Tazzle001

Thank you for a beautiful story.

This story has gone from a place of bleak beginnings to one of heartwarming endearment.

Ok, that was really good, and no sheep skin rugs were harmed in the making of this story. Next up, "Let's Make A Baby" then "Dan's Revenge Sex" (since he'll have to wait). Go with a Streamliner International, classic and modern. I would also like to do a shout out to Ms Julie's Strawberry/Rhubarb and Sweet Potato pies . Looking forward to the places you will take us next. Always -Brian

Such a beautiful chapter . So happy to see the healing he is undergoing .

A beautiful chapter .

Such a good chapter! I love this family. I'm just an ordinary guy, but this family has a beautiful way of making everyone, ordinary or extraordinary, feel special. I didn't realize how long I had been holding my breath during Raymond's gut retching speach . I loved the car scene. As someone who's been there once, I didn't realize how much I wanted (fantasized) about it till it happened. I loved how nonchalant everyone was about " gay porn" , from so many people, in the diner. Where I grew up in Texas it would have been seen in private and discussed in 2nd and 3rd person discussion, lol. I don't think everyone reading has a dislike of cliffhangers. If they're like me, it's just hard to leave and wait till the next post. That is a great compliment to your story telling and characters we have adopted into our hearts. Always-Brian

Why do I have a overwhelming desire just to sit with him and hug him. My heart wants to reach out to this being of words and emotions. A place where heart and creative spirit connect two worlds. You are not alone. I am not alone. All of us are not alone when we connect together in our shared being.

Loved this chapter! I loved the interactions between fathers and sons. I really loved how those relationships lead into, and brought full circle ( and possible influences) into a discussion of family and fatherhood. With these great role models/relationships , any man would feel more intuited to emulating their father to a new generation. Does the rest of the Adams family know Raymond's decision yet? These guys could be butt ass broke and I would still be honored to be reincarnated as their son as I know that I would never lack for being loved. Speaking of loved. You can tell how much love you have for these characters. I was once told that there is family you are borne into, and family you make over your life. Through this medium your "family " has become ours. Thank you. -Brian

Hmm, a lot going on this chapter. . Glad to see that the Fire Cheif, Mayor, and especially that nasty bigot preacher are going to reap what they have sown. I'm saddened that the families the donations were intended for won't benefit them in time for Christmas. Evidence and other legal red tape. Maybe some of these people would qualify for job training, I hear there's a big company moving into town. I'm disappointed in Paul and Rosarita's behavior. I thought they were just teasing, but when someone's job is threatened with early termination, it's more serious than I thought. I hope the two of them can realize how lucky they both are and celebrate that they've found special people to love them. Encourage each other to " make a joyful noise " unto the Lord, family, friends, and any passing pedestrians if need be. Tink and team deserve pats on the back and raises. I could kiss him for "fruitful haul" of evidence. Thank you again for giving me a strong, supportive family that makes me feel like I'm apart something beautiful from the start to the finish of each chapter .

"....the dark place in my mind I've imprisoned myself in." This almost made me cry. I don't know that we've "all" been there, but if you have, you know how daunting a trap it is. This chapter I emotionally bonded to Chris. I hope that he will find forgiveness both inside and out. Forgiveness will be the foundation on his journey.

The story is so good and the action has been incredible. There is a movie playing out behind my eyes that is worthy of any theater in the real world. The plot is strong and ethereal leaving me mentally panting for more. Great job of story telling. I want to see this in the cinema one day.

Great chapter. What a difficult and lonely childhood. At first I considered the grandfather to be cold and evil.( And he is ). But in his own twisted way I believe he does care about his grandson. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you

What a beautiful, romantic end to this chapter. You must be a salesman, sir. I have never wanted to buy a goat hide rug so badly in my life. ?. A baby on the way! What do you get for a baby that will want for nothing? Bumpkiss is going down, and once he goes to prison, he'll be going down nightly. Karma, fate, and Santa intervention. Police chief, Fire chief, Mayor, and don't forget Evil Preacher. Thank you for for making me feel warm and happy on this rainy, cold day. -Brian

Oh crap. Here we go.

