Blue Dhalia

Yet again, Brandon gets the "more than lust" description.. everyone else, it's all about sex and hormones. Lol. So sweet. 💙

I love the way that Billy talked about Simon's neck! I have to admit.. that's one of my main weaknesses with a guy. If he has a sexy neck and nice jawline... I'm doomed! Lol! 😂😂😂❤

Yet again.. every single time he talks about Brandon.. it's so beautiful the way he describes him or the conversation.. it just makes you fall in love! 💙

Very accurate description with the school factory section! I've felt like that for years! 😂😂

You really have no idea!! The way you write about these characters.. it blows my mind how I get drawn in to feeling like I'm there with them! I've been there mentally with Billy through the good bad and horrific. I think it's mostly because you make everything so openly relatable. You really are a gifted author man. I just wish it were a movie or show honestly. ❤💙💜💚💛🖤😁

I seriously just love how he talks about Brandon.. he holds him in such higher regard than anyone else. It's the little things that make things in life truly beautiful. 💙

Good GOD he worries more about pre-date prep than i do... and it isn't even a date!! Lol

I have felt that day of "fuck Billy" many many times in my life! It truly sucks more than anything. I truly love how Billy talks about Brandon throughout this entire story ❤ I feel like it's me talking about guys I have fallen for in the past. I relate so much with that side of Billy.. not really so much with how he feels about others.. but big time with that one special romantic part of him. That part is my favorite aspect of his character. You are a gifted author man.. I really can't get enough of this story (obviously..this is my 3rd time going through the entire story just dying for the new chapters to come) thank you so much for these characters! It's been wonderful having so many emotions pulled out of me that I normally could never let myself have! I know it sounds weird.. but, it heals things inside that I can't explain. ❤💜💙💚💛🖤

I really wish I could find my "pretty Brandon". 😔

It's amazing to me how much I relate to the way his life goes through a lot of issues similar to the way mine went. All the way to the girls asking my friends questions about me because some random girl liked me. Lol. Those poor girls.

Starting over for the third time.. you make it so addictive!!! 💙

Please let the problems between Brandon and Billy be in the past and never return!! I can't go through all that sadness again.. the way Billy talked about Brandon and how he felt while they were apart.. every single word killed me inside. I just can't deal with it again! I can handle a lot of the other issues.. just not that! Also, I had a feeling that Garrett and Taylor were going to turn out being a jawdrop moment. Basically due to the fact that Taylor got nicer and much happier when Garrett was around.. And I've had that problem in the past where the guy I thought was after me ended up just being nice. Hopefully it will be a happy ending for their story. And I really miss Brandon being in the story more. Not even the sexual aspects.. just the romantic parts.. you have him hanging out with his ex every single Monday.. but he just vanishes the rest of the time. They just never see each other.. it was so beautiful reading their romance in the beginning and then for a little while when they finally got back together.. but now, Billy has almost no interaction with him at all! Sorry, I'm just really a bit sensitive at the moment.. I thought I found someone amazing.. my very own perfect guy.. And after him spending a month getting to know me and sweeping me off my feet.. he finally asked me to be his man.. but, he broke up with me less than a day later. I'm alone again. After 8 years of being alone.. I didn't even get one full day. I'm sorry.

Please don't be a shoulder for Ian to cry on.. that will cause Bobby to go psycho stupid. Take Brandon to the party as your date. Work out compromise with your mom. Get over Mr. Franks.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give us more!!!!!!!

Ok.. so with Jamie.. he and Billy are friends, but Jamie and Brandon are friends too.. and both Billy and Brandon spent A LOT of time crushing on Jamie before meeting each other... so, I think they should both go to his party together as a way of letting it all out that they are together. Great idea before school starts back.. that way, any b.s. can clear up before so it will have less chaos in school. As far as his mother.. I believe they should come to a compromise.. Billy doesn't like her being with her guy and she doesn't like Billy having a boyfriend.. but just like she said her new man was helping her with all that has happened in her life.. Look at all of the things that Brandon has healed in Billy's life. If they would just sit down and have a calm and rational discussion about how each of them need their guys and why, then compromise with each other... maybe they can have a nice little dinner for all four of them to get to know each other. Mom giving Brandon a chance as well as Billy giving Mr. Franks a chance. They are both being unfair with each other. They both deserve love.. and they both need their guys. If they love each other, they have to compromise and accept each other's needs. Besides, with all the crap they are both going through.. They need each other too. Great chapter man.. like always ❤ Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Hopefully it will be happy (at least for Billy, his mother, Brandon and Mr.Franks.)

Ok.. so with Jamie.. he and Billy are friends, but Jamie and Brandon are friends too.. and both Billy and Brandon spent A LOT of time crushing on Jamie before meeting each other... so, I think they should both go to his party together as a way of letting it all out that they are together. Great idea before school starts back.. that way, any b.s. can clear up before so it will have less chaos in school. As far as his mother.. I believe they should come to a compromise.. Billy doesn't like her being with her guy and she doesn't like Billy having a boyfriend.. but just like she said her new man was helping her with all that has happened in her life.. Look at all of the things that Brandon has healed in Billy's life. If they would just sit down and have a calm and rational discussion about how each of them need their guys and why, then compromise with each other... maybe they can have a nice little dinner for all four of them to get to know each other. Mom giving Brandon a chance as well as Billy giving Mr. Franks a chance. They are both being unfair with each other. They both deserve love.. and they both need their guys. If they love each other, they have to compromise and accept each other's needs. Besides, with all the crap they are both going through.. They need each other too. Great chapter man.. like always ❤ Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Hopefully it will be happy (at least for Billy, his mother, Brandon and Mr.Franks.)

Excellent chapter!! I love that it was mostly centered on just the two of them. The relationship building and mature way they worked through a situation that normally resulted in a fight.. was beautifully written. I can't wait to see what you come up with next! 💞 thank you for another wonderful chapter! 🖤💜💙

More... PLEASE! MORE! I'm dying here!!!!!

First of all... Excellent chapter! All other things aside.. I love that Billy and Brandon are back together finally!! And that they are doing so well, and they're so amazing and sweet how they talk to and about each other!! Can't wait for the next chapter❤💜💙💚💛

First, I have to say thank you so very very very much for the new chapter!!!! Now.. I'm hoping that Taylor is going to surprise us all by truly being good to his adorable admirer.. maybe even REALLY shocked us by asking him out! 😁 thank you again so very much for the new chapter! I hope more comes soon ❤💜💙💚💛💗

That kid so mentally jumbled right now he doesn't know whether scratch his watch or wind his butt! 😂😂😂💗

I love the beautiful way he described Brandon's beauty. That's the kind of love that I dream of finding.

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Reading this all again for the second time! Couldn't help it! I love this story so much!! True perfection!!!! Please give us more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh trust me.. he has already won me over in Billy's perspective.. won't say more since some people may not have read that far. I can't wait to see more from you both.. you guys keep me foaming at the mouth for more!!!