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Hopefully the story will become even more interesting as it continues. 🙂
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Parking my car on the side of the street, I aimed my eyes at the club which was a favorite location for those bloodsuckers. People called these creatures many names, from monsters and demons to gods who once dominated the imagination of the ancient Greek and Norse people. However, the majority today refer to these heathens as simply vampires, and my son was currently playing in the Devil’s playground. No person, alive or dead, was going to threaten my son’s life, except for me after I find him.
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In a world where vampires were not only monsters and demons, but were also gods and goddesses of various myths from Greek to Norse. And in today’s society, vampires are revered as celebrities and politicians, gradually sinking their teeth into every aspect of human civilization. Damien must live in this reality as a single father with three children as he tries to make ends meet for his family. Then after a bounty hunt goes wrong, he must confront his demons, both figuratively and literally. Mostly in the form of a twenty-something-year-old man who is more than meets the eye.
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Yeah, sorry about that. I just wanted the title to match more with Sweetheart, West Virginia since the name is also a term of endearment. I’m control freaking like that. Hopefully it’ll grow on you as the story continues. And I also thought about the cereal when I changed the name haha.
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And thank you for the comment!
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“Hey! Be careful with that!” I exclaimed, looking at the glowing tip of Kelley’s wand like it was burning a thousand degrees. “Answer my question. How do you have an instrument of the Will in your possession?” Kelly asked, his wand now only an inch from my face. “Okay! I got it from one of the abandoned mines under the town!” Kelly narrowed his eyes. “That’s the truth!” A moment passed and when the tip of Kelly’s wand suddenly changed from a bright yellow to the color blue, he sighed
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I did re-edit a portion of this story, but there's definitely still errors that need to be fixed before I ever consider publishing it. Regardless, thank you for liking my creativity with this story. This is actually the third iteration of this concept of humans deriving their superhuman abilities by some technological or mythical phenomenon, the first two being scrapped before I decided to post the third version to this site. I also liked the concept of a hero growing up from a background of adversity but overcoming that to save the world from the malevolent. So, I'm really happy that like that as well 😄
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Yes, getting shot isn't something that anyone can recover from easily; however, let's just say this is going to be the beginning rather than the end for Ryan 😉
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Thank you for commenting! Yeah, eventually I want to find an editor to help me fix the errors in this story since I'm still an amateur when it comes to that. But hopefully that doesn't distract you too much from the story that I really wanted to tell that editing all the errors was an afterthought 😋
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Yes, Doctor Miyamoto definitely has ulterior motives with the project
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And let's not forget that the entire project wasn't even commissioned by HERO and was basically done in secret until it was exposed, and they had to cooperate with the organization. Also, the cores of the nodes that were mentioned in the doctor's speech are soul-like as described in the first part of the story, so they're basically cloning souls to produce these new version of nodes which is definitely uncomfortable to say the least. That is just one of the risks that Project Labour is doing and more will most likely be revealed as the story continues. Thank you for commenting!
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Entering the large ballroom, Ryan could not believe he was still in the Japanese research facility based on the lively surroundings, like the white-clothed, round tables that were evenly spaced from each other and held varieties of foods from many cultures. This was likely to accommodate for the equal variety of Champions from around the world who were all dressed in diverse attire that made them all very distinguishable, like the Champions from India, China, and Russia. Because of both the cuis
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Thank you! I’m happy you’re enjoying my story. There’s definitely more to come as the mystery continues to unravel. 😀
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Definitely. Only a few weeks have passed since the Colossus invaded the United States, and there is already more to come with the conference happening in Japan that will host the top-ranked Champion cadets from around the world. Hopefully, Ryan and Chris will be ready if or when things go haywire.
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“Are you enjoying the flight so far, gentlemen?” Chris looked up at the flight attendant and smiled. “Yes, we are. Thank you.” The flight attendant smiled and continued walking, checking on the other passengers in the first-class area of the airliner. Chris then looked at Ryan who looked slightly pale as he looked through the window by his seat. Concerned, he placed his hand on Ryan’s who flinched before facing Chris. Ryan blushed and said, “I’m sorry. I’m…not used to flying on a pla
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I have the opinion that if you are defending yourself or someone else, by all means, go wild with whatever you have in your disposal. Those vandals definitely deserved what they got, getting their butts kicked by someone like Chip Andrews wasn't something they expected. Topher must share some history with the kid found in his house, and hopefully we'll discover how he and Topher know each other as the story continues. Also, with the possible hoarding situation as another issue, I think we can all agree that Topher staying at Chip's place was the better idea. We'll also see how Topher will handle the new living arrangements and Chet's, I mean Chad's reaction to the whole thing. I'm sure it'll be very juicy. 😋
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Very true, like from his car and house being vandalizing to his internal struggle with his feelings for Chip. Hopefully, Topher will discover the person responsible and reconnect with Chip even if they remains just friends...for now.
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“Get away from him!” The people destroying the car and attacking Topher all stopped upon hearing me shout. My hands were clenched tightly into fists, and my feet were firmly planted on the ground, no way I was going to run away as an innocent person was assaulted, especially when that person was Topher Maguire. I did feel a little intimidated when one of the men approached me with a metal baseball bat, but I remained where I was with my back straight. “And who the fuck are you?” the man
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Thank you! I always try to spice up my stories, whether that is with folklore, mythology, or people escaping from another temporal dimensional that is causing a division in a country, both figuratively and literally. 😋
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Yes, it seems that both Chip and Topher have contributed to the breaking of their relationship; though, it could also be said that they are putting themselves down too much, and they should really start resolving the conflict soon by simply addressing the elephant in the room. Chad seems like the perfect man, handsome, successful, and accepted by Chip's family. However, people who are the most put together sometimes hide the darkest of secrets. Hopefully, that doesn't apply to Chad, but if so, Chip better start running. Lastly, we'll see what hidden abilities Chip will use to deliver justice against those people attacking Topher and what their motivations are in the next chapter. Thank you for the comment, and your overall input of my story. 😄
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The fundraiser, or whatever this was, was tragically cut short when the police arrived at the hotel. It seemed that the entire police force of the city was here which made complete sense since a time shifter entering our world beyond the wall was entirely unheard of, until now of course. The entire parking lot was clogged with police cruisers, officers talking to all the guest of the fundraiser event, none of them leaving until they gave statements to what they saw. However, it was completely us
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I love Hocus Pocus! It's a classic. Also, I definitely got plenty of inspiration from the Harry Potter series. 😋
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And thank you for the comment!
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Thank you! It is now clear that Ben isn't the only person who possess a wand, or The Will according to Kelly who has manipulated his body because of it. 😮
