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Chapter 161 The Eagle Has Landed
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 161 The Eagle Has Landed
Way to go Sue! 🥰 while this will definitely be a black eye for Don, Sue may want to have the divorce handles outside of their town, maybe in Toronto. Also, I think that Don is going to have some explaining to do once Sue starts asking questions about Robbie’s account records and why he has not been updated on them since ihe moved in.- 26 comments
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Chapter 161 The Eagle Has Landed
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 161 The Eagle Has Landed
Although, with Don’s connections with the people in power, Sue may have a harder time that we think.- 26 comments
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Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
Bill, what else can I say that already has been said. It is a wonderful tale of a Christmas miracle. Even if it isn’t a miracle for the main characters, or maybe it is. Family is everything this time of year and losing loved ones is hard on those who are left behind. A friend, and fellow Author passed away last weekend, leaving his husband devastated, and the rest of us shocked and confused. This story bring hope to my heart that maybe he will be able to find his own miracle. I hope that you have Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! Nightauditor -
Hang him by his balls from the top of the Chrysler Building! 😡
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Chapter 160 The Pastor and the Easter Bunny
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 160 The Pastor and the Easter Bunny
Way to go Sue! I think it’s time for her to hire a good divorce lawyer who will take Don to the cleaners very publicly. Hopefully the Captain will now be able to go to the CCG and tell the story about the Sailing outing and get The boys to back him up. -
“Let’s just say Jonah was sent for a psychiatric evaluation.” Good, too bad it didn’t include electric shock therapy. 😈
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I admit it, I am the one teasing Wesley! 😈
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I love Hunter’s narration and the Judge got what he deserved. With what Jack found he could be brought up on hate crime charges. Thank you for the great story!
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Ok,I know Wesley from a common Discord Server and I am 100% sure that his head was exploding when you revealed the Alternative Universe arc for this story. He most likely gave you an ear full as well. 🤣
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Wow, you really love cliffhangers, it must drive Wesley NUTS! Good for you! great story so far. Thanks
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They all need to take a one way trip to gitmo and stay there!
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I loved this exchange. “I’m nervous and it got worse when I found out mom is armed.” “Armed? Like with guns?” “What else would she be armed with?” “I don’t know explosives?” “We only use those in emergencies,” Mom said getting in to the SUV.
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Chapter 159 The Last One Standing
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 159 The Last One Standing
If the Boat’s Captain follows Maritime Law then he would be compelled to make a full report to the Canadian Coast Guard about the actions of the Pastor. It may also shed some light on who actually owns the boat and how it was paid for.- 22 comments
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Chapter 158 Blown & Tossed by the Wind
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 158 Blown & Tossed by the Wind
I am wondering what crawled up Don ass, since he was in a bad mood from the start and Robbie only made matters worse. As for the Pastor, I truly believe that he should have an accident out on the lake, or at least he should be met by the OPP for placing 6 or 7 teen in danger by taking them out on the lake when even the Captain he hired told him it was not safe. I am thinking reckless endangerment might be the proper charge.- 30 comments
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Chapter 157 The Good Friday Plan
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 157 The Good Friday Plan
I have to agree with Robbie, Mr. Lube is starting to grow on me. Thanks for the chapter and please keep up the great work! 😄 -
Chapter 156 The Scarlet Pimpernel
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 156 The Scarlet Pimpernel
Thanks for the chapter. I have to agree that renaming a boat Is very bad juju and will only cause something bad to happen. I know this from personal experience with my own dad. I also think that Matthew will grow a set and call Jo, but it most,likely won’t happen until Symmonds starts on another boy he likes. I have to agree with others that Robbie is beginning to regret his decision not to be more involved with Stephanie’s pregnancy and will want to be part of his son’s life.- 36 comments
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Love the chapter, Robbie’s reaction to Sue’s recommended exercises had me in stitches.
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Chapter 1 - A Runaway at Christmas
Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - A Runaway at Christmas
I wish you a Merry Christmas, I wish you a Merry Christmas, I wish you a Merry Christmas, and a Happy New Year! Thank you for the wonderful story! -
Thank You for the continuing adventure of Robbie. It’s sad that his sessions with Jo are at an end, but maybe he will be able to get Matthew the help he needs and finally get rid of Symmonds for good.
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Chapter 1 - Seeking Justice
Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Seeking Justice
Bill, thanks for the great story. I always love your Halloween stories, both your short stories and when you include them in your sagas. Night Auditor. -
Ok, I know that this comment comes over 3 years after this chapter was posted, but here is my speculation on Adam and Artie. Everyone says how much they look alike and how they could be father and son, but no one has thought that they actually maybe half brothers. It could be the reason that Adam was kicked out was he threatened his father by saying he was going to he police and reporting him for incest with Artie’s Mom. Then when their mother found out it was her that forced Stephanie out of the house after Artie was born. And they have been trying to cover it up ever since by turning the town against the two of them.
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While I know that this chapter is over 3 years old, it still does not temper my anger at Nate! 😤 If he where to do this in any hospital that I am associated with not only would his ass be fired, but the hospital would have to report him the the state medical board and he would lose his license. 😡 I feel really sorry for both Teddy and Ryder and what could come of Nate’s indiscretion toward’s Ryder’s treatment. 😢
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Chapter 153 A Wide Berth
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 153 A Wide Berth
Jo needs to be told about this then go to OPP to have them investigate not only Symmonds, but the church as well. If they are sending children to Conversation Therapy then they are in Violation of the Canadian Human Right Law. 😡- 29 comments
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Chapter 152 The Perfect Pitch
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 152 The Perfect Pitch
While I am concerned about Don finding out about Robbie and Nathan. I have more concern about our overly friendly Reverend and what he plans to do to convince Robbie to change his “lifestyle”.
