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I can't tell you how happy I was to finally get to read this concluding chapter of CJ's lifestory! I also can't fathom how I missed this chapter. I have always wondered if CJ did become the POTUSA. Imagine my surprise when I was strolling through pass notifications and noticed this "Hail to the Chief 11.CJ By Carlos Hazday The long-awaited conclusion to the CJ Series. I remembered reading your Prologue but I can't remember if there was a chapter 1. Janaury 20, 2041. Were the Prologue and Chapter 1 posted on different dates? A bit of sleuthing turned up you dated your Prologue 3 April but posted it on GA on 24 April. Chapter Janaury 20, 2041 was posted to GA on 5 July. If that's correct, its no wonder I missed it because I was travelling in China. I had some initial problems accessing my internet. Thank you for a happy concluding chapter for a great epic story. Using the reporters' commentaries to update on members of the Squad was a nice touch. Reading through your comments I believe you are dropping hints as to a Squad Junior and their saga; filling in the gaps with other members of the Squad before writing about the intervening years....Wow there is so much to look forward to and I certainly can't wait. Of course you have already started with Singer (Chipper) which I am following....Thank you and God Bless!!
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You know the feeling you get after a delicious and exquisitely presented 5 course dinner with wonderful company in a cozy little french restaurant by the sea? That is how I am feeling right now - totally satiated and completely relaxed basking in soft candle light. LOL.
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Run, Baby, Run (But Then Come Back)
andrew35 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Run, Baby, Run (But Then Come Back)
I am so immersed with your characters that sometimes I am not sure if it was something I heard in real life, something I read or something I dreamt!! I am living life in multiply dimensions and time lines. To know all your stories have happy endings is like a balm to my heart and soul. This one will be no difference when I read the epilogue. Thank you very much for sharing. They made my life a little fuller π. -
Ah, the journey resumes... Thanks Carlos
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Traitorous Little Bastard
andrew35 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Traitorous Little Bastard
πππ I need a few few more more chapters!! The end can't be around the corner!! -
Donβt Say Youβve Never Done Anything For Me
andrew35 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Donβt Say Youβve Never Done Anything For Me
Wow. Can't wait to see the outcome David vs. Goliath -
Drinks And Trolls Wonβt Break My Bones
andrew35 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Drinks And Trolls Wonβt Break My Bones
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The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
andrew35 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Mother Of All Misunderstandings
No. the huge mistake is not about Heath meeting up with the big kahuna. The huge mistake was not telling Aidan about his meeting with his boss. And I don't see why Aidan should get his knickers twisted. Afterall, he was asked to get Heath to meet his boss. And also Heath made it known to Aidan the reason he wanted to meet his boos i.e. to determine if his boss or his company was homophobic. Plus Heath also made it clear why no one from his company has ever wanted to meet up and also why the company didn't send someone higher up to handle his contract. And yes, welcome to the real world. Hard work is not always recognised or appreciated. We could always welcome a little bit of help. And once Aidan has cooled down sufficiently and ran through his "mind-talking" he would see nothing wrong esp after Harry ; Heath's manager (yes, I would think that is whom Heath would have called) has explained to Aidan the whole conversation that took place during the meeting. Yes, I think Heath called Harry to go and explain to Aidan what actually transpired during the meeting. The meeting was not about Aidan's promotion (which was what Aidan thought). Rather Aidan's promotion was just to sweeten the deal. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! -
Chapter 18: Haleyβs StoryβThe Road to Herten
andrew35 commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 18: Haleyβs StoryβThe Road to Herten
I just re-read this story and I was just as enthralled as the first time I read it. I am going to re-read all your stories. Thank you. -
Thank you very much for another awesome story!!!
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I will certainly look out for him!!!
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Carlos, THANK YOU VERY MUCH for this wonderful wonderful epic story! CJ has been very much a part of my life since your story begun. This ending will certain leave a "hole" in my life. Your forever fan, Andrew
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Haha. I was wondering when you would bring Sebastian back!! And I was right to have my suspicions all along. Glad I was correct hehe. Thanks for a lovely story. This is not the end I hope.
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Sometimes, Itβs All About The Plates
andrew35 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Sometimes, Itβs All About The Plates
Gosh, such a conniving evil prick; a beautifully wrapped package of dog poo!! Yuck. On the other hand, a rough diamond wrapped in brown paper. Hahaha. Well, love the contrast. Love your writing. Wish you and yours and everyone here a wonderful NEW YEAR!! -
Wow. What a way to end the year. Haha. Wish you and yours and everyone a wonderful holiday and New Year!!
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Thank you for the start of a new adventure!! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to all
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Definitely LOVE LOVE LOVE thru and thru!! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year everyone
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Aaah. So my premonition was right to not start reading Hooking Trout when it was first posted...πππ
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Iris...a faerie...? Interesting!! And Grandma Asta sounds like a witch And Rory is a Special One π. And Villian coming next chapter!! **groan...π. Hope soonest π
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Dang. About bloody time. I about almost got goose length neck. LOL
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Surprise indeed for this extra!! Thank you so much. Hope you will continue to give us more little extra π
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Welcome back and hope you are feeling much much better.
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