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    Chapter 5

    Dewilmnative commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I just found this story yesterday and I am enjoying it very much. Thank you for the great character development. You are writing this in such a way that the readers are becoming emotionally involved with your characters. Please keep up the great work.
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    Fun and Games

    Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Fun and Games

    Bill, Great chapter, pranks and all. I look forward to your releases each week. Castaway is one of my favorite stories since I found it on Nifty. If Ricky is going to come home for Christmas, I would love for there to be a couple of paragraphs with Danny and Ricky telling Benny about some of the pranks that he pulled in the past. That would give Benny some more Ida's about how to defend himself against Elliott. Do I see plastic wrap in Benny and Elliott's Future?
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    Brenda and Pat

    Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Brenda and Pat

    Bill, i am enjoying that fact that you are writing this story from Danny's point of view. Another great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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    A Busy November

    Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Busy November

    Love the way you ended this chapter. Can't wait for the return of Grand Dad Josh.
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