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When Rick's friend and former girlfriend, Elizabeth, asks him to return to his hometown, so he can become the best man to her wedding, how can he say no? However, her older brother, Freddy, is also back in town and isn't too pleased with Rick's presence. What's his problem? Is he just protective of his sister? Or is there a deeper meaning behind his scowl that makes Rick wonders if coming back home to Middle America was a good idea?
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Very true! And Zev was magically able to heal all those injuries completely for Lucky. We'll see what Zev had or did to allow for such a miraculous recover.
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I readied my sword as the onslaught of wolves came barreling towards us. Aiming my eyes at one wolf at the front of the pack, I was about to swing my weapon when I was suddenly sent off my feet. I didn’t know what happened until I fell on my ass, several meters away from where I just stood. Zev looked at me with seriousness before turning back to the wolves and engaging with them. The bastard must’ve thrown me here, while he dealt with these wolves by himself. I was quickly back on my feet, read
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Awesome! I'm looking forward to your comments in future chapters!
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Thank you! I'm also planning to write a series of novellas that will be in the same world as Charming and explore different characters. So, look forward to that as well. 😁
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It is. I wanted to the change the point of view of the story from third person to first person as well as alter other major details, which I felt couldn't have been done by simply revising the original work. So, I've decided to rewrite the story and then continue it with two more books that will make it a trilogy. I hope you'll be interested in reading this rewrite. Though some aspects of the story will remain the same, other major ones will be completely changed. I also want to remove any inconsistencies and plot holes that were in the first piece, which I believe will make the story even more magical. 😊
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Cindi drove us to a small, discreet bar in only four minutes, parking on the side of the street before turning off the engine. During the ride, I was able to change into dry clothes, which I knew I needed after my meeting with that sea witch. Cindi told me that she would meet me inside the bar after she changed out of her police get-up. Inside the bar, I managed to locate a small table at the corner of the musty area. I sat down and checked my phone for any new messages, keeping a low profil
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Haha! Maybe Lucky will be that someone. And it's safe to assume that Zev is a big guy, in more ways than one. 😉
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I couldn’t believe where I was right then. A prince, sitting in a small, cold holding cell at a police station, while he waited for the same police officer who arrested him to announce how much his bail would be. I was still completely soaked from my misadventure at the flooded stadium and was shivering so uncontrollably that a person passing by could’ve assumed that I was having some kind of seizure. My teeth were hurting as well from chattering so much, and I wanted out of this cold hell soon.
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Yes, hopefully that normalcy will soon return to Damien and his family after the Holy Grail mishap gets sorted out. But I doubt it'll be that easy to fix. Also, Austin is definitely planning on something for his homecoming dance that his father doesn't know of. And Damien is indeed thick, in more ways than one. 😉
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And thank you for commenting on this chapter! I’m glad to be back. 😁
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The Holy Spirit is most likely the Mother or Mary Magdalene who is also considered the Holy Grail according to Alexandra and her team’s research. The result of the Holy Trinity is the birth of Jesus’s bloodline that power-hungry vampires most likely want. It’s confusing, I know. The Holy Trinity and what the concept could possibly be is still speculated on to this day.
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Opening my eyes, I yawned and stretched my legs. Last night was certainly an event which completely exhausted me, and sleep was the best remedy. I looked at the clock on the nightstand that showed the time which was still morning. Just another brand-new day which would involve getting out of my bed and freshening up before skedaddling to the kitchen to concoct some hybrid breakfast meal for the kids to eat. And the fact that today was a weekend meant the girls would be play in the living room, w
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The next chapter should be available next week, specifically around Sunday or Monday. I'm sorry for the long wait, especially on a cliffhanger.
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Considering that Portugal is next to Spain which is the country that colonized the Philippines centuries ago, there is definitely no surprise of where that sausage dish originated from. Thanks for sharing that, and thank you so much for reacting to all the chapters and my comments as well. You really helped boost my reputation even more which is getting me closer to 3,000. And if you're wondering, I'm currently working on the next chapter of this chapter, but there is no guaranteed date of when it'll be posted. Hopefully soon. 😀
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And it's also assumed that he's the one who has been breaking into the town's grocery store and stealing from the meat section. This is definitely not another ordinary ghost story!
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I have to admit that I never lived in a small town like Sweetheart, always living in the suburbs instead. However, I know enough from watching media and reading other stories that small-town life isn't always the comforting life that it promises. The fact that Kevin accepts his sexuality, might mean that his father the pastor is more open-minded with his beliefs even though his son keeps it a secrets, at least for now. And yeah, no one who is drenched in blood while carrying a severed human appendage ever comes back fully sane. And Cash and Ben need resolve their differences as well as their internal problems if there ever will be a chance for them to build some kind of connection.
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Yes, Cash Monroe and Benny the Bratt certainly have more going on than resentment and regret, which all started when Cash stopped Ben for driving pass a red stoplight. And adding the whole Claudia situation, the reader can safely assume that isn't going to be a clean-cut relationship.
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Yes, that West Virginia with the legend of the Mothman and the state that inspired the song "Take Me Home, Country Roads" by John Denver. And I wanted the small town and the setting of the story to I have a unique name, thus Sweetheart was born.
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Yes, hopefully Damien isn't being played for a fool and can trust the two people who are becoming more important to him as the story continues. Thank you for your comments as always!
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I will admit that a feud between vampires and lycans/werewolves isn't completely original with other stories like the film series Underworld portraying that conflict as well, but mine having a Greek mythological twist to it. And mirrors have an interesting effect on supernatural beings like lycans in this world, and you'll soon see what mirrors can do and reveal to beings like vampires.
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The process of vampire transformation in this world is not completely explained yet, so who knows what Damien would look like if he decides to become a vampire which would be even more complicated since he'll have to watch his kids grow up and eventually get old, while he remains in the prime of his life. And maybe Will has a thing for older-looking men, who knows? Also, vampires were once revered as gods like in Greek and Norse myth, so a kingdom or some other type hierarchical term is probably the best way to describe their society which definitely contrasts modern societies like America. And that's so cool that you dissected Annabella's name to be of Italian origin, especially since Paul the Apostle was executed at Rome, Italy and maybe that is where he continued his bloodline, making both Annabella and Damien are Italian.
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Yes, unrequited love can really suck, but Austin is still young and hopefully he can move on if the love is not returned. Also, I think you meant to say Damien's family, and if so, Damien's family problems are quite complicated, but not uncommon with a father trying to compensate for his absence by buying his daughters' affection and a son who has always been closer to his mother and holds some resentment towards his father. Also, thank you for telling me about the term "prince royal" from what I researched so far means the eldest son who will inherit his father's/king's throne. I'll definitely look more into it.
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And thank you for your comment! Each one always encourages me to continue my stories knowing they are being enjoyed. 🥰
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Sorry, I had to 😋
