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    End

    Dewilmnative commented on Demiurge's story chapter in End

    Bravo 👏🏽 And thank you for the wonderful stories and characters you brought to life. I do hope that you tell us more adventures of Wyn, Talon and especially Kalian!
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    What a beautiful ending to such a sad story. 🥺 Now on to Crestfallen!
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    Luminescence

    Dewilmnative commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Luminescence

    I have to agree with some above about the end of Anders, while his death was spectacular, I would have loved to see him suffer more than he did. It would have been poetic justice to have Anders beaten to an inch of his life and then have Wren finish him off. Although I think that would have given Wren indigestion and leave a bad taste in his mouth. 😂
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    Assembly

    Dewilmnative commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Assembly

    Yes, this is wrapping up nicely. That is what I’m afraid of. 😁 Thank you for a great story with exceptional characters. My hope is that you will write another story in the life of Talon and Kalian.
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    Parker, I just finished this story on the way back from the cabin and was balling my eyes out at the reunion between Andy and his Grandmother. It was a very touching reunion and well written. It was a bit if a shock to hear that Andy was not the Biological Son to the person who he believed to be his father, but with that realization I feel a lot of anxiety and a major weight was lifted from his shoulders. You wrote this story from the heart and I wanted to thank you for such a beautiful ending. NIght Auditor!
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    King

    Dewilmnative commented on Demiurge's story chapter in King

    Agreed, this was a great chapter! I actually loved the way you had Talon take care of his grandfather. How soon will it be before Granddad comes groveling back to beg Talon to take the throne? What changes will need to be made before Talon will even consider that as an other?
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    Maybe it’s Sue that figures out that Don is embezzling money from Robbie’s Trust and calls him out on it. She could press charges against Don in Robbie’s name and also serve him with divorce papers at the same time. It could all go down at a public fundraiser being held at the restaurant that Fran and Robbie went to on their first date with Nathan, Fran, and Rory’s Parents in the audience. 😈😈😈
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    Is any one else hearing the theme from Gillian’s Island right now?
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    Is any one else hearing the theme from Gillian’s Island right now?
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    Weasley, A train is too quick, Don must be made to suffer and be humiliated in front of the entire town. A very public scandal is what needs to happen. Maybe it is discovered that Don has had his own share of encounters at The Palm Springs Motel and Sue finds out. A very public divorce is what is needed.
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    Bill, Thank you for another book in the saga. I loved the way you told the story from different points of view. I did have one question, what year would Ian be finishing at the end of this book? I knew a lot of Medical and Nursing Students were going to work in the hospitals due to lack of resources available. Something to think about as a plot point if you continue the story of the Curry Clan. I hope that you, and those you love, have a Merry Christmas and a safe and happy New Year! Night Auditor
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    Being a musician and former Chorale Member I loved how you edited that last stanza of “I’ll be home for Christmas”. I hope that you don’t mind but I shared that on my Facebook Feed and have given you the credit. In the last 30 minutes it has received 30 loves from my friends and family, including my High School Choral Director and my Spanish Teacher. Bill, thank you for the touching story and may you and you family have a safe and Merry Christmas 🎄
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    You never know, Rev Kirk may contact the regional council and explain how Rev Belem is not a good fit and would cause a mass exodus from the congregation. Rev Kirk might put enough of a scare into them with the loss of tithing to the church that regional council will intercede and remove Rev Belec before Rev Kirk leaves after Christmas. One can only hope that will happen. I take it that Joshie will be getting Coal in his stocking this year. 🤣 As always Bill thank you for the great story.
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    I meant to ask this a few weeks ago, but if my memory is correct this book is taking place in the end of 2019. How or are you going the handle COVID in this story? A friend has started to read these stories from the beginning and was very upset at the deaths of Cody and Brent. I had to remind him that they may not be physically with the family anymore but they are watching over them all the same. Keep up the great story telling.
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    Wow, what a great story!
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    Bill, Thank you for continuing you saga of the Currie Family. I love your approach of using different character telling the story. Please keep up the great work and thank you again.
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    Please continue this story!
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    Bill, I know how hard it is to write this series without it becoming repetitive. I have enjoyed reading your stories of Josh and the boys. All through their joys and also through their despair. When you continued the story with a Danny and Brandon taking over the Castaway Hotel I was very happy. It has been a great series and while my hope is that you would at least tell the story of Danny and Brandon's wedding. I understand that you may just want to end it here. Again thank you for sharing your story within us. Jon
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    Another Milestone

    Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Another Milestone

    Bill, wow on what an emotional chapter. I was tearing up while reading it. I think it was very nice of the boys to want they adoption day to fall on Josh's Birthday. Please keep up the good work. I know how much time and effort you put into this story and I want you to know it is appreciated. Jon
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    Victories

    Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Victories

    Bill, Great chapter, it was good to meet the parents of all the Friends. I hope you continue to report on the fugitive that survived the gun battle. Jon
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    Great chapter Bill, I like the way you are building the relationship between Owen and Ryan.
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    New Horizons

    Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in New Horizons

    Bill, Another great chapter. Big changes are in store for Ryan and Owen's relationship.
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    Problem Solving

    Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Problem Solving

    I agree that it would be great if Frankie found these two and brought the to justice. Keep up the great work Bill. Jon
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    Troubling Times

    Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Troubling Times

    Bill, Thank you for another great chapter with the Currie Clan. It is terrible what happened to Ryan during the game, but I am very proud that he controlled himself and went to talk to his coach and let the Adults handle the situation. Bigots are everywhere these days and the make themselves feel important by talking down to people they feel are below them. It's a sad commentary that we see everyday in the media. Again thank you for a great chapter. Jon
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    Bill, Another great chapter! Great to see you figured out a way for both Benny and Ryan to join the family at the same time. I remember the difficultly you wrote about where Danny and Brandon trying to decide how to present the certificate to Benny and not make Ryan feel left out. As for the story of David, while I feel some remorse for his current situation, Karma in a B*t%h. I also do hope that the police find the jerks who assaulted Ian. If it is the same group that vandalized Elloitt's car then they need to be charged as a hate crime for both incidents. That way they will go away for a very long time. Jon
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