Good pack building moment. Like the way they are learning to engage as a pack. I keep drawing parallels between how dominants treat submissives and how in many places men treat women. Places where men are privileged and women are nothing. Places where riding a public bus , a public train, jogging in your own neighborhood, or attending school doesn't guarantee safety from rape, abduction, or death. While there is a beauty to the intrinsic design to this " cast" system. There is also a dark web truth on how easy it is exploited. Enjoyed the glimpses of development in Harry and Carla. What's going on in Rayne's mind?

Another great chapter. I hope we get to hear the call Darwin made to his father or what the fallout was. He talked about coming clean to his father about everything. This rag tag group needs a mentor or at least a friend. The intimate moments have been breathtaking. I hope Hector is the "friend " they need him to be. Harry is a firecracker in such a good way. Can Darwin be a dom among subs or is it one or the other?

Alright, I owe Darla a huge apology. I was convinced she was the one on campus keeping a watch for Carl . Convinced she was the owner of the honey sweet smile in the basement. Sorry Darla. Interested in knowing what happened up in Canada and how Rayne knows. Can't wait to see where the story goes from here. Still worried about Darwin's dad and Maria. Will they leave and join up with new pack?

Holy Crap. Carl is a piece of crap, but an even bigger one is that two faced , interfering, backstabbing "B". Yes, I know that smile ?. Rayne is either a great liar or totally sucking up. Don't hurt Harry. I would never forgive someone who tortured or allowed someone to torture me or anyone else. Poor George. How does he survive the betrayal, hurt, guilt?? How does this not destroy him .

NO ! Not Harry !! Carl , I'm coming for you ! I have to admit, I was having trouble breathing though the torture scene and subsequent flight. The story is good. Real good. I'm both afraid and hopeful as to where the story is going. Thank you for not breaking my heart, so far. -Brian

Loving the story and the family. Ray and Dan make me want to pull up a chair, grab a large popcorn, and watch the fireworks. I can't wait for Tink and his other half to finally meet. I'm gonna need some water to wash down all that popcorn ( big grin). The Adams may be power players on the dl, but Miss Julie has everyone beat. You could write a whole series on her suttle manipulations (advice) over a whole town. She's like the angel in "It's a Wonderful Life " , but no one knows she's an angel. ? . Thanks again for a good time.-Brian

Strong chapter in developing our two young characters. Although I can't imagine what Kurt is thinking. Claiming someone you previously scared the shit out of and was just raped without talking to them and even making sure they're in a better head space. Koby just took what he wanted without asking too. A what the hell is T's dad thinking? I'm so mad at him for ignoring the problem at hand that I want to kick his ass out of the pack as well. Why is the sister the only sane adult that has eyes and common sense between them.! This is gonna go down in a hallway. Don't let him get suicidal (T) , please!

A chapter in which I feel an emotional wreck. These kids have done so many wrong things with out thinking since the story started. So many people have been hurt due to words, fangs, and misguided emotions. For all the age of these teens, almost all have the emotional maturity of preteens. My heart aches for each of them, including Koby. I know these flaws drive the story, but I wish there were councilors or psychologists available for the pack. Being "lycan" or "were" can't be easy, especially for the young and elderly. All of their actions have consequences, but these should come with the opportunity to learn from their mistakes and if needed, opportunities to make restitution. Sorry, just saddened. Really like Chaska, she's smart and very caring.

How this story continuously leaves me wanting to to cry amazes me. I want to help them. Maybe I'm just being selfish in my hearts desire. This "thing " between them will either end horribly and tragically, or will be the strongest most beautiful thing imaginable. Thank you for another strong chapter. -Brian

So sad . I felt my own soul want to reach out and howl with emotions we all lock up and keep hidden. To reach out and hug someone that is hurting. I know this is a story, but a dynamic story can touch us and bring out emotions both shown and hidden. I have loving hope for the characters in this story. Thank you- Brian

Great chapter. Thank you for sharing this beautiful world you have created. I will never get enough Gregg. Would love to read further adventures of Paddy, Troy, Gregg, And Noah. Just a quick question. In your world what is the ratio of human to shifter ? I see in this chapter Troy is wanting to write a book and Paddy wants to " teach" . My idea of a children's book(s) doesn't sound as far fetched anymore. Thank you again !