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Chapter 166 Easy Come, Easy Go
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 166 Easy Come, Easy Go
So, Don is not paying any of the Bills or the Mortgage because he says he’s doesn’t have any money. Sounds a bit fishy to me. -
Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
I grew up in Delaware, but moved to the TC in 2006.- 26 comments
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Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
We have an angel tree at our church, but the presents either go to a teen homeless shelter or to the families that have children that attend a daycare that we do outreach for in the Twin Cities. This is a great reminder to help those that are less fortunate than ourselves. Thank you, Bill.- 26 comments
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Bill, thank you for the fantastic chapter. it will be interesting to see if the shaman and his son ever run across any other evil skin walkers encroaching on the reservation and how they handle them. Speaking of the shaman son what a great surprise for the group to meet him..
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It is beginning to sound like our time with the Shaman is coming to an end. It will be interesting to see what he has in store for the boys next, if anything. Again thank you for the chapter.
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Chapter 1: Dance With the Devil
Dewilmnative commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Dance With the Devil
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I do believe The Shaman will be testing Mac sometime during the overnight to see how he reacts to a predator coming in while they sleep. excellent chapter, Bill!
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These chapters with the Shaman and Mac training and reminded me a lot of the Vacations the Curries took in your other stories. It is a mixture of History, local information, fun, and a bit of intrigue. I loved the tours of the sites in New Mexico and I am hoping to be there is June of next year.
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I hope that the encounters with the Evil Skinwalker and the predators don’t affect Mac anymore then they already have. It will be interesting to see how Mac takes to being the predator and not the prey. Thanks for the great chapter.
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Bill, This just showed up in my TikTok feed and I thought you’ d get a kick out of it. https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZT86re6ec/
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Quietguy has a point, but I don’t think the Shaman would have red eyes. If I remember correctly that is a trait of an Evil Skin Walker as described by the Shaman a few chapter ago. Bill as always great chapter and that for the scary cliffhanger. Can’t wait to tune in next week at the same Bat Time on the same Bat Channel. 😂
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Chapter 165 Birthday Privileges
Dewilmnative commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 165 Birthday Privileges
I agree with James, 👿, Sue needs to have an independent auditor look at Robbie’s Trust. I also think that Don needs to publicly give Robbie his back allowance, maybe in from of the local political mafia. -
I continue to love this story. Keep up the great work!
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Bill, excellent chapter! I can’t wait until Mac and Devyn are together in the next chapter. It was a bit of a tease to have Devyn show up but not be able to stay for a bit, but the Shaman was right if they were seen it would definitely cause unwanted attention.
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Another interesting thought would be could the evil Skinwalkers mistaken for Bigfoot? It was interesting how the Haatali and his son are basically doing to same thing that Isaac and his family are doing to protect their secret.
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I had the opportunity to visit the town of Kayenta in Northeastern Arizona when I was a teenager. This town is in the Navajo Nation and acted as a cultural center for the territory. I remember I was shocked at the lack of respect that the non Native Americans showed to these people. Their culture as rich and I learned a lot from our guide who took us out to tour that part of the reservation. Bill, this chapter brought back those memories and I thank you for that. I loved visiting that area of the country and learning about the Navajo culture.
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Are you sure that Devin shouldn’t be studying biology or Zoology at College. Great chapter, thank you! 😁
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Again, thank you for the history lesson as well as the talk in wildlife anatomy. I remembered about the Navajo Code Talkers from my High School American History class. We actually had a guest speaker come in a talk about his interactions with the Navajo soldiers during WW2. It was very interesting how even though these soldiers helped win the war against Japan it took almost 40 years for their contribution to be acknowledged by the US Government. If you have not watched the movie Windtalkers, I highly recommend it.
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I would have to agree with some of the comments above about Mac’s Parents knowing his orientation and not caring 2 hoots about it. This was a great chapter and I loved the Native American History Lesson. Keep up the great work! ❤️
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Personally I think it was sweet that Sue and Robbie had a moment. It was about time he started to treat her like the mother he needs. As for Nathan’s news I really hope that Robbie is wrong about his feeling that his relationship with Nathan is just a High School Romance.
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While using deception was the only way to get Mac’s parents to agree to the “summer plans”, I feel that using Barry as the main reason is going to bite them in the future. My hope is that everything goes well during the training and the boys don’t get into trouble. Thanks for the great story.
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The chapter hasn’t been up for more than 8 hours and you have all these great comments. I agree with what most people have mentioned above about Devin not keeping up with his studies and how that might affect him in the coming weeks, playing catch-up sucks. I am a bit upset that you ended this chapter in a major cliffhanger and now I have to wait another week to get the answer of how Devin caught the a$$h0le.
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Where did you see that Carlos was deceased?
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Keep that outlines coming as that means more CJ’s Squad stories are in the pipeline! 😁
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Not another outline! 😭
