frigidjason

Please do , hopefully it wont be the wedding my mind pictured, another twist like your cliffhangers I hope

Really really great story. Thanks for writing it, gonna miss looking for new chapters. Would be ironic if Noah's mom was at the wedding crying and he realizes its her.

Powerful stuff. Well written and extremely well said, and very very real. Unfortunately change is guaranteed. Thank you for sharing.

A good solid start, may things get better and better. Thanks for sharing your writing. Perhaps find an editor, someone who can help you with tidying up terms, tenses etc, your basic story is good in my opinion, writing however is not my forte.

Ethan is writing the next chapter, perhaps this is a new story

In my humble opinion, Noah's mom knows he is gay and is using emotional blackmail to force him into the closet.

I am no good at writing, my skills therein are no good. Your tale/story was awesome in my opinion. Thanks for sharing it.

Your writing and story get better each chapter Keep up with the good work. Thanks for sharing with us

Very very sad.

The plot thickens...... Keep writing , the story improves each chapter.

Glad to see the two boys know about each other. Thanks for sharing your writing, enjoying the pace of the story and the lingo.

Perfect chapter ending, love reading this story. Thanks for writing it.

Ditto Superbly written thus far, cannot wait for more.

I agree, perfectly written.

Took a few long awaited kisses but the penny finally dropped, they both deserve the best. Love the story keep typing away...... hopefully few cliffhangers and some twists to come.