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Everything Changes

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Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama

This is a story of how everything changes when Cameron's dad which is a police officer is killed, and he has nobody to turn to other than his best friend Brendan.

Copyright © 2017 Dahawk; All Rights Reserved.

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I am not sure whether your formatting is a stylistic gimmick or a uploading glitch but it it's current form, this chapter is virtually unreadable.

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7 minutes ago, starboardtack said:

I am not sure whether your formatting is a stylistic gimmick or a uploading glitch but it it's current form, this chapter is virtually unreadable.

What makes it unreadable to you? 

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10 hours ago, Dahawk said:

What makes it unreadable to you? 

I agree with him. I don't know if it is formatting error or what but right now the words are so jumbled together w/o spacing between them that it's hard to get into the story. Concept is great but  the current draft needs a lot of TLC

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4 hours ago, arsimms said:

I agree with him. I don't know if it is formatting error or what but right now the words are so jumbled together w/o spacing between them that it's hard to get into the story. Concept is great but  the current draft needs a lot of TLC

I wonder f it has something to do with what ur trying to read the story on. I'm reading on my cell and am not coming across any of the problems u and the other reader are. 

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On 8/1/2017 at 10:41 PM, Dahawk said:

What makes it unreadable to you? 

I am reading it on an iPad the there are no spaces or between many of the words. 

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I am not sure what to do to help you starboardtack, i used the format thing when i uploaded this chapter. But I am trying my friend.

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Well, I just tried the first chapter, and I can see spaces where they ought to be, but despite that, something is screwing up my narrator making a lot of the words run together.  Very distracting so I gave up half-way through.  I will try reading without the narration, although that is hard and tiring for me now.  I'm using my desktop pc with Win 10, which is a year old and pretty darn good.  A friend reported losing formatting on one of his stories, could that have happened due to the upgrade recently?

I write my stuff using Word 2013 and it posts fine, and so did stuff with Google Docs when I used to do it that way when I started--clueless otherwise, sorry.

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I just read all 10 chapters, I cried and felt the heartache and sadness but also the overwhelming love. I can relate to some of the emotions as I work in a police department at a local university, This story is a roller coaster for your emotions and very well written. I am looking forwarded to reading about some happy times. Thank you for writing this.   

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14 hours ago, Boybig007 said:

I just read all 10 chapters, I cried and felt the heartache and sadness but also the overwhelming love. I can relate to some of the emotions as I work in a police department at a local university, This story is a roller coaster for your emotions and very well written. I am looking forwarded to reading about some happy times. Thank you for writing this.   

Thank you @Boybig007 i worked in emergency services for years and lost a few friends that were officers so I drew feelings from that. So glad you are enjoying the story.

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