Dahawk
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Well ive read this far today alone, and each chapternhad me in tears. Great writing, keep up the awesome work.
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Great chapter, and nice job writing in the back burn. Keep up the great work.
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Absolutely great chapter Gary, this story is absolutely awesome. Nice to see you continueing it. Patiently waiting for more.
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@Okiegrad thanks for reading, working through some ideas for next chapter before i put it to word, and get it ready to go to my editor/beta reader.
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I am not sure what to do to help you starboardtack, i used the format thing when i uploaded this chapter. But I am trying my friend.
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Wow, Dustin cant catch a break at all. The poor kid just keeps getting utterly destroyed, I feel so bad especially after it seems like he starts to accept things a little. Billy seems to be making strides also. Great writing, can't wait to get the next installment.
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@Wesley8890 I have to admit I made myself cry writing the first two chapters. I have experienced this type of funeral multiple times, and my heart broke each time. Thank you for continueing ready the story. @Bndmetl Thank you for your help and patience with my story.
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Everything Changes Cast: Aaron Hawke - Alex and Brendan's Dad (k9 Police officer) Mary Hawke - Alex and Brendan's Mom (Trauma Surgeon) Alex Hawke - Brendan's 15 yo brother Brendan Hawke - 13 yo Derek Garrison - Aaron Hawke's friend (Police Officer) Cameron Garrison - 13 yo friend of Brendan and Alex Joey Snyder - Alex's friend 15 yo --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2: Lay Me
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Good chapter, liked how his old school mates got a suprise reunion. Keep up the great work.
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Loved this story from the beginning Cia. Characters were easy to love, other than Dane's sperm donor.
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Going to submit chapter 2 in a little bit.
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Thanks for all the comments, we seem to know that the formatting issue is when its trying to be used by apple systems.
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By chance are using a mac operated system?
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I will take that as a compliment from you. I am a big fan of yours, so to hear I moved you means a lot. Rob
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What makes it unreadable to you?
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Thank you for your comment, jaysalmn did you find the story hard to read? I had a post stating he couldn't understand the story.
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Thank you for your comment, jaysalmn did you find the story hard to read? I had pm complaining he couldn't understand the story.
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Everything Changes Turbulent Times: Brendan was sitting at home while his mom and dad are at work, and god knows where Alex is at. Brendan thought to himself, “I can clean up a bit and see if Cameron is home and maybe he can come over.” Brendan worried if Cam would still like him if he ever found out that he is gay, shrugging his shoulders he headed off to the bathroom to take a shower. After Brendan showered, he stood at the mirror staring at himself admiring how much
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This is a story of how everything changes when Cameron's dad which is a police officer is killed, and he has nobody to turn to other than his best friend Brendan.
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Great writing. Anton always seems to have chaos going on around him. Hope Neal is okay.
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Well, sorta developing into a scary situation once a person with weapons become involved. Definitely would be a good time for Frankie to be living near by. Guns bring a whole new dynamic to a situation, we can only hope for the best. Bill you remain one of my favorite authors, keep up the great work.
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Another great chapter. Derek finally pulled his head out of his as, before Liam had to kill him. The family outing was great. Keep up the marvelous work.
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Highly recommend this story to all readers, you will absolutely be drawn into the lives of Kyp and Gibson.
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Well Brett really was only trying to help Dustin. Hopefully some of Dustin's pain from being raped, can start to heal and he can get his life back together. Billy needs to man up for both Brett and Dustin.
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Great writing, Mitchell is making a name fore himself. Hope he finds happiness in military.
