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  1. Superpride

    Chapter Two

    Woah 😮 I'm thankful that I'm an only child now. And thank you for telling me that you really like this story!
  2. Superpride

    Chapter Two

    And to think that I used to want a sibling. I couldn't imagine having a twin haha!
  3. Listed below are the story cards and the ending card that you will use to create ideas for a story that you will then write down as a response to this entry. More details are in the description of the blog. Enjoy! Story Cards Wolf (Character) Poisoned (Aspect) Storm (Event) In the Sky (Place) Husband or Wife (Character) Ending Card Which proves you should always be careful when choosing your companions.
  4. Superpride

    Chapter Two

    Thank you for telling me specifically what you like about this story so far since it strengthens my motivation to continue this story and what I should keep doing. And thanks for telling me that you're a fraternal twin yourself, which gives me more insight that I can apply to Duncan as a character. I'm an only child, so your input is very appreciated 😁
  5. Clinking their wine glasses together, James and his art professor smiled and took a sip of their wine that was the most delicious thing he had tasted in a long while. He was standing in an art gallery that was featuring artwork and was already getting the attention of very wealthy and influential people from the city, and all artwork belonged to him. Just the very idea of his art being showcased for the rich and powerful to view and digest made him very giddy. Also, the knowledge that this was g
  6. Superpride

    Chapter Eleven

    It definitely is 😁
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    Chapter Eleven

    Thank you for the comment 😁
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    Chapter Eleven

    I raked his hands through my hair, not believing what I just heard. “Seriously? You’re…You’re pregnant?” Miranda nodded as she clenched her eyes closed. “So…it’s Dustin’s, right?” I asked stupidly. “Of course, it’s Dustin! Who else could it be?” Miranda turned her back towards me and smothered the side of her face into her pillow. “I can’t believe this is happening.” I looked at Miranda, not knowing what to do. “Are…Are you going to keep it?” “I don’t know! But need to talk t
  9. Superpride

    Chapter Ten

    Thank you! I'm happy to know that each chapter is grabbing your attention 😀
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    Chapter Ten

    You're right about Dustin not being daddy material since parenthood involves being completely selfless to provide for a child and Dustin is just not cut out for that responsibility. Also, the father's behavior could indicate something much more sinister or more sincere than meets the eye. That's all I will say that subject, and thank you the comment!
  11. Superpride

    Chapter Ten

    I know, right? 😮
  12. Superpride

    Chapter Ten

    A week passed since the incident at the fundraiser that caused the death Mike’s father, and it was now the afternoon and I was home again after attending the funeral. I was there with Mike who was with his family. Surprisingly, they were the only people there. Apparently, Mike’s mother only wanted the immediate family and some other closer family members and friends to attend, which I understood since it was currently a breaking news story right then and she didn’t want anyone who didn’t truly c
  13. Superpride

    Chapter Four

    Thanks and I’m happy you love the characters!
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    Chapter Nine

    Thank you! And I appreciate that you like the inclusion of Filipino mythology and my twist on it since that is one of the main reason why I wrote this story. Also, we'll see if your theory is correct or if there's another twist to who Travis is 😉
  15. Superpride

    Chapter Eleven

    Haha, yes! Lucky finally got lucky with Zev 🐺
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    Chapter Eleven

    Yeah, with what's going on in Zev's bedroom, the road trip to the Snow Queen's palace will definitely be delayed since Lucky's going to need plenty of time to recover. And he's the Prince Charming! Zev can't get any luckier than that. Haha.
  17. With Zev holding Violet’s still unconscious body in his arms, he and Lucky entered Slip and Fall and quickly walked into Cindi’s office where she and everyone else were still at. They all looked with concern as Zev placed Violet down gently onto a black armchair at the corner of the office. “What happened? Is she okay?” Cindi asked, walking to Violet. “She’s fine. But we barely escaped the vampires who grabbed her hair, trying to pull her back into the tower. I had no other choice, but t
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    Chapter Twenty

    Haha. You're welcome 😀
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    Chapter Twenty

    Thank you very much! And we'll see how the new technique of compassion is used by Ryan and Chris in the future. All I can say for now is that compassion won't be exclusive to them for long and their trip to the small town called Hopewell will be more of a wild ride than they first expected 😉
  20. Superpride

    Chapter Twenty

    After fighting a new type of Colossus that almost killed Chris and compromised the body of Maria, they definitely deserve some time off. And I understand your uncertainty with Doctor Shepherd, but hopefully you also see the humanity in him as well and that's he's not the generic villain that people in the story are making him out to be. Thanks for your comments and I hope you enjoyed the first installment of Hero Wanted 😁
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    Chapter Twenty

    And thank you for all your comments during this whole process of writing this story. Be sure to stay tuned for the next part of Ryan and Chris's story as well 😁
  22. Yes, to know that Doctor Shepherd seemingly had a plan all along is very strange indeed.
  23. “—Breaking news coming from Washington DC today! For the first time in history, three of the Colossus have appeared simultaneously in one location and have caused more than five-hundred million dollars’ worth of damage to both the city of Philadelphia and the Champion Academy of Washington DC. Though all three have been defeated without any civilian casualties, dozens of Champions are being hospitalized after being directly controlled by the Colossus by an unknown method utilized by the Colossus
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    Chapter Two

    Yeah, it'll be nice to get a new perspective on the technical aspect of my writing. I plan on requesting an editor after I post the final chapter.
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