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Bill, Great chapter, it was good to meet the parents of all the Friends. I hope you continue to report on the fugitive that survived the gun battle. Jon

Great chapter Bill, I like the way you are building the relationship between Owen and Ryan.

Bill, Another great chapter. Big changes are in store for Ryan and Owen's relationship.

I agree that it would be great if Frankie found these two and brought the to justice. Keep up the great work Bill. Jon

Bill, Thank you for another great chapter with the Currie Clan. It is terrible what happened to Ryan during the game, but I am very proud that he controlled himself and went to talk to his coach and let the Adults handle the situation. Bigots are everywhere these days and the make themselves feel important by talking down to people they feel are below them. It's a sad commentary that we see everyday in the media. Again thank you for a great chapter. Jon

Bill, Another great chapter! Great to see you figured out a way for both Benny and Ryan to join the family at the same time. I remember the difficultly you wrote about where Danny and Brandon trying to decide how to present the certificate to Benny and not make Ryan feel left out. As for the story of David, while I feel some remorse for his current situation, Karma in a B*t%h. I also do hope that the police find the jerks who assaulted Ian. If it is the same group that vandalized Elloitt's car then they need to be charged as a hate crime for both incidents. That way they will go away for a very long time. Jon

Bill, Thank you for the great read. I grew up near Hersehey and have great memories of the park. I know that I have told you this before but I really do like the way you have written Owen into the story. Please keep up the great work.

Bill, Great chapter! I like the way you are writing Owen into the story, but could there be tragedy in the future for Ryan and Owen? Jon

Bill, Thanks for the great chapter! Jon

Bill, Thank you for another great chapter. It is always good fto get away from the drama of day to day existence. Jon

I love the ideas you come up with for the birthday celebrations. I hope that Ryan is able to control his urges I am starting to worry about him. As alway great chapter Bill.

Great chapter Bill. By the way did I ever tell you I hate Cliff Hangers! 😜

Bill, First of all great chapter. I had a similar experience to Benny's when I was 5 or 6, I was hiding from my older brother in a cedar closet and couldn't get the door to open, really scary for a kid my age. You wrote it beautifully. Please keep up the good work. Jon

Bill, thank you for the great chapter. Can't wait to read about Spring Break. Jon

Great chapter Bill. I hope Ryan takes Danny's advise seriously.

Wow, the way that Ryan is adjusting to the being at the Cast Away is simply amazing. I hope that he will continue becoming a valued member of the family. Just as Wesley said above I am glad they made it back to Church. Thanks for the great chapter.

Bill, What a fantastic chapter. Thank you! Jon

Bill, What a great way to bring Josh home and a very touching ending to the chapter. ?

Bill, Great to see this change in Ryan. Great chapter!

I alway enjoy the Valentine's Day tale from the Hotel. Great chapter Bill.

Bill, thank you for another great chapter. I hope that Ryan will get over his fears if he is called to testify.

I am glad to see that there is a bit of drama with Ryan and the rest of the Family. I hope that it will work itself out as time goes on. Another great chapter Bill!

Bill, Great Chapter! I can already see the conflict that Ryan may bring to the Castway Hotel, but my hope is that everything will work out. Talk about art mimicking life, I seem to remember a similar situation to this chapter in the news about 12 years ago when I lived in the Philadelphia area. If I remember correctly the incident happened in Lancaster and involved a couple that took in Amish Kids that were shunned by the community. The ages of the kids involved were from 12 to 17 both boys and girls. Since no one in the Amish community wanted the kids they were all put into the system. I believe that some of the boys ended up ate the Hersey School and stayed there until they graduated high school. The couple that ran the house were brought up on so many different charges and sentenced to something like 50 years each. i think that it might make an interesting side story to show what happens to the couple that had taken Ryan in then pimped him out. Even if it just part of an future conversation between Little Ricky, Brandon and Danny.

Wrapping up the holidays is alway a difficult task in writing, but you did a great job. Thanks for the great chapter Bill.

Loved the fact that you wrote in a final prank on Ricky. Loved that it was a snowman in the Lexus. As always, keep up the great work.