably not something Ryan would ever agree to do, it's not his style. But Erik maybe?? Something to keep in mind for future reference.
  24. Lucky for Ryan, that was the last contracted scene Convenient, no? And yes, I agree that Erik needs to open up more because there's stuff going on in his head that he's not sharing.
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