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Glad to see that Peter was cleared but CPS is a different story. My brother-in-law was accused of abusing my Nephew by a Child Care Worker. He was not allowed in the house for about a month. When he went for his interview the Social Worker took one look at him and said "You ticked off a Child Care Worker, didn't you?" It had turned out he was the 4th father this b*t*h had reported in the last 6 months. CPS launched an investigation against her directly. She lost her job and her licence, the Day Care center was also sued and was shut down. I am hoping that we find out what happens to the Laytons. I really think that Alan should press charges for kidnapping and mental anguish. Loving the story, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Please do not tell me that you have abandoned this story. I agree with others who have commented that there needs to be resolution between Peter, Alan and the boys. They all need each other in order to get through this. As for the Laytons the school should not have allowed Troy to be taken by them. Also the Police should have them in custody for Kidnapping.
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I just found this story yesterday and I am enjoying it very much. Thank you for the great character development. You are writing this in such a way that the readers are becoming emotionally involved with your characters. Please keep up the great work.
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Bill, Great chapter, pranks and all. I look forward to your releases each week. Castaway is one of my favorite stories since I found it on Nifty. If Ricky is going to come home for Christmas, I would love for there to be a couple of paragraphs with Danny and Ricky telling Benny about some of the pranks that he pulled in the past. That would give Benny some more Ida's about how to defend himself against Elliott. Do I see plastic wrap in Benny and Elliott's Future?
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Bill, i am enjoying that fact that you are writing this story from Danny's point of view. Another great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Love the way you ended this chapter. Can't wait for the return of Grand Dad Josh.
